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Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything
I don't like where this is going.

And I didn't like it to begin with.

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PoptartsNinja
May 9, 2008

He is still almost definitely not a spy


Soiled Meat

PoptartsNinja posted:

The Ink Witch is going to reassure Snout that it's only natural for them both to sleep naked together because Dominic Mookie Snout is perfect the way he is and never has to do anything or change so he shouldn't worry about it; but Snout will struggle to fail asleep because he's such a nice guy and also pure virgin Anime tropes.

It's even dumber than I expected! I thought they'd talk it out first, not that it would be non-consensual naked snuggling.

Hostile V
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

That must be what it's like to be a Sim accidentally glimpsing the player at work.

rudecyrus
Nov 6, 2009

fuck you trolls
Leaving aside the dumb excuse for nudity and Snout's hosed up leg, those boobs are terrible. The nipples look pasted on. I could look up a billion tutorials on how to draw breasts, but Mookie can't be bothered.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

This is a fantasy of an inexperienced virgin. A girl that appears out of nowhere and likes him for no reason gets naked with him after no effort on his part (because she's asleep). And he gets nervous about it despite the fact that HE WAS NAKED FIRST

I'd respect Mookie so much more if he just had her be awake and decide to have sex with him. But no, the girl cannot have any agency for her own sexuality, it must be because she naked cuddles in her sleep. Because that's how it happens in his animes!

rudecyrus
Nov 6, 2009

fuck you trolls

Rotten Red Rod posted:

This is a fantasy of an inexperienced virgin.

Written and drawn by a man who's been married for, what, a decade?

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Yeah, I know, that makes it even more pathetic. Arrested development and all that.

Crowetron
Apr 29, 2009

I thought her dress was made of ink.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings.

Also lol I just realized the first and last panel are copy/pasted. Holy poo poo going digital has made him lazy.

Lunatic Sledge
Jun 8, 2013

choose your own horror isekai sci-fi Souls-like urban fantasy gamer simulator adventure

or don't?
I know I shouldn't be so critical but,

this is doo doo

Mors Rattus
Oct 25, 2007

FATAL & Friends
Walls of Text
#1 Builder
2014-2018

So I guess her dress and...thong?....aren’t made of ink any more.

Joe Slowboat
Nov 9, 2016

Higgledy-Piggledy Whale Statements



Rotten Red Rod posted:

Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings.

Also lol I just realized the first and last panel are copy/pasted. Holy poo poo going digital has made him lazy.

Concept drawings nothing, she used ink from it to do ink writing on the page.

Drunk Theory
Aug 20, 2016


Oven Wrangler
I just don’t like these interludes because they are pointless. Cool, you can poorly draw cock and tits. Hurray.

Who What Now
Sep 10, 2006

by Azathoth

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings.

Also lol I just realized the first and last panel are copy/pasted. Holy poo poo going digital has made him lazy.

Her head in every panel where she sits up to when she lays back down are all copy-pasted too.

girl dick energy
Sep 30, 2009

You think you have the wherewithal to figure out my puzzle vagina?
God, I want to give up, to stop reading this and make my life better, Use this time for literally anything else.

And yet... morbid curiosity keeps me. If it does get worse, I'm going to find out sooner or later. Might as well at least not be alone through it.

rannum
Nov 3, 2012

i'm so glad that this is A Serious Adult comic that does Serious Adult things, like nudity, so I know it's an Adult comic

PMush Perfect posted:

God, I want to give up, to stop reading this and make my life better, Use this time for literally anything else.

And yet... morbid curiosity keeps me. If it does get worse, I'm going to find out sooner or later. Might as well at least not be alone through it.

I know you hate the seafoam islands but surely its not worse than *gestures* all this!

girl dick energy
Sep 30, 2009

You think you have the wherewithal to figure out my puzzle vagina?

rannum posted:

I know you hate the seafoam islands but surely its not worse than *gestures* all this!
I've actually finished the gameplay for the next update, now I just need to finish the text and prepping the screenshots.

Then I can move onto... the Pokemon Mansion! :shepicide:

No, I'm kidding, the Mansion is fine, I'm just being lazy.

MiracleFlare
Mar 27, 2012

Mookie @ [url posted:

https://www.dominic-deegan.com/nudity-in-the-legacy/[/url]]
There’s going to be nudity. It’s going to be uncensored but I’m going to do my best to keep it “natural” instead of “explicit” or “gratuitous.”

There's nothing about this that feels natural. Yeah, I can buy that they both prefer sleeping nude, loads of people feel more comfortable that way. But there's nothing particularly subtle about this and it emphasizes how contrived the writing can get. How did both of them managed to stay dressed the previous night? Including Snout, who at every other opportunity has slept naked even when it isn't appropriate?

Which brings me to my next point: There's also the issue that Ink Witch has had little agency in the times she's slept next to a naked Snout. The first time, they were total strangers and she was injured and unconscious at that moment, which is pretty much the worst time to sleep dick-out next to someone. Here, she presumably knew about and was fine with Snout being nude. But apparently that wasn't enough for the narrative because now she's suddenly sleep-stripping herself. Their shared dreams, painful as it is to say, have been the closest they've gotten to having a nude scene that feels consensual and maybe even halfway natural.

Y'know what? gently caress it, I wanna see where this trainwreck of a story goes. I'm still expecting the "legacy" to be a Deegan descendant and/or Ink Witch herself.

YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


Rotten Red Rod posted:

Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings.

Also lol I just realized the first and last panel are copy/pasted. Holy poo poo going digital has made him lazy.

No, it's worse than this. Look at it, every line is different. He drew it again and made sure to, aside from the witch's dress and Snout's expression, draw it exactly the same. :pwn:

Safari Disco Lion
Jul 21, 2011

Boss, if they make us find seven lost crystals, I'm quitting.

It's like he watched A Game of Thrones and all he took from it was "if there's a penis or some titties then people will take me seriously".

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3
I've figured out a good name for the one face Mookie knows how to draw:

the Mask of Terracciano.

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome


YF-23 posted:

No, it's worse than this. Look at it, every line is different. He drew it again and made sure to, aside from the witch's dress and Snout's expression, draw it exactly the same. :pwn:

He copied the outline but added the details (hair, shading) in seperately for each panel. Mouth and body lines are exact copies





My boyfriend has described my tendency to seek out bad media to mock and critique as me being a cinemasochist.

I think this is an affliction we all have.

Beelzebufo fucked around with this message at 00:45 on Mar 31, 2020

YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


The Little Death posted:

He copied the outline but added the details (hair, shading) in seperately for each panel. Mouth and body lines are exact copies

They are not. The armpit's more angular in the last panel, the pillow Snout's using has shrunk, the outlines are redrawn too. My guess is he thought it would have a comedic effect to have the panels look so similar.

SardonicTyrant
Feb 26, 2016

BTICH IM A NEWT
熱くなれ夢みた明日を
必ずいつかつかまえる
走り出せ振り向くことなく
&



Invisible Clergy posted:

I've figured out a good name for the one face Mookie knows how to draw:

the Mask of Terracciano.
For the love of god, Mooktresor!

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious
Ok so it is confirmed she is just loving with Snout now, right? She just does not care at all. Heck her entire quest to seek him out was just an inept bootycall.

The dress not dissolving is proof of that. If she was really asleep it would've just gone away.

Right?

EthanSteele
Nov 18, 2007

I can hear you

YF-23 posted:

They are not. The armpit's more angular in the last panel, the pillow Snout's using has shrunk, the outlines are redrawn too. My guess is he thought it would have a comedic effect to have the panels look so similar.

Yup, just look at his hand and his lat, both are different too.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

evilmiera posted:

Ok so it is confirmed she is just loving with Snout now, right? She just does not care at all. Heck her entire quest to seek him out was just an inept bootycall.

The dress not dissolving is proof of that. If she was really asleep it would've just gone away.

Right?

You're putting more thought into it than Mookie did

Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007

Who the gently caress is this for? You’ve got dicks and boobs and the writing is beyond terrible/nonexistent and the art is still dominated c deegan levl after all these years

girl dick energy
Sep 30, 2009

You think you have the wherewithal to figure out my puzzle vagina?
The same person DD has always been for.

Nuns with Guns
Jul 23, 2010

It's fine.
Don't worry about it.

Synthbuttrange posted:

Who the gently caress is this for? You’ve got dicks and boobs and the writing is beyond terrible/nonexistent and the art is still dominated c deegan levl after all these years

Besides Mookie himself, honestly he probably has more people who hate-read it than any genuine fans at this point. Dominic Deegan had a small window of time where it was relevant and popular to get promoted by other big webcomics like VG Cats or Ctrl+Alt+Del and get an easter egg namedrop in Girl Genius. Nobody cares or remembers much about it now. Still, Mookie's in that rare and precious position now where he can do whatever he wants and be happy, so this is what he does with his time.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Synthbuttrange posted:

Who the gently caress is this for? You’ve got dicks and boobs and the writing is beyond terrible/nonexistent and the art is still dominated c deegan levl after all these years

The 95 people who fund his patreon.

Fish Noise
Jul 25, 2012

IT'S ME, BURROWS!

IT WAS ME ALL ALONG, BURROWS!

Rotten Red Rod posted:

The 95 people who fund his patreon.
so

......you?

ninjewtsu
Oct 9, 2012

What I don't understand is why waste a page on the ink witch (why the gently caress do we still not know her name) taking off her dress now, nonsensically while still asleep, when she could've done so right before getting into bed

Samovar
Jun 4, 2011

I'm 😤 not a 🦸🏻‍♂️hero...🧜🏻



Nuns with Guns posted:

Besides Mookie himself, honestly he probably has more people who hate-read it than any genuine fans at this point. Dominic Deegan had a small window of time where it was relevant and popular to get promoted by other big webcomics like VG Cats or Ctrl+Alt+Del and get an easter egg namedrop in Girl Genius. Nobody cares or remembers much about it now. Still, Mookie's in that rare and precious position now where he can do whatever he wants and be happy, so this is what he does with his time.

Also, the creator of VGCats is doing porn now, too!

:gonk:

oriongates
Mar 14, 2013

Validate Me!


ninjewtsu posted:

What I don't understand is why waste a page on the ink witch (why the gently caress do we still not know her name) taking off her dress now, nonsensically while still asleep, when she could've done so right before getting into bed

Because if she undressed while conscious she'd be a dirty slattern! Undressing while asleep preserves the innocence of the tits.

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!
I can’t decide if he concocted this scenario out of cowardice or cause he’s just so horny and couldn’t bare to wait another 3 months to naturally develop their relationship to this point.

Dongs per panel: .25:1


I don’t think I can look this comic in the eyes.

the yeti
Mar 29, 2008

memento disco



That dick and balls looks like a mitten if you rotate 90° counterclockwise

Mr.Pibbleton
Feb 3, 2006

Aleuts rock, chummer.

I know it's a mongrelman but I still feel like Mookie should spend more time looking at penises or penii if you prefer.

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Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

Mr.Pibbleton posted:

I know it's a mongrelman but I still feel like Mookie should spend more time looking at penises or penii if you prefer.

penï

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