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gmc9987
Jul 25, 2007

Keket posted:

Trying to make a stylized model for some later modeling practice, thoughts on this? Be harsh.



What exactly do you want comments on? There's not much here to critique.

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Keket
Apr 18, 2009

Mhmm
Proportions etc.

GreatJob
Jul 6, 2008

You did a Great Job™!

Keket posted:

Trying to make a stylized model for some later modeling practice, thoughts on this? Be harsh.



The lack of finish on the model (Arms, hands, fingers, toes) makes it difficult to give you more directed critique other than 'Finish modeling it.' Hands, fingers, arms, and toes are important to measuring out body canons and proportions. You'll run into this a lot, there's a lot of re-doing art assets from scratch in any visual industry which is why it takes so long and is so expensive. Don't be afraid to pour your heart into this model yet still eventually need to re-do it. It happens.

If you're only looking for specific touch-up areas before you commit to the extremities, be aware that I'm referencing Greek/traditional body canon ideals and not anything more stylized than that. Consider making the muscle forms less smoothly-blended so that we can differentiate the muscle masses on this person. She's very skinny so we'd be able to see more of where her ribcage meets her abdomen, it wouldn't be blended so smoothly. Her knees are 1/3 head length too high. The groin is 1/8th or 1/4th head length too low and the boobs both originate and hang 1/2 head too high on her chest. The lack of a skin fold where the butt hangs down is an extremely rare body feature that usually only occurs on the skinniest of male models, although you could run out into the street and scream 'Stop censoring me!! I'm Stylizing her!!' if you like, I don't mind. Hope that is appropriate to what you wanted to hear about, although you could focus on finishing the model completely to the best of your ability instead of waffling over the torso for much longer.

(NSFW) Here is a repository of life model photography. A lot of variety present. Hope it helps. (NSFW)

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only

blepp

bloop

blipp

Anagram of GINGER
Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe
labia. I wanna see the robolabia

Scathach
Apr 4, 2011

You know that thing where you sleep on your arm funny and when you wake up it's all numb? Yeah that's my whole world right now.


Cross posting from the daily art thread. I got a new tablet a while back and finally got the chance to sketch out a quick piece. The newer S Pen is smooth as butter.

Scathach fucked around with this message at 18:16 on Sep 3, 2016

Troposphere
Jul 11, 2005


psycho killer
qu'est-ce que c'est?
those robotitties better shoot rockets or lasers or something

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only
Only Go Nagai ever really did that tbh

Troposphere
Jul 11, 2005


psycho killer
qu'est-ce que c'est?
scientist who designed the sexy lady fuckbots: listen guys they need boobs ok? they just do.

other scientist: uhhh idk Steve they seem pretty pointless to me and the incredibly prominent labia is making everyone really uncomfortable

scientist who gets big boners from the lady robots with tits and vaginal lips: DO NOT QUESTION MY DESIGN CARL THEY NEED THEM

Anagram of GINGER
Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe
last week in class we were told to start working on a bipedal model for rigging in the second part of the semester. I asked if it could have an animal's head and fur. No one laughed. In that moment I was genuinely disappointed with my life. If you can't joke about furries with non-artists and you can't joke about furries with artists, then who the gently caress

anyway my point is there are questions that need to be answered like would Inspector Gadget's dick be mostly flesh or mostly robo

what would sexbot anus look like

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only
y'all need jesus

mutata
Mar 1, 2003

The reason why no one laughed is because all of your classmates are either furries or they're aware that there are furries in class.

Edit: Also, I dunno, animation heads and fur aren't exactly unheard of in the digital arts, sexually charged or not.

InevitableCheese
Jul 10, 2015

quite a pickle you've got there
Zootopia is an excellent movie

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Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe

mutata posted:

The reason why no one laughed is because all of your classmates are either furries or they're aware that there are furries in class.

Edit: Also, I dunno, animation heads and fur aren't exactly unheard of in the digital arts, sexually charged or not.

guys, i found the furry

Scribblehatch
Jun 15, 2013

I am posting these things now.



Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only
If memory serves right disney hired some dude that drew vore art at some point. I'd be suprised if anyone in the animation industry isn't aware of the fact that their talent is a highly eccentric bunch.

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Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe
it's me I'm the vore artist

Fangz
Jul 5, 2007

Oh I see! This must be the Bad Opinion Zone!
If you find anthropomorphic animals inherently awkward or creepy you should probably reconsider working or studying in the animation industry.

Wowporn
May 31, 2012

HarumphHarumphHarumph

Elsa posted:

last week in class we were told to start working on a bipedal model for rigging in the second part of the semester. I asked if it could have an animal's head and fur. No one laughed. In that moment I was genuinely disappointed with my life. If you can't joke about furries with non-artists and you can't joke about furries with artists, then who the gently caress


Elsa posted:

it's me I'm the vore artist

You have a knack for joking about things that are not weirder than things you already do so no one thinks you're joking

Troposphere
Jul 11, 2005


psycho killer
qu'est-ce que c'est?

Colon Semicolon posted:

If memory serves right disney hired some dude that drew vore art at some point. I'd be suprised if anyone in the animation industry isn't aware of the fact that their talent is a highly eccentric bunch.

some artists are able to keep their fetishes from showing and creeping everyone out, unlike some people, who may or may not post in this thread

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Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe

Wowporn posted:

You have a knack for joking about things that are not weirder than things you already do so no one thinks you're joking

That's how you're supposed to know I'm not a hypocritical jerk and that I'm just having a good time.

I've had a furaffinity account since early 2009

Scribblehatch
Jun 15, 2013

Troposphere posted:

some artists are able to keep their fetishes from showing and creeping everyone out, unlike some people, who may or may not post in this thread
We don't care if we creep you out.

You can stop telling us.

Scathach
Apr 4, 2011

You know that thing where you sleep on your arm funny and when you wake up it's all numb? Yeah that's my whole world right now.


Hell at least if someone is creeped out they're getting emotion from the art. I mean that's better than boredom.

Now can we get back to posting art?

Scribblehatch
Jun 15, 2013

Scathach posted:

Hell at least if someone is creeped out they're getting emotion from the art. I mean that's better than boredom.

Now can we get back to posting art?

Hell fuckin yeah we can, son.




They told her she could become anything she wanted.
So she became a sheep.



Gameboy Frog.



Harp seal cuddle puddle



A taekwon rabbit lady, if one had to guess.

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only


I finished this off yesterday and got like 10 sales already so it's going good so far.

Also for reference point that body I'm working on is for something a bit more normal anyway. Just a karate girl more or less.


(only the bottom part was drawn by me, I commissioned a really cool guy to help set the tone for her.)

Diabetes Forecast fucked around with this message at 21:49 on Sep 4, 2016

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Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe
[nws]Digital art thread: I've had a furaffinity account since early 2009

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only
I'm all for that title change

mutata
Mar 1, 2003

Seconded.

neonnoodle
Mar 20, 2008

by exmarx
:getin:

JamieTheD
Nov 4, 2011

LPer, Reviewer, Mad Welshman

(Yes, that's a self portrait)
Okay, so... While I know from experience that LP has a streaming thread, does CC have one for artstreaming? I ask because... Well, posting an artstream on twitter gets me a grand total of sod-all people watching, and it would be nice for a) Somebody to watch me make an art, b) For me to see other folks making an art, and c) live critique and tips, because I know that, like practice, that's p. useful for continuing to grow as a digital drawing/painting type person.

Of course, the second question if the answer is "No", is... Would folks want me to make one?

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only
y'know I'm curious about that too. I rarely ever stream unless I can do a multistream, cuz I have like maybe 3 super dedicated folks that watch and that's about it.

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Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe
For critique I'd stick with still images. If you want to stream with other artists, Twitch has a creative category.

Real-time advice is a nice thought, but the occasional corrections are just as good. Plus you need to allow yourself to make mistakes in the first place. Watching an artist real-time is very time-intensive for the critic anyway.

Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only
Twitch is kinda poopy for doing art stuff. just about everyone is using Pixcarto these days. it's explicitly for artists and has multistream functionality/customization if you feel like dropping ten bucks a month to be the host. free users can be invited into multistreams though, so you don't HAVE to put any money in if you don't want to.

InevitableCheese
Jul 10, 2015

quite a pickle you've got there

Elsa posted:

[nws]Digital art thread: I've had a furaffinity account since early 2009

Crap
Nov 3, 2012

workin' on a new character design

Scribblehatch
Jun 15, 2013

Yeah, we got it.

You have no witches left to burn, and torches out the wazoo.

The thread has stayed dead for a long while. Let's leave the oak stake out for a little while and see what happens.

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Oct 3, 2014

by Smythe
oooh thanks for the tip off. now the ultra twist on the waist is pretty funny.

Troposphere
Jul 11, 2005


psycho killer
qu'est-ce que c'est?

Crap posted:

workin' on a new character design



very good I like how you can see her fine robot rear end and titties at the same time though may I suggest a little constructive crit I think you could also work some labia in there and maybe some erect robo nips?

InevitableCheese
Jul 10, 2015

quite a pickle you've got there
[nws]Digital art thread: work some labia in there

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Diabetes Forecast
Aug 13, 2008

Droopy Only

InevitableCheese posted:

[nws]Digital art thread: work some labia in there

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