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Greyhawk posted:things got better not much. i had another look and yup, nicsho is still struggling with basic concepts like grammar and punctuation.
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Mulatto Butts posted:hes the hero they deserve in the land of autists the one lowest down the spectrum is king
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Soricidus posted:not much. i had another look and yup, nicsho is still struggling with basic concepts like grammar and punctuation. literally the first sentence of the current buttcoin article posted:The Winklevoss Twins, known internationally as the half-CGI duo that Mark Zuckerburg may or may not have stolen that Facespace thing from them
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Soricidus posted:not much. i had another look and yup, nicsho is still struggling with basic concepts like grammar and punctuation. yeah please get rid of that guy
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Sham bam bamina! posted:jfc have someone edit this guy's poo poo or just let him go already god forbid we have typos on the internet
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FCKGW posted:god forbid we have typos on the internet it would be all right in something like a forum post, it's completely inexcusable in an article, on or off the internet.
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FCKGW posted:god forbid we have typos on the internet well poo poo, you were the one who called him an honest-to-god real journalist
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FCKGW posted:god forbid we have typos on the internet typos are one thing, execrable grammar is another edit: The Winklevoss Twins, known internationally as the half-CGI duo from whom Mark Zuckerburg may or may not have stolen that Facespace thing, ... edit2: lol dogpile Weatherman fucked around with this message at 00:00 on Nov 6, 2014 |
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FCKGW posted:god forbid we have typos on the internet He needs to back off on the funny links, and his sentences don't flow together well i dont think this article is a disaster but it definitely should be shorter
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that guy is a really bad writer
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:01 |
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is he autistic?
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:06 |
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i'm sorry fckgw but he's awful humor requires brevity
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theflyingorc posted:He needs to back off on the funny links, he links all kinds of irrelevant things from his posts like he wants to be jeff fatwood or something. fatwoodism
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:12 |
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Pocket posted:is he autistic? Pocket posted:in the land of autists the one lowest down the spectrum is king
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:13 |
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also whats this about zuckerberg not stealing facebook, i thought he totally and blatantly did
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A Pinball Wizard posted:also whats this about zuckerberg not stealing facebook, i thought he totally and blatantly did whatever, all you need in the article is "the winklevoss brothers (Facebook)" and move on
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:22 |
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fckgw you should just make yospos your writer
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:25 |
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fc, he's a v bad writer
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:38 |
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kill him op
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:39 |
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Heresiarch posted:humor requires brevity tell that to rabelais
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:44 |
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He's a bit wordy and badly needs a proof reader but gotta admit, calling the winklebits 'half-cgi' made me chuckle
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 00:44 |
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well ive been proofreading them but i'm p bad at it so welp
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Ron Paul Atreides posted:calling the winklebits 'half-cgi' made me chuckle its also quite accurate fuctifino fucked around with this message at 01:14 on Nov 6, 2014 |
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FCKGW posted:well ive been proofreading them but i'm p bad at it so welp Read backwards. The mistakes stand out more that way, because your brain doesn't edit the text to see what you're expecting to see. Also, tell him to proofread his stuff before he sends it to you.
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:22 |
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that guy's articles are unreadable. I literally can't make it through a paragraph, and I read yospos daily.
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:25 |
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http://betabeat.com/2014/10/new-york-states-bitcoin-laws-could-ruin-everything-good-about-bitcoin/quote:Bitcoin was supposed to mean private, safe transactions. lol
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:34 |
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looks like there's been some cleanup but there are still plenty of technical issues (extraneous capitals, missing apostrophes, "zuckerburg") and the sheer everything-and-especially-the-kitchen-sink bulk of jokes and tangents is as suffocating as ever. you need a real editor for this stuff, fckgw. like i said before, i'll happily do the job if you pm me.
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:35 |
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AlbieQuirky posted:Read backwards. The mistakes stand out more that way, because your brain doesn't edit the text to see what you're expecting to see. that's how you catch typos not grammatical errors
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:35 |
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new guy just needs "less is more" pounded into him
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:45 |
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if i were a twin i'd probably make sure that one of us had hair parted one way while i parted mine the other
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# ? Nov 6, 2014 02:46 |
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Here is why the hash rate jumped and took a dive in days. EST. $3,600,000 worth - GONE! (i.imgur.com) submitted 3 hours ago by jordanwpg quote:[–]real_slow 3 points 38 minutes ago quote:[–]real_slow 5 points 36 minutes ago Robawesome fucked around with this message at 03:01 on Nov 6, 2014 |
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Robawesome posted:Here is why the hash rate jumped and took a dive in days. EST. $3,600,000 worth - GONE! (i.imgur.com) holy poo poo is this for real
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quote:[–]real_slow 1 point 39 minutes ago
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Robawesome posted:Here is why the hash rate jumped and took a dive in days. EST. $3,600,000 worth - GONE! (i.imgur.com) i came no way this is the same fire though
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quote:[–]effortninja 12 points 2 hours ago* quote:[–]mmeijeri 10 points 3 hours ago quote:[–]vcorem 2 points an hour ago
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FrozenVent posted:no way this is the same fire though click that news article
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Robawesome posted:Here is why the hash rate jumped and took a dive in days. EST. $3,600,000 worth - GONE! (i.imgur.com)
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Robawesome posted:
bit coin dot jpg
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