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When I saw the warning I thought "yeah right how much worse can it get". I was so wrong.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 07:27 |
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I get the impression Clare's consent is assumed because she's basically Miranda's self insert and of course she wants her badass coaster boyfriend to arrive someday and give her her true coaster otherkin form.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 07:29 |
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Link to Part One on the previous page. Chapter 58 - No Trespassing Part Two of Two quote:
Does anyone outside the great state of Tennessee still use tin for industrial roofing? I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
Clare may have an awful scent, but only because she’s been spending time around you grotesque abominations. I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
Railrunner just saw Clare a moment ago. Why does he think Ironwheel might be with Clare? Is he a moron (the answer is yes), or does Ironwheel have magic teleportation powers (the answer is hopefully yes)? I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
How is she “telling the truth” and “ignorant” at the same time? I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fencing: Fencing is the sport of fighting with swords. “Claws” =/= “Swords”. I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
Railrunner has fire-bending and lightning-bending and metal-bending and blood-bending and “concussion beams” and “disintegration rays” and the ability to “descend upwards”, and the power to “grow more claws” is nevertheless astonishing to his feeble, feeble mind. I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
“Restraints vibrating in anger”. I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
“Sight like a dragon” can, it seems, be disrupted by flour. Even if that were the case, why can’t Freakshow use her roller coaster power to “hear anything and everything”? Shouldn’t the roller coaster ability to “Predict when things will happen, except death” and “Sense trouble” enable her to dodge Railrunner’s attacks? I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
Why are there “giant five ton gas tanks” in a “cake factory”? Does “cake manufacturing” require such massive amounts of power in addition to the regular energy grid? Why haven’t those gas tanks been removed or emptied after the factory closed down? I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
I want to emphasize that Miranda Leek equates “pure bred” to “good” and “mixed breed” to evil. I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
“Occult” =/= “Hidden” in this context. You can’t just take a thesaurus and grab the first synonym at random! I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
Why would a roller coaster bother with guns when they have claws and teeth and X-bending? I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
Freakshow is apparently trying to provoke Railrunner into sparing her life. Her mistake lies in thinking that Railrunner is a “heroic” character. I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. quote:
To conclude, I hate this book and I hate Railrunner and I hate Thunderbark and I hate everything they stand for. JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 01:33 on Jun 25, 2013 |
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"Her" in that sentence was Freakshow. Also, I concur.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 08:20 |
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alcharagia posted:"Her" in that sentence was Freakshow. I know it was meant to refer to Freakshow - I was playing on Miranda Leek's confusing word placement. quote:
JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 08:29 on Jun 24, 2013 |
# ? Jun 24, 2013 08:26 |
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quote:The comment made revenge flow though my veins, but still I did not reply. This slayed me. But not as much as JWKS's new avatar and avatar text. quote:I quickly read Freakshow’s mind, she was actually telling the truth. Her ignorant words made me angrier by the second. I can't believe I missed that, but Railrunner now has the power to read minds. Iced Cocoa fucked around with this message at 09:55 on Jun 24, 2013 |
# ? Jun 24, 2013 09:13 |
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I think I have no opinions on this story. It's like it forms a precision clot to that area of my brain. I know it exists and that it induces pain, but these are facts. Is fear an opinion? Because I'm scared for the arse end of my generation if this is what a 17 year old girl wrote and the same woman five years later thinks, "Just needs a bit of tidying. No major problems with the plot or social implications." The crap I wrote five years ago is sealed in a concrete vault for the sake of new, better ideas. Ones that don't hurt humanity. Iced Cocoa posted:This slayed me. But not as much as JWKS's new avatar and avatar text. Lllllllllllllllllladycoasters. ...son of a bitch, why didn't I think of that half an hour ago?
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 09:35 |
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The Deviations posted:I think I have no opinions on this story. It's like it forms a precision clot to that area of my brain. I know it exists and that it induces pain, but these are facts. Being a good writer requires a sense of crushing insecurity major enough to make you you obsessively pick over your work to make it perfect but not major enough that you give up and jump off the top of a multistorey carpark. It's a difficult balancing act. ETA: Of course, another problem is that she's demented and wants to be an anthro roller coaster. attackbunny fucked around with this message at 10:36 on Jun 24, 2013 |
# ? Jun 24, 2013 10:29 |
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Meh. I read smut fanfic today, I can handle Clare being ShadowtraaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Bleh. I hope the benevolent dictator survives in some way. Let's just pretend Ironwheel is Detective Black and therefore immune to death. Or they're brothers, or something. But still immune to death. That's totally a rollercoaster power.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 10:51 |
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You know how the chaos space marines yell "I can feel the Warp overtaking me! It is a good pain!" and all that? I now know how that feels thanks to this book. Here we go everybody! Strap yourselves in because we're gonna our way to wanton slaughter and co-dependent domestic abuse! Really though, they're not even going to ask Clare if she wants to become a roller coaster? And OF COURSE Railrunner gets to choose Dreggon posted:ShadowtraaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA JWKS please refer to Shadowtrack as such when she makes her appearance. Maybe a few less gonks though.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 18:43 |
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You know that flour had to be just full of insects. Miranda Leeks posted:Merrylegs looked over to where I was occult... I mean, we've seen miracles happen through Miranda not understanding how Thesauruses are supposed to work but daaaaaaamn. JosephWongKS posted:“Restraints vibrating in anger”. I hope we never lose sight of one thing: that as excremental as this book gets, it will never not be amazing when things that would be rote and boring in a supernatural romance/guy learns he's the savior of a magical land/guy learns he's not a human but a magical being with awesome powers/werewolf/dragonkin story are applied to friggin' rollercoasters. Rahonavis fucked around with this message at 15:28 on Jun 25, 2013 |
# ? Jun 24, 2013 19:17 |
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my dad posted:Speculation related to the spoilered stuff: I have this horrible feeling that Clare is the, er, fuckdoll. JosephWongKS posted:2. Solid confirmation that Clare turns into Shadowtrack at the end of the book I hate being right.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 19:35 |
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Very well, with that spoiler out of the way, I can get this out of the way. Vertigo, the sequel of Twisted! Since it's not going to be published anytime soon, I decided to find all the little snippets and references to it and see if I can figure out the whole plot in it. I think I came pretty close as there was much information to be had. Unfortunately most of the deviations that had that information have been put in storage, so that I can't link to any sources on DA. But I did manage to save the images and text before that since I knew the purge was coming. The text will be linked at a pastebin space in the end of the post. Vertigo will not really spoil the rest of Twisted! with exception of one thing which you can probably predict anyway. This is not fanfiction, it's estimated guess at what Vertigo will be about. Some scenes may be out of order, there will be some filling in the gaps, but you can check the pastebin for sources. Vertigo will begin with a ball. Railrunner is having a ball in the city of Cirwann, and there are several people there. Railrunner will manage to actually get drunk, and decides to ditch everyone so he can have alone time with Shadowtrack, his mate. Commence the whole "makeout and massage" thing! When Railrunner and Shadowtrack rejoin the party, some moment will pass until there is an assassination attempt on Railrunner. It's an army of Fallen who pledge allegiance to Darkrail, someone Railrunner has no idea who is. Railrunner will go into slaughter mode until the army is forced to retreat, and he goes into the sewers to hunt them down. When Railrunner has dealt with the stragglers, he'll ask Thunderbark just who this Darkrail is. Thunderbark will say that he's an evil undead roller coaster who will appear every blood moon, and he'll apologize for not keeping track of time and not warn Railrunner of the impending danger. Darkrail will have to do a lethal crash during a blood moon in the real world so he can manifest in the Amusement Park Between. He'll carry a deadly disease called Vertigo, and he'll spread it around to kill everyone in Amusement Park Between. It has 100% fatality rate. So Railrunner figures out quickly where Darkrail will be in the human world to do that crash or whatever he needs to do to get to Amusement Park Between. He'll only allow Thunderbark to join him, but he'll have a head start using his red-only portal power to get to Coaster Island. Too bad he's a bit early. So Railrunner waits in a roller coaster storage building, waiting for the blood moon to rise and for Darkrail to come. In the nighttime, Railrunner goes on a prowl, and encounters police. I don't think I need to speculate what happens to it even though it is never said. Thunderbark arrives just in time, and Railrunner and Thunderbark await Darkrail's arrival. But Darkrail will prove too much and bite Railrunner, infecting him with Vertigo. You know what, there are too many pictures alone in this post, and this is Part 1 (of four) of Vertigo. I'll stop now and type the rest later. Which means no pastebin link right now, but when I actually finish this, or when JWKS finishes reviewing the book before I get the chance to finish. It's also dinnertime. And does anyone actually want the rest? It has annoying ferris wheel giving Railrunner riddles, a cat roller coaster, anger management issues that is actually a very important plot point and maybe Angeltrack
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 19:56 |
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According to Wikipedia, the blood moon is the full moon following the harvest moon. So shouldn't there be one every September or October? I can only assume that Ironwheel, as a wise and benevolent leader, was taking steps to keep Darkrail away.Iced Cocoa posted:anger management issues that is actually a very important plot point
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 20:30 |
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attackbunny posted:According to Wikipedia, the blood moon is the full moon following the harvest moon. So shouldn't there be one every September or October? I can only assume that Ironwheel, as a wise and benevolent leader, was taking steps to keep Darkrail away. I took it that it was a lunar eclipse, which makes the moon red. attackbunny posted:Anger management issues that don't exist just because Miranda thinks psychopathic rages are badass? I don't believe you. Prove it. Miranda Leek posted:Railrunner and Shadowtrack have been in love even before they were both transformed into twisted roller coasters (living roller coasters that reside in Amusement Park Between and you will find out how they changed in my book Twisted) In the sequel Vertigo, Railrunner begins to have...problems, horrendous displays through his unpredictable temper. Railrunner's temper is not ordinary like any other coasters. No, it is some sort of powerful force linked to him being a red. (you will find out what this is called once vertigo is released) His "power" is so severe that if angered to the breaking point, he could destroy both himself and Amusement Park Between. This has made Shadowtrack even more close to him despite the danger that she could endure. Her love seems to be the only thing that soothes him after any episode.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 20:43 |
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I think if you're afraid for your life and trying to beg your opponent to spare you, sneering about how much fun you had murdering their mothers is probably counter-productive. Self-critiquing, you could say. Okay, all other problems with Leek's works aside, I loving love that license plate.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 21:19 |
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Did you know that whilst rollercoasters don't have sex they basically still have orgasms?quote:Note: Not going to put a mature tag on this since there is no actual er..."intercourse" here. If you know my coasters, they can't reproduce on their own. FairyNuff fucked around with this message at 21:33 on Jun 24, 2013 |
# ? Jun 24, 2013 21:30 |
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Iced Cocoa posted:I took it that it was a lunar eclipse, which makes the moon red. quote:Railrunner and Shadowtrack have been in love even before they were both transformed into twisted roller coasters (living roller coasters that reside in Amusement Park Between and you will find out how they changed in my book Twisted) In the sequel Vertigo, Railrunner begins to have...problems, horrendous displays through his unpredictable temper. Railrunner's temper is not ordinary like any other coasters. No, it is some sort of powerful force linked to him being a red. (you will find out what this is called once vertigo is released) His "power" is so severe that if angered to the breaking point, he could destroy both himself and Amusement Park Between. This has made Shadowtrack even more close to him despite the danger that she could endure. Her love seems to be the only thing that soothes him after any episode. Ugh, it's even worse than I thought. You win, Iced Cocoa. quote:Did you know that whilst rollercoasters don't have sex they basically still have orgasms?
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 21:59 |
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In all those drawings of RailRunner, I always see his front car seats as just like peering over to check out what he's up to.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 22:41 |
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How can she possibly think her art has improved? Compare any of the old images to any of the new ones - there were actual backgrounds, the roller coasters had full bodies, and their teeth could feasibly fit into their mouths. Now they've all been diluted down to abs, giant arms, and insufferably smug wedge-heads that sprout fangs everywhere when they need to get dramatic.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 23:21 |
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Voltin Bolt posted:How can she possibly think her art has improved? Compare any of the old images to any of the new ones - there were actual backgrounds, the roller coasters had full bodies, and their teeth could feasibly fit into their mouths. Now they've all been diluted down to abs, giant arms, and insufferably smug wedge-heads that sprout fangs everywhere when they need to get dramatic. I totally agree with you.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 23:28 |
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Iced Cocoa posted:Very well, with that spoiler out of the way, I can get this out of the way. A-hahaha, holy poo poo, that cigar-chomping Ferris wheel! Yes, please post more of the sequel because I strongly doubt we'll ever convince anyone to read it once it's published.
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# ? Jun 24, 2013 23:30 |
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Vonder, alcharagia do you have an email address I can contact you at? It's needed for a... secret project. I might have also already contacted Mercedes about it, and he might have said yes.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 00:10 |
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The prospect of Clare turning into Shadowtrack understandably grabs everyone's attention, but I want to highlight the following remark by Railrunner: "A pure bred against a mixed breed. A classic case of good verses [sic] evil." Don't you guys have a term for this in America politics? "Dog-whistling", right?
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 01:32 |
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my dad posted:Vonder, alcharagia do you have an email address I can contact you at? It's needed for a... secret project. I might have also already contacted Mercedes about it, and he might have said yes. Contact me at u.blocky.u@gmail.com.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 02:22 |
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JosephWongKS posted:The prospect of Clare turning into Shadowtrack understandably grabs everyone's attention, but I want to highlight the following remark by Railrunner: "A pure bred against a mixed breed. A classic case of good verses [sic] evil." "Dog-whistling" means saying one thing and meaning something else by it. "Urban youth" instead of "black person," for example, or "Upholding the institution of marriage" instead of "Anti-gay rights." You spin the argument to sound more palatable by using code words and phrases to disguise your real intent. Calling a "mixed breed" "a classic case of [...] evil" is a tad too blatant to be a good example of spin-doctoring. my dad posted:Vonder, alcharagia do you have an email address I can contact you at? It's needed for a... secret project. I might have also already contacted Mercedes about it, and he might have said yes. I wouldn't mind getting in on this if you needed an extra. I won't be contributing to Detective Black's story at all this week since I need to double down on my real novel this week. My usual email is kaligradhalnirai@yahoo.com. Bobbin Threadbare fucked around with this message at 02:36 on Jun 25, 2013 |
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JosephWongKS posted:The prospect of Clare turning into Shadowtrack understandably grabs everyone's attention, but I want to highlight the following remark by Railrunner: "A pure bred against a mixed breed. A classic case of good verses [sic] evil." Dog-whistling is coded language, like when you say "We need to stop welfare queens stealing taxpayer money". It might sound reasonable to someone who doesn't know anything about the issue, but anyone who does will know that you're actually saying "I'll cut benefits for black people" without directly sounding racist. Miranda isn't actually trying to disguise her racism or anything, she's just straight up saying that Freakshow is inferior/evil because she was created by the roller coaster equivalant of miscegenation.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 02:33 |
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my dad posted:Vonder, alcharagia do you have an email address I can contact you at? It's needed for a... secret project. I might have also already contacted Mercedes about it, and he might have said yes. Sure, you can reach me at eoakley86@gmail.com
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 03:18 |
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please stop posting pictures of shadowtrack please
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 05:01 |
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Chapter 59 - Risky Business Part One quote:
Freakshow’s last words were: “Do you really want to stab me in the heart like I did your mother?” … “To [sic] bad about her, she was a thrill to kill.” These words angered Railrunner “to no extent” i.e. not at all. Railrunner is so sociopathic that he doesn’t care about the murder of his mother. quote:
In fact, he treats his mother’s demise as an “encumbrance”, a burden, a chore. And this is supposed to be the “promised king” of Amusement Park Between? quote:
Railrunner isn’t manic-depressive, he’s just sociopathic. quote:
Indiscriminate murder of innocents is fine. Threatening to kill your friends is a-okay. Uncontrollable outbursts of anger are perfectly acceptable. Robbing women of agency is only to be expected. Antediluvian attitudes towards bi-racial pairings is cool. But swearing? That’s a big no-no. quote:
91st sigh of the book. quote:
If an “ordinary knife” can cut a roller coaster, couldn’t that same “ordinary knife” cut a roller coaster deeply enough to kill it? Isn’t that in and of itself already bypassing the principle of “a roller coaster can only be harmed by another roller coaster”? I’m starting to think that Miranda Leek may not have given much thought to the rules of her world. quote:
I hate to agree with Railrunner, but it really is dumb. quote:
So roller-coasters have earth-worm like regeneration? What happens if you cut them in two with a “ordinary knife” that’s large enough? Do they end up re-growing into two roller coasters? If you cut a red roller coaster that way, do you get two reds at the same time? Do they have to fight to the death after that so that there’s only one left? quote:
Railrunner is an eloquent orator and giver of “witty and smart facts” (Chapter 39), as evinced by his succinct replies to Thunderbark’s revelations. quote:
92nd sigh of the book. quote:
Metal is known for being a very comfortable material to sleep on. That’s why beds do not have any mattresses placed on them. quote:I however, was awake thinking; pondering up my next idea. My brain filled with many plans, but none of them seemed to be the solution. Clare started to quiver in her sleep. I put my arms around her to serve as blanket and Clare seemed to sigh in relief. 93rd sigh of the book.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 05:39 |
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Chapter 59 - Risky Business Part Two quote:
Railrunner has hair again, which implies that he transformed back into human form in the middle of his sleep upon sunrise. Why wasn’t he awoken by the excruciating pain that has accompanied each transformation so far? quote:
Unprecedentedly, I am compelled to agree with Railrunner for the second time in a chapter. Railrunner’s cohorts (including Clare) are all disgusting and unpleasant in their own special ways. quote:
I wanted to post a picture of Shadowtrack here, but in deference to Dreggon’s request, I won’t. quote:
What “bribe”? quote:
Tension… quote:
Defused immediately. What a surprise,
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 06:27 |
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"I'd like to be a steel coaster, light purple in color." -"Sure thing, honey!" "And I'd like to have free well and agency, too." -"What's that, didn't hear you!" CHOMP
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 06:55 |
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Chapter 59 - Risky Business Part Three of Four quote:
It isn’t much of an “alliance” when three of them (Clare, Sly and Buddy) were pretty much dragged into this against their will and two of them (Merrylegs and Static) are the designated damsel-in-distress and designated butt-monkey respectively. quote:
Because trespassing onto farms and slaughtering farm animals are the best way to keep a low profile. quote:
Thunderbark does not give a drat that other people have to eat what he’s dishing up. Thunderbark is an rear end in a top hat. All amusement park rides in this series are assholes. Except for Ironwheel, he’s just a tough guy doing a tough job dealing with all those other assholes in Amusement Park Between. quote:
Since the factory is abandoned, the fridge hasn’t been powered for months and all those “frozen meals” must be rotten by now. Thunderbark’s clearly trying to kill Clare, which is not strictly speaking a course of action towards which I’m unsympathetic. quote:
Clare is too dumb to realize that a fridge requires this little thing called “electricity”. She probably thinks a little ice fairy goes around the world making all the fridges cold. quote:
Why do you have to “look down” to see that you’ve “already consumed the whole bowl”? Wouldn’t you be able to tell if you are eating the bowl? Bowls are made of porcelain or plastic or metal, all of which taste distinctly from soup. quote:
Why in the blue loving hell would Captain Vick “strike a deal” with you? Ironwheel has only killed Mr Callahan (assuming we take this pro-Railrunner propaganda at face value) – Railrunner has killed hundreds, including many police officers in the course of their duty, and the one thing that a police officer hates most is a cop-killer. quote:
That is spectacularly stupid indeed. There’s no use in Miranda Leek lampshading how dumb her story is, though, if she’s going to treat it completely seriously anyway.
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Chapter 59 - Risky Business Part Four of Four quote:
Railrunner clearly wasn’t paying attention when Thunderbark explained, just the previous day, in this same chapter. that “[He] didn’t really do anything to the gun; [he] just did something to the bullets.” quote:
And Thunderbark can’t remember what he did or said the previous day either. quote:
Calls from pay phones can be traced, dumbass. quote:
Then the fault lies with Railrunner, for choosing to drive in the “richest part of town”. quote:
Tension… quote:
Defused immediately. Precious widdle Railrunner cannot be exposed to the slightest inconvenience or hardship, ever. Also, how “rich” can this part of the town be if there’s a “deserted parking lot”? quote:
Railrunner is a very mature, sensible Also, how does he know Captain Vick’s number? quote:
Very, very mature and sensible. quote:
I trust that the police spent this time tracing the call. quote:
94th sigh of the book. quote:
Why is Railrunner so sure that Captain Vick will do exactly as he says? Why doesn’t anyone in this book just think? Just think a little bit, drat it! Stop being so intellectually lazy! quote:
Why does everyone in this book do things “deeply”? “Burp deeply in his throat”, “Laugh deeply in throat”, etc et al. This is a very annoying turn of phrase. quote:
Do people in the great state of Tennessee have the ability to “smile” in a non-silent manner? quote:
Only because everyone in this book (other than Detective Black) is dumb as a sack of rocks. quote:
Because, as everyone knows, sunglasses and a baseball cap effectively conceals one’s face. quote:
Why wouldn’t Captain Vick just arrest / kill Railrunner on sight? Detective Black managed to capture Railrunner before, so why wouldn’t Captain Vick just do the same but bigger and better? Why does Railrunner just assume Captain Vick will go along with Railrunner’s stupid plan in the first instance? How can Miranda Leek possibly think that Railrunner is remotely “clever”? quote:
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 07:49 |
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quote:It was a good thing I had it on safety so it wouldn’t shoot on accident and kill me. What a loving tragedy that would have been.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 08:44 |
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As much as this book and the illustrations inspire actual physical revulsion for me (seriously, stop posting roller coaster erotica), that ferris wheel is pretty badass.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 11:32 |
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I finally see now. I assumed the default government system for Amusement Park Between was a jerktocracy with the red coasters as the de facto biggest jerks, but these last few chapters have made me rethink this assumption. Amusement Park Between is actually a monarchy with a strict caste system. It is obvious in this caste system that the Fallen are on the bottom. Ironwheel must've appeared one day and rejected that system in favor of a system that promoted equality and merit. The rides in Amusement Park Between probably reacted violently, forcing Ironwheel to start a revolution to create a system where his people, the Fallen, were freed from their oppression. In reality, Ironwheel is a complex figure who liberated his people from the tyranny of the Red. The rides of Amusement Park Between views him as illegitimate because he put the downtrodden on top and has worked to dismantle a fundamentally unequal system that promoted oppression between the people. Even though he worked hard creating a government that protected their freedom and universally raised their quality of life, he is an usurper "mixed breed"; he is an inferior ride. On another note, it is fun to see that Railrunner is as loathsome and stupid as he always is. I sure hope Captain Vick planned an ambush. Just trap that motherfucker and shoot him with his own gun.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 12:05 |
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quote:I looked down to see that a plate of soup was in front of us. quote:The Hummer was still in the exact place that it was the night before. quote:After waltzing through the weeds, JosephWongKS posted:Do people in the great state of Tennessee have the ability to “smile” in a non-silent manner?
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 12:51 |
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attackbunny posted:When Miranda smiles "Hmm, I've forgotten why I hate this book." "There we go."
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Miranda please stop. You're not clever and neither is the so-called hero of this story. This is a stupid plan. Not the stupidest, I have absolute faith that Railrunner could think up of an even dumber plan, like marching into the police precinct to make a deal. I think everyone in this thread wouldn't put it past him. Okay. So remind me again what the master plan is. We want to find Ironwheel who apparently has shapeshifting powers. We need Captain Vicks' help...why? He's after Clare and you, yes? Then let him come to you. Find a place, fortify it, then stay there. I suppose if you're a complete loving sociopath you can also put on Freakshow's corpse somewhere near it so that Ironwheel can be lured in. I can totally see Railrunner desecrating a corpse for such purposes. quote:My decision was to look for a pay phone so Captain Vick wouldn’t be able to trace my call. Motherfucking
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 17:35 |