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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > The Farm 2013. Flash Fiction and Snippets Critique Hub (<1000 Words)
 
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Maxwell Lord
Dec 12, 2008

I am drowning.
There is no sign of land.
You are coming down with me, hand in unlovable hand.

And I hope you die.

I hope we both die.

:smith:

Grimey Drawer
Is it wrong that my first reaction was "Why not zero gravity? Chopsticks would work just fine there! Better, even!"

I laughed. It's worth proceeding in this direction- there's definitely room for this kind of Woody Allen/Shouts and Murmurs sort of writing when it's done well.

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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > The Farm 2013. Flash Fiction and Snippets Critique Hub (<1000 Words)