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YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


PoptartsNinja posted:

He redrew the same panel four times, which is actually not a bad thing. They were lazy, low-effort panels but it wasn't a copy/paste job.

The real issue is that Snout's hand moves from the bottom of the page to the side of the page depending on which angle you view him at.

Yeah, I wasn't saying that he copy-pasted that panel. Just that four of the panels are the same panel. Bad design rather than technique.

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Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything

Mikl
Nov 8, 2009

Vote shit sandwich or the shit sandwich gets it!

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome


Mookie does generate the même pages

Mors Rattus
Oct 25, 2007

FATAL & Friends
Walls of Text
#1 Builder
2014-2018

I must admit, 'what if a talking piece of paper' was not even on my list of 'how dumb can this get'.

GrossMurpel
Apr 8, 2011
Does a comma go between hello and the name of the person you're helloing?

Mors Rattus
Oct 25, 2007

FATAL & Friends
Walls of Text
#1 Builder
2014-2018

Typically, yes.

PoptartsNinja
May 9, 2008

He is still almost definitely not a spy


Soiled Meat
How does the paper know Snout's name? The audience knows Snout's name so of course the paper does too.

Happy Noodle Boy
Jul 3, 2002


Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

PoptartsNinja posted:

How does the paper know Snout's name? The audience knows Snout's name so of course the paper does too.

Also the paper will also call the the Ink Witch the Ink Witch, even though it's a name Snout thought up himself and told no one

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything

PoptartsNinja posted:

How does the paper know Snout's name? The audience knows Snout's name so of course the paper does too.

It's like the comic is written by someone without a theory of mind.

(It's like, not that it is)

Mikl
Nov 8, 2009

Vote shit sandwich or the shit sandwich gets it!

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome



There it is. It's 2010 again, a time of hope and wonder in the internet.

SardonicTyrant
Feb 26, 2016

BTICH IM A NEWT
熱くなれ夢みた明日を
必ずいつかつかまえる
走り出せ振り向くことなく
&



The Little Death posted:

There it is. It's 2010 again, a time of hope and wonder in the internet.

SuperMechagodzilla
Jun 9, 2007

NEWT REBORN
My question is why he didn't just get hit with this magic piece of paper in the first place.

Page 3: 'Hey, I'm a talking paper. My friend is in danger. You must find this ship.'

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

SuperMechagodzilla posted:

Page 3: 'Hey, I'm a talking paper. My friend is in danger. You must find this ship.'


Who gives a poo poo about her, the most important thing to focus on is BOOKS ABOUT DEEGAN

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!
Dominic_Deegan.exe

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!
Dominic_Deegan.jpg

Tesseraction
Apr 5, 2009

TheHan posted:

Dominic_Deegan.jpg



How is it he's vastly broadened the spatial dimensions of the comic and yet less happens in each one? For gently caress's sake.

SardonicTyrant
Feb 26, 2016

BTICH IM A NEWT
熱くなれ夢みた明日を
必ずいつかつかまえる
走り出せ振り向くことなく
&



I think that's actually a cool concept, too bad it's from this comic.

Tesseraction
Apr 5, 2009

Also the gap in his top and the badly drawn tail make it looks like he's wrapped it around his waist like a Saiyan warrior does with their monkey tail.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

oh look, her name is the ink witch

the name snout thought up and told no one

I mean, Snout did say write it first, but this is clearly an intelligent spell and would tell him the correct name for her, but instead... Nope, that's her loving name for no reason

God drat it, Mookie, this is basic stuff.

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything
Hello Snout, I'm the Ink Witch.

Samovar
Jun 4, 2011

I'm 😤 not a 🦸🏻‍♂️hero...🧜🏻



Ague Proof posted:

Hello Snout, I'm the Ink Witch.

Avatar/post combo.

SuperMechagodzilla
Jun 9, 2007

NEWT REBORN

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Who gives a poo poo about her, the most important thing to focus on is BOOKS ABOUT DEEGAN

It’s more than just that; someone pointed out, early in the thread, that the narrative is being told backwards - and that’s still largely the case.

Snoot attaches the [DEAF] patch to his shirt before the scene where he makes the shirt, he knows what the Ink Witch is before anyone tells him, etc.

Now Snout is being given his motivation to collect the 8 pages after he’s already been inexplicably obsessed with collecting the pages.

SuperMechagodzilla fucked around with this message at 17:29 on Sep 18, 2019

PoptartsNinja
May 9, 2008

He is still almost definitely not a spy


Soiled Meat
It's because Snout is Dominic, warped and mutated after his final trip to the Wild Edge 200* years ago.

*200 + however many it's been since the book was written (I'm betting this number is 0 and Dominic vanished exactly 200 years ago).

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Oh good god no he made good on the porn threat on Patreon

https://twitter.com/mookiebean/status/1172544847519080450

:gonk:

Mors Rattus
Oct 25, 2007

FATAL & Friends
Walls of Text
#1 Builder
2014-2018

you brought this on yourself

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Mors Rattus posted:

you brought this on yourself

I'll commence the self-flagellation immediately

SardonicTyrant
Feb 26, 2016

BTICH IM A NEWT
熱くなれ夢みた明日を
必ずいつかつかまえる
走り出せ振り向くことなく
&



OP, change the thread title to The Legacy of Dominic Deegan: Frisky Shenanigans

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything

Drunk Theory
Aug 20, 2016


Oven Wrangler

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Oh good god no he made good on the porn threat on Patreon

https://twitter.com/mookiebean/status/1172544847519080450

:gonk:

Well. That "I'm going to throw Mookie a few bucks to laugh early" blew back in your face rather quickly.

And yes, that's the wording I'm going with.

Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007

You gave him a dollar and now look what happened

YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


This is the best thing that's ever happened.

YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


Can't stop laughing at the panel of Snout (presumably) jerking it

Nuns with Guns
Jul 23, 2010

It's fine.
Don't worry about it.
I was wondering about what would happen when he inevitably would draw some sex on this comic because he doesn't have the skill to make it look sexy and couldn't stop it from looking like two lovecraftian creatures humping. Was he going to fade to black after a few full-body nude shots? Was he going to make it a collage of weird closeup sex faces to avoid having to do body shots? Some highly symbolic images that make no sense because he can't draw objects?

At least the teaser images give me hope that it will be funny.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Let's hope we just have to keep wondering

Fish Noise
Jul 25, 2012

IT'S ME, BURROWS!

IT WAS ME ALL ALONG, BURROWS!

Nuns with Guns posted:

I was wondering about what would happen when he inevitably would draw some sex on this comic because he doesn't have the skill to make it look sexy and couldn't stop it from looking like two lovecraftian creatures humping. Was he going to fade to black after a few full-body nude shots? Was he going to make it a collage of weird closeup sex faces to avoid having to do body shots? Some highly symbolic images that make no sense because he can't draw objects?

At least the teaser images give me hope that it will be funny.
entirely text in the form of pagefinder commentary

"you're putting it in there?!"
"woah that's freaky"
"I like it!"

and then it blasts ink again and it's not because of the wild edge this time

Dabir
Nov 10, 2012

Wild Edging

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TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!


This paper is expositing its rear end off.

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