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Puke Fukem
Mar 8, 2017
New page.

Took fourteen pages of talking to reach page 5 of the original chapter.
Amazing.

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wynott dunn
Aug 9, 2006

What is to be done?

Who or what can challenge, and stand a chance at beating, the corporate juggernauts dominating the world?
The author is older but the comic has regressed to junior high

Jukebox Hero
Dec 27, 2007
stars in his eyes
I miss when high-shovel happened the first time and I was so happy.

Puke Fukem
Mar 8, 2017
New page.



Also apparently there's a second part to Chapter One and it goes on to thirty pages
https://iiupsidedownii.deviantart.com/journal/TGTP-The-Script-Chapter-One-Part-Two-705774476

JazzFlight
Apr 29, 2006

Oooooooooooh!

It will always be "lead me to them batsards" and you can never convince me otherwise.

Puke Fukem
Mar 8, 2017
New page.

Watch out, this one is :siren: :nws: :siren:

BravestOfTheLamps
Oct 12, 2012

by FactsAreUseless
Lipstick Apathy

Chump Farts
May 9, 2009

There is no Coordinator but Narduzzi, and Shilique is his Prophet.
I wonder what happened to Lazerbot. What had to break in his brain to do this?

vyelkin
Jan 2, 2011
Reminder that literally none of this dumb terrible crap happened in the original comic, it was all added in because five years later Lazerbot decided he wanted Amy to be Eggman's rape victim

FunMerrania
Mar 3, 2013

Blast Processing
...I don't know what to
think anymore..

Lightning Lord
Feb 21, 2013

$200 a day, plus expenses

What in the good gently caress is this?

david_a
Apr 24, 2010




Megamarm
Unbelievably loving terrible, that's what this is. I think he might actually wear me down to quitting with more pages like this.

I refuse to go to DeviantArt or wherever the real TGT "community" is, but is anybody actually enjoying this?

Mycroft Holmes
Mar 26, 2010

by Azathoth

david_a posted:

Unbelievably loving terrible, that's what this is. I think he might actually wear me down to quitting with more pages like this.

I refuse to go to DeviantArt or wherever the real TGT "community" is, but is anybody actually enjoying this?

I am, because now it's like he's writing a bad soap opera. poo poo is going to get crazy eventually.

Jukebox Hero
Dec 27, 2007
stars in his eyes
I gotta hold hope beyond hope that Lazey just loses his loving mind and this all goes totally apeshit before long.

Phlegmish
Jul 2, 2011



vyelkin posted:

Reminder that literally none of this dumb terrible crap happened in the original comic, it was all added in because five years later Lazerbot decided he wanted Amy to be Eggman's rape victim

I declare this reboot non-canon

tiistai
Nov 1, 2012

Solo Melodica
You may not like it, but this is what peak polish looks like.

Light Gun Man
Oct 17, 2009

toEjaM iS oN
vaCatioN




Lipstick Apathy
I wonder if we should take the misunderstanding between artist and audience joke to the next level and begin a Polish language translation of these pages.

RevolverDivider
Nov 12, 2016

Yup I'm out.

Data Graham
Dec 28, 2009

📈📊🍪😋



The Troll Slaiyers have been trolled to death.

RobobTheGreat
Jul 14, 2003

Mind your manners when talking to the king!
Everything about this is disappointing on so many levels.

Lightning Lord
Feb 21, 2013

$200 a day, plus expenses

So basically this is a coherent version of the original comic? lol

davidspackage
May 16, 2007

Nap Ghost
That tiny glimpse of Amy's boobs honestly made me a little sick

Surely this dark furry drama has got to give way soon to Shadow countertrolling and Knuckles having sex with Donkey Kong.

edit: one day I'll be running for president and my opponent's campaign ad will just be this post with my name on it.

Jukebox Hero
Dec 27, 2007
stars in his eyes
I can't wait to see how he ruins the dk-rouge-knuckles 3-way

super sweet best pal
Nov 18, 2009

Showing it.

HBar
Sep 13, 2007

Panel Fifteen. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy begins to fantasize)
..Here I fixed your plane! I know, I'm awesome... It was really tough but i did it because I'm a strong and handsome stud.. I did it for you, my delicious cherry pie!. "Pink Guy says to Amy"

Panel Sixteen. (New Panel)
..Thank you Espio! I really appreciate it.. "Amy says as she begins to blush"

Panel Seventeen. (New Panel)
..Hey Espio! You're so badass! "Tails says to Pink Guy" 1
..I know... ''Pink guy says to Tails'' 2

Panel Eighteen. (New Panel)
Tails.. Leave! Me and Espio are busy.. "Amy" 1
Ok.. "Tails says as he leaves the room" 2

Panel Nineteen. (New Panel)
..I've been waiting for you to return! I'm so into you and stuff... Oh Espio, i need you to fertalize my eggs.. "Amy says to Pink Guy" 1
...I know.. I know.. I feel it too, in my penis... "Pink Guy" 2

Panel Twenty. (New Panel)
(Amy begins to take off her shirt.)

Panel Twenty One. (New Panel)
(Amy reveals her giant anime breasts.)


Page Twenty Six.
Panel One. (New Panel)
..Are you ready to cum all over my giant anime breasts?... ''Amy says to Pink Guy''

Panel Two. (New Panel)
Well... I do have to get back soon, before the president knows I'm missing.. ''Pink Guy''

Panel Three. (New Panel)
..Aww... Come on Espio, you can do it! ''Tails says Pink Guy''

Panel Four. (New Panel)
..Tails! I told you to leave!... Wait, okay... You can stay and watch, just this one time... ''Amy says to Pink Guy'' 1
...Really!? YAY! Get in there and gently caress her, so hard! ''Tails says to Pink Guy''

Panel Five. (New Panel)
...Thank you Tails, you've convinced me.. ''Pink Guy says to Tails''

Panel Six. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy takes his jeans off to reveal his wrapped up massive penis.)

Panel Seven. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy begins to unravel his massive penis.)

Panel Eight. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy's massive penis plops on the ground.) ''Plop''

Panel Nine. (New Panel)
Oh!.. I never knew it was so massive in stature... ''Amy says to Pink Guy''

Panel Ten. (New Panel)
...I know, i know... ''Pink Guy says to Amy'' 1
..Ready or not, here i cum! ''Pink Guy says to Amy'' 2

Panel Eleven. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy grabs his massive penis like a fire hoes and aims it towards Amy.)

Panel Twelve. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy begins to shoot a massive load of cum towards Amy.)

Panel Thirteen. (New Panel)
(Amy's giant anime breasts are sprayed with Pink Guy's cum.)

Puke Fukem
Mar 8, 2017
Panel Fourteen. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy stops fantasizing and looks around him.)

Panel Fifteen. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy continues to look around him.)

Panel Sixteen. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy begins reaching for his crotch.)

Panel Seventeen. (New Panel)
(Pink Guy continues reaching for his crotch.)

Monicro
Oct 21, 2010

And you could feel his features in the air
A wide smile and perfect hair
He had complete control of the rising tides
And a medicine bag hanging at his side

In the flowing blue world of the death-dealing physician
I'm personally a fan of sonic and amy pinning their clothes up to dry before loving

Mandatory Assembly
May 25, 2008

it's time to get juche
Lipstick Apathy

:wtc:

Pastry of the Year
Apr 12, 2013

HBar posted:

Panel Twenty One. (New Panel)
(Amy reveals her giant anime breasts.)

Puke Fukem
Mar 8, 2017

Embergram posted:

I'm Embergram, the co-writer and co-artist to TGTP. (Lazerbot's brother) For all those who weren't aware. My fiance will be giving birth to our first child within the next week or two. Due to this, we will be having some downtime, as it will prevent me from finalizing TGTP pages. That being said, the pages will still be created and stockpiled, and we will finish TGTP - The Script for chapter one sometime within the next few days and have that published. The downtime estimate will probably be around 2 weeks, though if i have the time to finalize a page, i will go a head and do so and upload them, but i wouldn't expect the usual pace for a couple weeks.

Dark_Tzitzimine
Oct 9, 2012

by R. Guyovich
Well, now that explains why Polished is like this, is no longer, pure, unadultered Lazerbot.

RevolverDivider
Nov 12, 2016

If you're actually dumb enough to give Lazerbot any benefit of the doubt at this point you're a fool.

George H.W. Cunt
Oct 6, 2010





His brother has always been the lovely influence.

DicktheCat
Feb 15, 2011

Jesus loving Christ. What's with the hedgehog tits?


E: I'm kinda thinking bail on this now.

Lurdiak
Feb 26, 2006

I believe in a universe that doesn't care, and people that do.


This is easily the best time to abandon ship since the Amy Rose rape flashback.

Proletarian Mango
May 21, 2011

I haven't viewed this thread or the comic in nearly three years but 10 minutes ago I decided to pop in and see what's happening and I wish I hadn't.

Pastry of the Year
Apr 12, 2013

Lazerbot has a brother that is going to be a father

I have nothing to add, I just wanted to put that into words

Snooze Cruise
Feb 16, 2013

hey look,
a post
micah rat had his brother's influence i think and that poo poo was great so its kinda crazy to say "its got bad cause of this"

Lurdiak
Feb 26, 2006

I believe in a universe that doesn't care, and people that do.


His brother may be helping him with grammar and stuff but I think the heavy focus on relationship drama is Lazy b's own idea.

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The Bee
Nov 25, 2012

Making his way to the ring . . .
from Deep in the Jungle . . .

The Big Monkey!
Yeah. Acting like LazyB is some misunderstood genius having his vision tainted is weird considering the weed party was presumably all him. And honestly, uncomfortable and weird as this is, I'll take it over "Tails gets laid and discovers a giant mess of murdered female characters with AIDS."

Oh god, the weed party is going to be even worse in this version, isn't it?

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