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thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr

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thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib
This one's from a while back.


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr

KinkyJohn
Sep 19, 2002

That's some nice light you got there

underage at the vape shop
May 11, 2011

by Cyrano4747

Is it just me or is she a little cross eyed? I like the pair of pictures though, was she happy?

8th-snype
Aug 28, 2005

My office is in the front room of a run-down 12 megapixel sensor but the rent suits me and the landlord doesn't ask many questions.

Dorkroom Short Fiction Champion 2012


Young Orc

A Saucy Bratwurst posted:

Is it just me or is she a little cross eyed? I like the pair of pictures though, was she happy?

Now all of a sudden you are a fuckin' optometrist too?

underage at the vape shop
May 11, 2011

by Cyrano4747
it looks like shes looking at something closer to her face than the camera you jerk

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

A Saucy Bratwurst posted:

Is it just me or is she a little cross eyed? I like the pair of pictures though, was she happy?

I hope she's happy! She hasn't replied yet, so she might have gouged out her eyes in shame.

bobmarleysghost
Mar 7, 2006



A Saucy Bratwurst posted:

it looks like shes looking at something closer to her face than the camera you jerk

Not at all actually

Spedman
Mar 12, 2010

Kangaroos hate Hasselblads

bobmarleysghost posted:

Not at all actually

Yeah, she seems to be focused on something fairly close just above the camera

spookygonk
Apr 3, 2005
Does not give a damn

Spedman posted:

Yeah, she seems to be focused on something fairly close just above the camera

The cameraman?

Spedman
Mar 12, 2010

Kangaroos hate Hasselblads

spookygonk posted:

The cameraman?

Probably not unless they're using a tripod

Twenties Superstar
Oct 24, 2005

sugoi
maybe its a who gives a poo poo

KinkyJohn
Sep 19, 2002

Maybe the discoloration under her eyes need some slight touch up, but her eyes are fine

Spedman
Mar 12, 2010

Kangaroos hate Hasselblads

Twenties Superstar posted:

maybe its a who gives a poo poo

MrBlandAverage
Jul 2, 2003

GNNAAAARRRR

Twenties Superstar posted:

maybe its a who gives a poo poo

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

KinkyJohn posted:

Maybe the discoloration under her eyes need some slight touch up, but her eyes are fine

I was wondering if anyone else would see that. This is one of the few shots of the run where my flash didn't fire. I like this expression the best, but without the fill light, those discolorations stand out (the flash filled them in nicely). I'm not quite sure how to go about fixing them, but I'll gently caress with it a bit.



Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr

8th-snype
Aug 28, 2005

My office is in the front room of a run-down 12 megapixel sensor but the rent suits me and the landlord doesn't ask many questions.

Dorkroom Short Fiction Champion 2012


Young Orc

thetzar posted:

I was wondering if anyone else would see that. This is one of the few shots of the run where my flash didn't fire. I like this expression the best, but without the fill light, those discolorations stand out (the flash filled them in nicely). I'm not quite sure how to go about fixing them, but I'll gently caress with it a bit.


Just use the healing brush on an empty layer, go over them with good skin tone as a source and then fade to taste in the opacity slider.

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

8th-snype posted:

Just use the healing brush on an empty layer, go over them with good skin tone as a source and then fade to taste in the opacity slider.

Thanks! I thought it was going to require something much more complicated, but this worked quite well. Revised, and a new image, below.


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr


Just Relax by Jason Martin, on Flickr

8th-snype
Aug 28, 2005

My office is in the front room of a run-down 12 megapixel sensor but the rent suits me and the landlord doesn't ask many questions.

Dorkroom Short Fiction Champion 2012


Young Orc
That's imho the easiest and most natural looking way to retouch skin.

McMadCow
Jan 19, 2005

With our rifles and grenades and some help from God.
N in a Black Dress by Jason, on Flickr

iSheep
Feb 5, 2006

by R. Guyovich

iSheep fucked around with this message at 06:20 on Feb 7, 2017

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

I love this, but I wish the bleed on the right was cropped out.

iSheep
Feb 5, 2006

by R. Guyovich

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr

iSheep
Feb 5, 2006

by R. Guyovich

iSheep fucked around with this message at 06:21 on Feb 7, 2017

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib

Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr

bobmarleysghost
Mar 7, 2006




To me this shot would be a pass.

It's good technically - light, pretty girl, in focus, etc. But it falls flat after that cursory look, nothing in it to hold my interest.
The composition is also off. You've positioned her in the rule of thirds, and she is looking away out of the frame, and it doesn't work.

Also the graffiti background in an urban setting is pretty played out.

8th-snype
Aug 28, 2005

My office is in the front room of a run-down 12 megapixel sensor but the rent suits me and the landlord doesn't ask many questions.

Dorkroom Short Fiction Champion 2012


Young Orc
Yeah that's a very "stock photography" looking portrait dude.

iSheep
Feb 5, 2006

by R. Guyovich
.

iSheep fucked around with this message at 06:51 on Jul 16, 2016

McMadCow
Jan 19, 2005

With our rifles and grenades and some help from God.
A at Home by Jason, on Flickr

burzum karaoke
May 30, 2003

diggin' the casual burn

Bang3r
Oct 26, 2005

killed me.
tore me to pieces.
threw every piece into a fire.
Fun Shoe
Figured this is close enough to a portrait!


State of Origin by bang3rachi, on Flickr

thetzar
Apr 22, 2001
Fallen Rib
All about that hat.


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr


Untitled by Jason Martin, on Flickr

ahleeshaa
Jan 24, 2007
"dicks"
Really blown away by most of the stuff posted in here. This is a poor contribution in comparison, but I'm an amateur and still learning and I'm pleased with it.


Untitled by Alysia Spencer, on Flickr

Erostratus
Jun 18, 2011

by R. Guyovich
This guy is my kindred spirit:

Roar at the Shore by Kyle Sonnenberg, on Flickr

Twenties Superstar
Oct 24, 2005

sugoi

Bang3r posted:

Figured this is close enough to a portrait!


State of Origin by bang3rachi, on Flickr

that's good

McMadCow
Jan 19, 2005

With our rifles and grenades and some help from God.
More work on my paper negative portrait series.

Disappearance by Jason, on Flickr

feigning interest
Jun 22, 2007

I just hate seeing anything go to waste.


Some guy who lives in a recreational vehicle with teenagers he's picked up and has an odd fascination with mushrooms

MrBlandAverage
Jul 2, 2003

GNNAAAARRRR

feigning interest posted:



Some guy who lives in a recreational vehicle with teenagers he's picked up and has an odd fascination with mushrooms

Okay, tell me more about how you came to be taking this photo.

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feigning interest
Jun 22, 2007

I just hate seeing anything go to waste.
Winnebago workshop had a pop-up show in Brooklyn the other day and he was there just hanging out with everyone. He was cool enough to show me around the winnebago and chat and let me take a few photos of him. Super nice guy! :shroom:

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