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leekster posted:I"m in and have never listened to this band. Please give me a song. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-gW513E8_6I I Palindrome I
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In. Let's see what you've got for me.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 08:34 |
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Grizzled Patriarch posted:In. Let's see what you've got for me. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zfPsDy1PVU Narrow Your Eyes
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 08:36 |
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in, pick the best song for me
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 08:55 |
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Sitting Here posted:in, pick the best song for me https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ro_u6AhcGYo Where Your Eyes Don't Go
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 09:01 |
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in, I'll pick Judy Is Your Viet Nam
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 09:05 |
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In. Never listened to the band so I will require a song. Tough as you like.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 10:06 |
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Maugrim posted:In. Never listened to the band so I will require a song. Tough as you like. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S4ftRXG8T9k Chess Piece Face
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LOU BEGAS MUSTACHE posted:hugoon i owe you a line crit sometime this week Looking forward to that! I'm pretty discouraged about my loss, didn't think I did so bad so I'd love any criticism. Oh well there will always be the next Thunderdome! Just probably not this one since I'm flying back to Venezuela tomorrow for "vacations".
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I'm in. I googled them and picked Purple Toupee for myself because I don't know what the gently caress.
Ol Sweepy fucked around with this message at 11:14 on Mar 3, 2015 |
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Bompacho posted:I'm in. I googled them and picked Purple Toupee for myself because I don't know what the gently caress. good.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 11:15 |
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In. This is your chance to fulfill your lifelong dream of having me write a story about a TMBG song of your choice, so make it count!
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 11:59 |
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Entenzahn posted:In. This is your chance to fulfill your lifelong dream of having me write a story about a TMBG song of your choice, so make it count! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3CccPPDe2JU I'm Impressed
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 14:30 |
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Count me IN.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 15:28 |
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In. Song me please.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 15:57 |
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in E: with Ondine Ironic Twist fucked around with this message at 01:41 on Mar 4, 2015 |
# ? Mar 3, 2015 16:51 |
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Ironic Twist posted:in, pick the third-best song for me I gave them my best Spotify try and they're all the worst.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 17:39 |
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In, slap one on me.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 18:25 |
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bye
anime was right fucked around with this message at 06:51 on Oct 27, 2015 |
# ? Mar 3, 2015 18:31 |
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In with Someone Keeps Moving My Chair.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 19:42 |
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Crit for Benny Profane! Benny Profane posted:Goliath You've got some really nice imagery and kinetic prose. The story wears its Black Swan influences on its sleeve, but you're exploring different themes here, and thematically, the tarantella is a great alternative to ballet. The tense shifting has its desired effect, and I think it was definitely the right call for this piece. My biggest issue is that the story feels noticeably constrained by the wordcount; it seems like there's a significantly longer piece under the surface. I would have liked to see Anna's character fleshed out a bit more, but the pacing is strong regardless. Nice work, and if you'd like me to elaborate on anything, just let me know.
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Istanbul not Constantinople e: reminder i'm toxxed for the rest of the month and i've used up all my toxx-mercy Djeser fucked around with this message at 22:05 on Mar 3, 2015 |
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I told myself I wasn't going to do this to myself this week, but god dammit I like TMBG and I'm entering with "Robot Parade."
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In for this week with The Mesopotamians. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jAMRTGv82Zo Also, thanks for the linecrit, GrizzledPatriarch! I'm happy to pay one forward if anybody would like one. Profane Accessory fucked around with this message at 22:57 on Mar 3, 2015 |
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Benny Profane posted:In for this week with The Mesopotamians. I would love one for god week! http://writocracy.com/thunderdome/?story=3293&title=When+Gods+Forget I'm particularly interested in potential clarity issues.
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 22:58 |
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In with "The Statue Got Me High."
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# ? Mar 3, 2015 23:07 |
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Thanks for the crit Fumblemouse : ) Also I am in, please pick a song for me as well.
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J.A.B.C. posted:Count me IN. Snail Shell https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pJkQ7J0YRZM
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# ? Mar 4, 2015 01:54 |
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In. I need a song.
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Jagermonster posted:In. Song me please. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xfDj19o5RaM The World's Address
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hotsoupdinner posted:In, slap one on me. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3NiIZdbJSj8 Memo to Human Resources
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starr posted:Thanks for the crit Fumblemouse : ) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FjpTmng9bV4 Stone Cold Coup d'Etat
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Pete Zah posted:In. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VJQnZZ-Wmao Don't Let's Start
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhjSzjoU7OQ
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# ? Mar 4, 2015 02:16 |
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In with Destination Moon.
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Screaming Idiot posted:I told myself I wasn't going to do this to myself this week, but god dammit I like TMBG and I'm entering with "Robot Parade." This is the correct decision but you need a in there bucko.
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# ? Mar 4, 2015 21:45 |
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In with "Prevenge".
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# ? Mar 4, 2015 21:47 |
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sebmojo posted:This is the correct decision but you need a in there bucko. Yeah, I'm gonna have to tell you to go gently caress yourself. If i can get it written, great, but I'm not going to waste twenty dollars because my schedule fucks me over.
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bye
anime was right fucked around with this message at 06:51 on Oct 27, 2015 |
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Screaming Idiot posted:Yeah, I'm gonna have to tell you to go gently caress yourself. If i can get it written, great, but I'm not going to waste twenty dollars because my schedule fucks me over. Then we won't read it. You don't get to flounce in and collapse on the fainting couch each week. Lots of people have lovely poo poo going on in their lives in here, and they write.
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