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Up to that point, I can honestly say that I had never given much thought as to what the insides of a giant horror bird would be like but I was still surprised to find that they consist of nothing more than eternal dark void that I have been floating in, a senseless mind separated from my body, for millennium beyond counting now at this point.
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my review for this story posted:This would have been a great story if the author had any sense of materials. I'm an expert Wikipedia editor (see my recent work on the Richard Dawkins article where I researched the history of nobel prizes for atheists. As you might imagine the history is sparse, but then so are the brains of the people who are not atheists which I also researched extensively and documented in a separate article) and I am certain that denim cannot grow. But in this story denim spreads! What is the author thinking?
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Ah I thought OP was planning stuff in advance to close the story while giving explanations to what the gently caress happened but nope. Why am I not surprised. Still: 55555555555
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Aug 17, 2014 04:04
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a starwar betamax posted:THE END oh my god 5
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Aug 17, 2014 04:35
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This is what I come here for.
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there's a reason youre one of my fav posters, thanks for the story and i hope you do another one or write a book i can buy soon
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good thread
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This story is the kind of good that people who claim that David Lynch's movies are good think that those movies are. But unlike David Lynch's obnoxious projects, this story is amazing.
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a starwar betamax posted:THE END Amazing. Riveting from beginning to end. Snak posted:This story is the kind of good that people who claim that David Lynch's movies are good think that those movies are. But unlike David Lynch's obnoxious projects, this story is amazing. Lynch is awesome and should direct the adaptation.
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a starwar betamax posted:Up to that point, I can honestly say that I had never given much thought as to what the insides of a giant horror bird would be like but I was still surprised to find that they consist of nothing more than eternal dark void that I have been floating in, a senseless mind separated from my body, for millennium beyond counting now at this point. how are you posting
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Aug 17, 2014 15:17
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Excellent.
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Aug 17, 2014 15:23
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Publish this as a Kindle e-book and I will buy it, for both me, and my friends and family.
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Epilogue: "Well if you get any new information, give me a call." said the detective as he slid his card across the restaurant table. I took a break from my coffee to glance down at it. "Det. Mars Gunts" it brandished in 14 point wide Helvetica. I then glanced back at him, just long enough to catch his I-know-it-was-you-punk stare. I cleared my throat. "Absolutely." I said cooly. The detective nodded, then turned around and began to leave the restaurant. I looked at his card again. The words on it changed like details always do in a dream. I sighed heavily and pulled my Mont Blanc out of my italian leather folio. I drew parenthesis around his name on the card. det(Mars Gumbo). The detective, almost out of the restaurant, immediately froze, contorted, and screamed electronically like when Neo touched that mirror that one time. With a poof, he was replaced by a large inanimate '0' that dropped onto the bistro floor amongst all the other diners, who were too preoccupied to care. I smirked to myself and finished off my coffee. "Looks like he was...rank deficient" Telemarchitect fucked around with this message at 17:59 on Aug 17, 2014 |
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I enjoyed how enjoyable this was to read. 5/5
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Thoroughly enjoyed the ride, almost as if the start, middle, and end were enjoyable thoroughly. I 5'd.
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Telemarchitect posted:Epilogue: ewww close and goldmine
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Aug 17, 2014 20:40
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clap. clap. clap. flap. flap clap.
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goldmine
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01011001 posted:ewww
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01011001 posted:close and goldmine
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Aug 18, 2014 12:46
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01011001 posted:close and goldmine
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darkwing cuck posted:this is kinda riley cool 01011001 posted:close and goldmine
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Aug 18, 2014 17:54
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Posting from the gold mine! (lock it fast)
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Good poo poo. OP gets some upgrades, thread goes to the Goldmine. Thanks, all.
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