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southpaugh posted:Wait is it gay I'll read it if its gay i love gay things yeah actually i'm pretty sure it was a paean to the homoeroticism of time travelling navy friendships
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The Brown Menace posted:the gently caress kind of last name is haustrumerda The lovely housewife?
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Jun 9, 2014 15:40
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serious post i like to read so someone tell me if this is any good
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Jun 9, 2014 15:45
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Its great, check it out and then read some menus and phone books you bibliophile
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Jun 9, 2014 15:49
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bigzak posted:serious post i like to read so someone tell me if this is any good it's more amusing than any post I've seen on SA today, that's a pretty low bar but if all your doing is wanking around here...
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Jun 9, 2014 15:50
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im a huge human being retard..... i love goonbooks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! friend of the family Balls!!!
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Jun 9, 2014 16:03
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Fandyien posted:the main characteristic of this book is its basically what children think is badass. cigarette smoking, cocaine-using badass ex-military time travelling sodomites go on a century-spanning adventure to have implied sex and beat up jerks. coming 2014. NihilismNow considered this as he sat around in his stained tank top. His head what still pounding from the events of last night. He snorted a line, lit a cigarette and finished off his neat glass of single malt scotch. "Suppose that is so" he said to no one in particular.
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Jun 9, 2014 16:07
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I love to read! Please check out my review of "loving the Mothman" and a bunch of other cryptid smut books on my goodreads page.
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Jun 9, 2014 16:11
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waitwhatno posted:this is the saddest thread in gbs
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Jun 9, 2014 16:21
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WarrenH posted:The book also has a terrible facebook page that has no content other then jokes I've cut and pasted from the forums. Other then jokes I've cut and pasted. You piece of poo poo. The average dumb human being online gets a free pass for mangling grammar but if you're going to pretend to be an author at least get the basics of the language down in the sentence you're using to pimp the trash that fell out of your rear end in a top hat.
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Jun 9, 2014 16:23
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jesus that facebook page depressed the hell out of me. so many posts and not a single like or comment to be seen
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TangentEnigma posted:Other then jokes I've cut and pasted. wow day crew sure is hostile. this guy is right though
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Jun 9, 2014 18:03
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Pick posted:did you remember to find-and-replace every instance where "Sam" or "Dean" is stuttered or something? i hate when people miss one and it's like "shove y-your b-big d-d-d-dick up my a-rear end, D-Jaden" holy poo poo
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Jun 9, 2014 18:07
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this e-book has sat, unread, in a throwaway email account of mine for like 2 or 3 years. there it shall remain.
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Jun 9, 2014 18:15
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I read the first two pages. Your writing style needs a lot of work, the narrative doesn't flow smoothly. Also I'm not a big fan of stories written in present progressive. Especially first person present progressive! 
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Pawn 17 posted:I read the first two pages. Your writing style needs a lot of work, the narrative doesn't flow smoothly. Also I'm not a big fan of stories written in present progressive. Especially first person present progressive! I stare at the message board before me, torn. I could say a number of wonderful things, each better than the last. A single misplaced word could catapult me to internet stardom, or bury my post in the cold, lonesome wasteland of the gas chamber. It is in that instant that I realize I cannot remain silent. My heart quivers with anticipation as my fingers fly across my keyboard, tiny superheros on their way to rid the world of pixelated evils. My journey takes seconds but it feels as if it has been hours. My heavy breathing subsides as I finish my prose, my passion. Grease slicks across my touchpad as I lever the tiny white arrow to the button marked "submit reply". Time stops. I press the right mouse key.
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