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Mradyfist
Sep 3, 2007

People that can eat people are the luckiest people in the world

Fooz posted:

Hm well I can't seem to get anyone in the world to Give me feedback, so I guess I'm on my own. I can sort of tell what's wrong, a dull or deadened timbre quality in some parts, or just a nasal sound, but I'm not sure about how to improve it.

Pitch is pretty good, and I can see where you're going when you slide up to a note, but practice it so it's absolutely perfect or it will sound like a fuckup. Also, it sounds like you've got a case of "singing accent" going on - it sounds like you're singing as if you're emulating someone singing. You're singing about a silly subject, but that doesn't mean you should make a silly voice while you do it. Treat swinging from the chandelier as a serious, life-or-death situation, even if your intention is to be funny there's not a lot of humor in singing lyrics in a funny voice.

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