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SurreptitiousMuffin posted:
alright pumpkin. judge, please
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Sep 8, 2014 08:47
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sebmojo posted:alright pumpkin. oh look, the kiwis are squabbling.  The Mojo-and-Muffin-are-Pulling-Each-Others'-Pigtails-Again Brawl Two long-time foes face off for the last time. They may or may not know it's the last time. Go. Wordcount: 2000 Deadline: Tuesday the 16th, before midnight your time.
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Sep 8, 2014 09:01
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sebmojo posted:alright pumpkin.
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Sep 8, 2014 11:15
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Oh, fifteen new posts? Huh, that must have been some fast judging! Oh, it's just Muffin posting ten times 
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Sep 8, 2014 13:19
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Blade_of_tyshalle posted:Oh, fifteen new posts? Huh, that must have been some fast judging!
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Sep 8, 2014 14:25
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Blade_of_tyshalle posted:Oh, fifteen new posts? Huh, that must have been some fast judging! this also proooooooooompt judging good judging
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Sep 8, 2014 14:28
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Ya nubs stop yelling for prompt when the judgment hasn't even dropped... Yell for results.
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Sep 8, 2014 16:14
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I did some reading, so I did some writing. Now I am sad as I am out of reading, so I must return to working. Or maybe I'll just think about video games. (Why is Star Control II so badass?) Edit: La dee da, bonk bonk. Impressions will return after official judgments have been posted, so check back then if you're reading this now. Hammer Bro. fucked around with this message at 21:19 on Sep 8, 2014 |
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Sep 8, 2014 18:19
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Hammer Bro. posted:I did some reading, so I did some writing. crits are hella cool, but in the future, you should wait until judgement is out to post any crits.
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Sep 8, 2014 18:33
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Paging Posh Alligator to IRC for some judgechat, if you are around.
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Sep 8, 2014 19:43
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crabrock posted:crits are hella cool, but in the future, you should wait until judgement is out to post any crits. Knew I had my dumdum hat on this morning. Normally not in a position for it to matter, but definitely noted for the future. I'll hide them away for a bit.
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Sep 8, 2014 21:17
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Benny the Snake posted:*sniff sniff* I SMELL BLOOD! hello fuckwads been awhile you 2 will have a brawl that is about brawling. right me a really good fight seen in a bar. the kind that sells beer and whiskey and tequila and so on, not the kind for gymnastics or that lawyers walk past or whatever words our around 1000 butt definitely not moor then 1001 girls need to be fighting, and the main characters are girls, need not be the same girls you could also call them women or woman or womyn, age is not materiel dont suck at all please due this know later then 2200 on fore teen september too thousand an fore teen
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Sep 8, 2014 21:28
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eastern standard thyme
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Sep 8, 2014 21:29
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o an benny, you best not send your story to anyone for help beforehand. this is you and you alone, mon frer.
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Sep 8, 2014 21:55
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oh sweet, thunderdad is home
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Sep 8, 2014 22:21
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Martello posted:o an benny, you best not send your story to anyone for help beforehand. this is you and you alone, mon frer.
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Sep 8, 2014 23:23
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Sitting Here posted:oh sweet, thunderdad is home I hope he brought me a present! Hey, I don't even like cigarettes 
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Sep 8, 2014 23:25
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crabrock posted:I hope he brought me a present!
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Sep 9, 2014 00:17
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Sep 9, 2014 00:36
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my thread dad can beat up your thread dad
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Sep 9, 2014 00:40
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Martello is everyone's threaddad so yeah he can def beat the poo poo out of your threaddad
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Sep 9, 2014 00:43
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Thread finally owns again.
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Sep 9, 2014 01:35
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SurreptitiousMuffin posted:Thread finally owns again. but ,it has u in it ?
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Sep 9, 2014 01:40
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sebmojo posted:but ,it has u in it ?
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Sep 9, 2014 01:43
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SurreptitiousMuffin posted:you can't tell me what to do you're not my real thunderdad save the sweet nothings for the brawl, boys
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Sep 9, 2014 01:45
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Thunderdome Week CIX Results Despite the relatively small turnout, this was actually a really strong week and I had a lot of fun reading everything! There were no truly awful entries and every story had an arc, which is pretty awesome. THE WINNER is sebmojo, who gave us a really well-crafted and evocative piece that really nailed Calvino's style and kept the judges intrigued all the way through. HONORABLE MENTIONS Go to Tyrannosaurus for giving us a great character-driven piece, an interesting setting, and effective prose, Kaishai for a really cool and emotionally resonant take on a well-trodden sci-fi trope, Sitting Here for a moving, microcosmic piece that effectively hit the authorial checkbox, and Amused Frog for a creative story that blended the grotesque and the lighthearted into something that stuck with the judges despite some minor pacing issues. Congratulations! THE LOSER this week is Skwid. We felt your story got a bit too bogged down in your stylistic choice and in the end the story itself was a bit too cliche. DISHONORABLE MENTION goes to Benny the Snake. While your writing has definitely improved, this story ended up feeling like part of a series rather than a story of its own, and there are enough structural issues that it couldn't hang in a week this strong. Thanks to everyone for participating this week, and I officially cede the floor to sebmojo for your next literary thrashing! Detailed crits will be in no later than tomorrow night.
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Sep 9, 2014 02:51
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SOUND THE PROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMPT HORNS
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Sep 9, 2014 03:00
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prompt prompts pleasant prompts
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Sep 9, 2014 03:04
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Sep 9, 2014 03:11
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That was super fun, I'm very happy to avoid a DM first time around. Bring on the next round!
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Sep 9, 2014 03:36
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dog police [img]https://ci6.googleusercontent.com/proxy/FDXSXKvOYrOs66pfRwzEqEDj2PkbI2JrkT88xcYBRr2Z9u3SL8wAHMSBbzvmrquXrVrK8Q=s0-d-e1-ft#http://i.imgur.com/OhkxXiJ.gif[/img]
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Sep 9, 2014 03:55
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systran posted:dog police *flinches*
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Sep 9, 2014 04:18
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ill win one day
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Sep 9, 2014 04:20
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i will become more powerful than you can even imagine, because my power will be my writing taking you places your mind could never, which is the point of writing, really.
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Sep 9, 2014 04:21
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thunderdome one ten: cleaning up the streets it's been a while, Thunderdome. how ya been. pick a Clint Eastwood film from here in your sign-up post then give me 1200 good words of story around it. themes, title, character, don't care too much what the connection is but don't try and cheat me or Clint will end you. some notes
entries close Friday midnight PST, submissions Sunday midnight PST regulators: sebmojo kaishai surreptitious muffin HIGH PLAINS DRIFTERS: Sitting Here: Revenge of the Creature Mercedes: Million Dollar Baby Your Sledgehammer: For a Few Dollars More Grizzled Patriarch: White Hunter, Black Heart Fumblemouse: The Beguiled Lou Bega's Moustache: A Perfect World Entenzahn: The Good, the Bad and the Ugly Martello: High Plains Drifter newtestleper: Grace is Gone Blade_of_Tyshalle: Dirty Harry Some guy TT: Any which way you can  Cache Cab: Space Cowboys Ironic Twist: Play Misty for Me Phobia: the Stars fell on Henrietta Schneider Heim: Kellys Heroes Fanky Mallooooons: Gran Torino SHOWDOWNAmused Frog: Gran Torino SHOWDOWNWalamor: Mystic River Crabrock: Hang'em High sebmojo fucked around with this message at 14:37 on Sep 13, 2014 |
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Sep 9, 2014 04:41
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Million Dollar Baby, baby. Let's do this!
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Sep 9, 2014 04:53
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I'm in to win with REVENGE OF THE CREATURE
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Sep 9, 2014 04:57
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Tried this many months back and got slapped with a DM. I'm back for more pain, Thunderdome. In with For a Few Dollars More.
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*stares at u all w/ steely blue eyes that see past even the furthest horizon* Make my lunch, you turds
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