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So two weekends ago I went to a yard sale and bought a few boxes of random office crap for about 20 bucks. In the bottom of the box was a bundle of loose papers that looked like they had just been chucked in there. About a reams' worth, about half water damaged. The print quality is pretty bad as well. I started reading them, and it's this guy's unfinished military thriller. I started scanning the pages in yesterday and uploading them to a blog I made for it because I feel like the world should see this man's work. The biggest issue is that the pages are out of order, and this dude only numbered about a quarter of them for some reason. I think this is either a first or rough draft, because most of the pages have notes or corrections. I wanted to make a thread to share it here as well- I thought someone might appreciate it as well. I present it without commentary. The scanning is slow going because my boss is a real dick and I don't have a scanner at home so I'm trying to sneak it in where I can. The blog is here: http://firemissionover.tumblr.com/ [timg]http://i.imgur.com/nYSnVej.jpg[/timg Ladydad fucked around with this message at 23:35 on Jul 28, 2016 |
# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:03 |
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# ? Mar 19, 2024 05:45 |
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I only read a few sentences but is this erotic military fiction where the main character fucks Oliver North's daughter?
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:05 |
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You did it sir! Amazing! - Shouted an afro american crewman
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:08 |
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Use of 2nd person, tisk tisk.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:08 |
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Indy posted:You did it sir! Amazing! - Shouted an afro american crewman possible title?
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:10 |
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Jerry Mumphrey posted:possible title? how about "the longest food"
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:12 |
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CharlestonJew posted:I only read a few sentences but is this erotic military fiction where the main character fucks Oliver North's daughter? the page i'm trying to scan now is a love scene and it talks about how is dick is as thick as a grenade
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:15 |
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"a snub-nosed .38 - a woman's weapon." Was it pink, too?
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:16 |
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CharlestonJew posted:I only read a few sentences but is this erotic military fiction where the main character fucks Oliver North's daughter? sometimes you have to settle when you can't get the real thing
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:16 |
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Sitrep: the excrement is hitting the spinning blade.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:17 |
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my internet laser defense initiative is in danger help
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:19 |
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dad gay. so what posted:how about "the longest food" the future is a long time away, but not as long as....the longest food
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:19 |
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We are like John Kennedy Toole's mother.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:19 |
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im horny and confused with a dick like a bomb, keep posting op
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:20 |
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Ladydad posted:the page i'm trying to scan now is a love scene and it talks about how is dick is as thick as a grenade Ahahhaahahahah
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:23 |
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Ladydad posted:the page i'm trying to scan now is a love scene and it talks about how is dick is as thick as a grenade Are we talking "pineapple" grenade or the old WWII German stick grenade?
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:24 |
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wow, poor melissa.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:28 |
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Mods please change my name to 'a afro-american crewman'
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:29 |
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Indy posted:You did it sir! Amazing! - Shouted an afro american crewman
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:29 |
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CynCyanide posted:"a snub-nosed .38 - a woman's weapon." Was it pink, too?
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:29 |
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Styled, but not faggy.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:30 |
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im yuri ogalev
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:31 |
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Post more OP.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:31 |
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sinking belle posted:Styled, but not faggy. another quality username righ here
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:33 |
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Ladydad posted:the page i'm trying to scan now is a love scene and it talks about how is dick is as thick as a grenade
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:33 |
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red alert: my pectorals are not being held at bay
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:42 |
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here-- did these on my lunch break
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:52 |
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lol "lithe"
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:54 |
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im fighting the muslo-european confederacy in my goon-battleship that smells like technology and piss
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:55 |
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pushed a sobbing note to author: melissa is your wife
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:57 |
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op what did you eat during your lunch break?
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:57 |
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god dammit OP
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 16:59 |
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:00 |
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Ratjaculation posted:op what did you eat during your lunch break? kale salad and some hummus + pita
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:00 |
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I've not had kale, but sounds like a good lunch - hope you enjoyed it
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:01 |
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quote:The smell of the 21st century battlefield was one of blood and technology. Computor chips and the earthly smell of unwashed woman; urine and hair. quote:Tom Kinkade
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:02 |
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computor
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:05 |
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I'm uncomfortable with how the nurse goes from "An Asian, possibly Chinese" to "The Chinese" in less than a paragraph. But I'm excited for the Space Mexicans to begin the invasion.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:06 |
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I want to believe this is real. I don't, but really it's art either way.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:09 |
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This is even better if you read it in Zapp Brannigan's voice.
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# ? Jul 27, 2016 17:12 |