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Hey guys, I'm an English major and I've been using video game reviews to help grow as a writer. I've found it a lot easier to write about something I enjoy and it's a great time killer. I would like to grab some critique so that I can better myself as a writer. Thank you all for your time. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NaZgJJuYTapnkT4iBP0weVcqJHtFMf1eS4Sqmyv8DL8/edit?usp=sharing https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C7dlH8_iIveRHnxQSIalZtt7vdM1ckcytYrIoqaEcos/edit?usp=sharing
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# ? Jun 25, 2015 03:33 |
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# ? Apr 19, 2024 11:59 |
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Everybody can edit the reviews you're posted, you should probably change the Google Docs settings before you'll just have the word PENIS written over and over. In general, there are quite a few errors (typos, missing commas, but also more serious stuff) and redundancies. I'll just post a few of them... quote:keeping the enemy in the air with a variety of moves that would keep them in a mid-air, juggled state quote:Mortal Kombat X switches between a cast of recurring characters as well as a newer generation of characters. quote:earthshattering quote:Netherrealm’s attempts to clean up both character proportions and outfits are incredibly noble quote:these towers lack the creativity and enjoyment quote:a gameplay stand point quote:that sets it apart from its piers quote:the games full plot kicks off in full
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# ? Jun 25, 2015 21:05 |
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Thank you so much for your time on this. I appreciate you taking the time to check over these pieces for me. This is exactly what I wanted as far a criticism goes and I'm happy to know I've got a lot I can better myself on.
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# ? Jun 25, 2015 22:07 |