- BlackFrost
- Feb 6, 2008
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Have you figured it out yet?
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Oh god what have I done. I have constructed a poem. I have not even attempted this, ever, at all, in any serious fashion.
But it's done. After two separate rewrites, it's done. I hope you're happy, Thunderdome. This is what your have wrought from my mind. I had to do it, though. I knew if I chickened out on poetry week that I'd chicken out on every week thereafter, and I can't have that. I was born to be here, in the Thunderdome. If nothing else, this experience has given me newfound respect for those who try to write poetry seriously.
Enjoy. Jerks.
Flash Rule: Poem must be an acrostic poem that spells out "ONLY DEATH IS REAL"
Word Count: 377
Mountain Climber
code:Over the mountaintop, I gaze down below me at the rocky path below,
a gentle breeze rises up to greet me, and it beckons me to press on.
Never have I considered that the hard part would ever reach an end, and that
now the rest of the way would be as gentle as that breeze; a faster path, for sure.
Looking over my shoulder before making my descent, I wonder about the paths I could
have taken before; the ones that could have lead to much more elegant peaks.
Yet I cannot turn back now, for once a path is decided it must then be completed,
for as you climb the rocky path, it becomes trickier; retreat is nigh impossible.
Descending is indeed much easier than the climb, yet I try not to get too confident,
getting a little reckless could make me fall; yet I cannot help but hurry downward.
Even as I start to falter, I do not skip a beat, for I know the journey will soon be
over; I’ll finally get to rest.
At last, the end appears to be coming: I can see some trees; I’m almost there!
Trotting downward evermore, the path gets steeper as I go.
Hurry downward, hurry on, I must return home very soon.
Incredibly, the path is flattening now, but soon it ends abruptly with a cliff.
Stopping at the edge, I take a glance down below, into the trees that now seem
further away than ever.
Realizing that this is the end, the path I have chosen has indeed
led to this, the final descent, the easiest part of the climb but also
the hardest, I ponder: was there another path that went for longer?
Everywhere I could have gone, every choice I could have made, they
swim in my mind as I gaze below, but alas, there’s no turning back;
besides, they all have the same end, no matter how short the path.
After everything is done with, after every choice is made, there is only
one point where the path is always the same; they all lead to this very
cliff; I realize, then, as I hurl to the ground, that the old adage is true:
Life’s a bitch,
and then you die.
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