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Let's make this poo poo interesting. In with a I will not lose or fail to submit this week.
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In. Theme fits in perfectly with where I'm going with The Nom-Nom Nutribar Project.
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Edited out linecrit for thread closure.
Profane Accessory fucked around with this message at 20:06 on Dec 30, 2015 |
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In. Also because I am a person
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Edited out linecrit for thread closure.
Profane Accessory fucked around with this message at 20:07 on Dec 30, 2015 |
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I'm in.
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Jack me in.
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In and stuff.
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# ? Feb 25, 2015 07:48 |
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In, toxxed as per my rule.
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In! My first Thunderdome, (don't) be gentle!
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I keep failing. In, chucklefucks
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gently caress it, the idiot is in. I'm still bummed about losing last week's story and I'm tired from work, but this prompt is just too open to pass up. When you're creatively constipated, any excuse to squeeze out a nugget of creativity is a good one. Also, the crits will be in soon, probably tomorrow or Friday. They won't be as academic as many of the others I've read, but I hope they're enlightening nonetheless. oh god it's hard to critique better writing than your own
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Screaming Idiot posted:oh god it's hard to critique better writing than your own I wouldn't know
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bye
anime was right fucked around with this message at 06:50 on Oct 27, 2015 |
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Screaming Idiot posted:I'm still bummed about losing last week's story There's no need to continue this charade.
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bye
anime was right fucked around with this message at 06:51 on Oct 27, 2015 |
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sebmojo posted:in Sebmojo in 2013 posted:I agree, but there's always at least one or two rounds of brief crits from judges (isn't there? Or did we miss one?), and there's nothing stopping contestants doing a Twinkle Cave and critting other 'domers. If you want more, fiction farm. Or win a round and you can set whatever crazy rules you like. Here's one to get you started: http://writocracy.com/thunderdome/?story=717&title=Time+Vaster+than+Death tia, cowboy
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oh yeah that interprempt thingA Classy Ghost posted:Results Humor is always a slippery slope ( ) but I would have liked this more if you would have really built up the final confrontation to end with the hero dying accidentially, which wouldn't have been the most refined joke in the world, but I would have liked it more than what you did, which is exactly the same only you start telling the joke after it happened. Rating: two noodles
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sebmojo posted:also, anyone who I've promised a crit to in the past and haven't provided one, link me your story and i'll do it. here's a to do it by end of submissions. I can't prove that you once pledged in IRC to crit the stories from Wise Fool Week that Fumblemouse did not, but I remember. I remember.
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About week #88: <Jonked> Can I get a crit from last week? <sebmojo> imma do'em all jonked http://writocracy.com/thunderdome/critcounts.php?judge=sebmojo#week88 edit: i would like mine from week 88 plz. crabrock fucked around with this message at 07:03 on Feb 27, 2015 |
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sebmojo posted:in http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3598931&userid=0&perpage=40&pagenumber=95#post430948706 <- Me claiming my rightful crit. http://forums.somethingawful.com/showthread.php?threadid=3598931&pagenumber=94&perpage=40#post430818376 <- My amazing story of love and betrayal or whatever that one was about.
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Sitting Here posted:Here's one to get you started: quote:Time Vaster than Death I like that a lot
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quote:Get What's Coming
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A little under EIGHT HOURS left to sign up, get a move on
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walkin' on in
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JcDent posted:Will take Mr. crabrock's line-by-line. JcDent posted:Two wolves howl at the moon, one a wild animal, the other a holographic decoy for a cyborg mouse This story doesn't really have a plot so much. This guy is sitting around waiting for something to undock or whatever, while a narrator tells me things. Then he's like "ok, i'll go meet alice now!" and that somehow leads to a spacefight. There were a few times were you actually bothered to portray some characterization. those were the best parts. all the space stuff was like a 12 year old writing a space story. you gotta have reasons and motivations for things. John wants to see alice, but it's never really clear WHY he thought she was so great. You could move this story into John's internal POV, wax poetic about poo poo, and then have him MEET her actually and have her say the poo poo that's currently said about her. i'm going to go to sleep now.
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That's it, signups closed. Still need a third judge, PM me if you feel like being a judgmental dick like you know you want to.
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# ? Feb 28, 2015 06:03 |
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Linecrit for Megazver from Black Metal Week. Finally!Megazver posted:
HIT PROMPT? Mostly - not getting the "insufferable" part WORD COUNT? Yes RANGE OF EMOTIONS? Not really Overall thoughts: I know you struggled with the word limit here, and it shows. The story as a whole is fairly unbalanced because the intro/scene setting take up pretty much half your story. You didn't really manage to fulfil either the "insufferable" part of the prompt or the "range of emotions" requirement. Still, I liked the theme, the opening scene was good, the dialogue was strong throughout and you dragged a couple of chuckles out of me. Overall, middle of the pack.
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# ? Feb 28, 2015 19:21 |
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As a Thunderdome newbie, how strict is the word count requirement? If I step over it by a few words (let's say...6. Hypothetically of course) is it still valid or should I trim the fat a little bit?
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Hugoon Chavez posted:As a Thunderdome newbie, how strict is the word count requirement? If I step over it by a few words (let's say...6. Hypothetically of course) is it still valid or should I trim the fat a little bit? It's a hard limit. You will be disqualified if you're even one word over.
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Hugoon Chavez posted:As a Thunderdome newbie, how strict is the word count requirement? If I step over it by a few words (let's say...6. Hypothetically of course) is it still valid or should I trim the fat a little bit? If you're over it by 6 words you can definitely find something to cut out.
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bye
anime was right fucked around with this message at 06:51 on Oct 27, 2015 |
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