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Rotten Red Rod posted:Is his art getting worse or is it just because he's attempting to go outside of his comfort zone of side view talking heads? If I had to guess, he’s taking his original style, which heavily cribbed from the worst parts of anime, and trying to apply more detail on top. You can still see the framework of the snout but now he’s trying to add a bunch of anatomy on top without studying structure first. Doing a silent story was kind of a bad idea since it relies solely on your art, and this is Dominic Deegan.
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 18:03 |
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# ? Mar 29, 2024 06:41 |
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He really has to remind people that Snout is deaf. Just, shove it in our faces.
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 18:12 |
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I don't know why I'm focusing on this, but the basket is weirding me out. I have so many questions about it. - Why does he put her in the basket instead of just carrying her? All he did was add an extra step. - Why does it change sizes three times? On the last page it was medium size, at the beginning of this page it became tiny, and by the end of the page it's big enough for her. (Ok, I know the answer to this one.) - What was he even doing with the basket? There's nothing outside on the DBZ plain he lives on and the basket started empty. Is he collecting rocks? Does he eat 40 pounds of grass for every meal?
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 19:01 |
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Brought To You By posted:He really has to remind people that Snout is deaf. Just, shove it in our faces.
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 19:07 |
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Glad he included the big DEAF tag on that panel, I almost forgot!
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 19:14 |
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I think he uses the basket to avoid getting blood on his clothes. The basket got bigger because as we all know dead woman's blood can enlarge things.
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 19:57 |
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 20:56 |
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Oh my loving god.
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 21:17 |
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Im glad the only good webcomic is back.
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# ? Jul 22, 2019 21:26 |
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Mordja posted:Im glad the only good webcomic is back. McNinja's back too?
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# ? Jul 23, 2019 02:06 |
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Kill Six Billion Demons never went anywhere.
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# ? Jul 23, 2019 04:34 |
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A good party trick for when you pass out vomiting and you need a friend to take you home
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 16:25 |
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Ahahahahaha no dialogue in this story, right right Only took him, what, a dozen pages to introduce a character that inherently can get around that limitation with no trouble at all? How long before he figures out a magical way for Snout to converse back? Also, things in Snout's house: - basket - bedroll - pillow - nothing else
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 16:38 |
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TheHan posted:If I had to guess, he’s taking his original style, which heavily cribbed from the worst parts of anime, and trying to apply more detail on top. You can still see the framework of the snout but now he’s trying to add a bunch of anatomy on top without studying structure first. Doing a silent story was kind of a bad idea since it relies solely on your art, and this is Dominic Deegan.
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 16:57 |
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I wish I had the power to telekinetically spell out precisely drawn letters in my blood while dead/unconscious.
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 17:04 |
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Guess I should've known by "silent story" he meant no text bubbles. Less Journey and more The Quiet Man.SupSuper posted:The face close-ups are really bad.
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 17:25 |
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Not sure it would take any prompting to understand that a bleeding person needs help. Snout had already started working that out anyways so the message is both late and unneeded.
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 18:35 |
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I suspect it's going to be more "help me... by getting the Plot MacGuffin."
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 19:07 |
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Wait wait, poo poo, I should have called the like "Catching up on The Worst Witch"
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# ? Jul 24, 2019 20:29 |
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starting to develop a "wanker" theme from Mookie's latest work
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# ? Jul 25, 2019 00:04 |
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God bless you Tesseraction.
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# ? Jul 25, 2019 00:52 |
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I'd been holding off editing the next page because I didn't know what was happening next, but seems Mookie still has the same exploit to get comics early (unedited... for now)
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# ? Jul 25, 2019 23:34 |
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Can’t even really commit to the silent gimmick, gotta have blood telepathy.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 00:14 |
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At this point does the story really need to be silent? Could you not, say, trim all the fat that's used to convey they aren't talking and then put speech bubbles around the text without losing any information? and a lil friend.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 00:21 |
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 00:27 |
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lol that was my first edit idea, albeit for the previous comic's final panel
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 00:33 |
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I just remembered there's a racial element to this.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 00:44 |
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wow incredible how he's doing this without any dialogAHAHAHAHAHAHA gently caress
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 03:44 |
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Oh. Ha ha. How'd I miss this thread for so long. Good edits so far, though I do not think I have it in me to follow another Mookie series. He ever finish his space superhero comic?
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 04:09 |
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Star Power? It's still going. It's currently in the middle of a successful kickstarter for a printed book. I guess it's just too boring for anyone here to care about, I know I got like 5 pages in and completely lost interest. There might be some of his trademark storytelling in there, but maybe it's the competent art that just keeps it from being a compelling trainwreck? I dunno, if someone else wants to dig into it to see if there's anything there, go for it.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 04:21 |
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Star Power is just a boring and mediocre Green Lantern comic. With someone else there to curb him, it's not quite the hilarious train wreck that DD is (though I hear that now that Mookie's taken over drawing it, it's gotten entertainingly worse).
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 04:33 |
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also like star power's readership apparently took a massive dive after he started drawing.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 04:41 |
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TheHan posted:At this point does the story really need to be silent? Could you not, say, trim all the fat that's used to convey they aren't talking and then put speech bubbles around the text without losing any information? Like the ship has been in every other page so it's not exactly subtle, but it's an attempt.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 04:53 |
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PMush Perfect posted:(though I hear that now that Mookie's taken over drawing it, it's gotten entertainingly worse). I'm pretty sure that was just a one-issue special thing and the artist is still working with him.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 05:19 |
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SupSuper posted:Or he could've just skipped all the words:
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 05:57 |
I didn't even realize that was supposed to be blood. I thought her dress was all moldy and falling apart.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 08:08 |
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is it blood? is she wearing venom? who knows
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 08:31 |
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SupSuper posted:Or he could've just skipped all the words: Yeah, this is a significant improvement.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 12:56 |
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This whole series of events would make more sense if Snout found the witch first, she used her blood magic to tell him about the ship, and they dropped the subplot with the piece of paper.
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 12:59 |
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# ? Mar 29, 2024 06:41 |
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But how would you know this was set in the Dominic Deegan universe if you didn't immediately visit the Dominic Deegan Memorial
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# ? Jul 26, 2019 13:32 |