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I don't like where this is going. And I didn't like it to begin with.
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 22:58 |
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# ? Mar 29, 2024 08:12 |
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PoptartsNinja posted:The Ink Witch is going to reassure Snout that it's only natural for them both to sleep naked together because It's even dumber than I expected! I thought they'd talk it out first, not that it would be non-consensual naked snuggling.
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 23:27 |
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That must be what it's like to be a Sim accidentally glimpsing the player at work.
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 23:27 |
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Leaving aside the dumb excuse for nudity and Snout's hosed up leg, those boobs are terrible. The nipples look pasted on. I could look up a billion tutorials on how to draw breasts, but Mookie can't be bothered.
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 23:32 |
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This is a fantasy of an inexperienced virgin. A girl that appears out of nowhere and likes him for no reason gets naked with him after no effort on his part (because she's asleep). And he gets nervous about it despite the fact that HE WAS NAKED FIRST I'd respect Mookie so much more if he just had her be awake and decide to have sex with him. But no, the girl cannot have any agency for her own sexuality, it must be because she naked cuddles in her sleep. Because that's how it happens in his animes!
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 23:44 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:This is a fantasy of an inexperienced virgin. Written and drawn by a man who's been married for, what, a decade?
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 23:46 |
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Yeah, I know, that makes it even more pathetic. Arrested development and all that.
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# ? Mar 29, 2020 23:47 |
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I thought her dress was made of ink.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 00:53 |
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Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings. Also lol I just realized the first and last panel are copy/pasted. Holy poo poo going digital has made him lazy.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 01:14 |
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I know I shouldn't be so critical but, this is doo doo
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 01:16 |
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So I guess her dress and...thong?....aren’t made of ink any more.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 01:33 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings. Concept drawings nothing, she used ink from it to do ink writing on the page.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 03:13 |
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I just don’t like these interludes because they are pointless. Cool, you can poorly draw cock and tits. Hurray.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 03:20 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings. Her head in every panel where she sits up to when she lays back down are all copy-pasted too.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 03:41 |
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God, I want to give up, to stop reading this and make my life better, Use this time for literally anything else. And yet... morbid curiosity keeps me. If it does get worse, I'm going to find out sooner or later. Might as well at least not be alone through it.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 03:47 |
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i'm so glad that this is A Serious Adult comic that does Serious Adult things, like nudity, so I know it's an Adult comicPMush Perfect posted:God, I want to give up, to stop reading this and make my life better, Use this time for literally anything else. I know you hate the seafoam islands but surely its not worse than *gestures* all this!
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 04:00 |
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rannum posted:I know you hate the seafoam islands but surely its not worse than *gestures* all this! Then I can move onto... the Pokemon Mansion! No, I'm kidding, the Mansion is fine, I'm just being lazy.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 04:25 |
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Mookie @ [url posted:https://www.dominic-deegan.com/nudity-in-the-legacy/[/url]] There's nothing about this that feels natural. Yeah, I can buy that they both prefer sleeping nude, loads of people feel more comfortable that way. But there's nothing particularly subtle about this and it emphasizes how contrived the writing can get. How did both of them managed to stay dressed the previous night? Including Snout, who at every other opportunity has slept naked even when it isn't appropriate? Which brings me to my next point: There's also the issue that Ink Witch has had little agency in the times she's slept next to a naked Snout. The first time, they were total strangers and she was injured and unconscious at that moment, which is pretty much the worst time to sleep dick-out next to someone. Here, she presumably knew about and was fine with Snout being nude. But apparently that wasn't enough for the narrative because now she's suddenly sleep-stripping herself. Their shared dreams, painful as it is to say, have been the closest they've gotten to having a nude scene that feels consensual and maybe even halfway natural. Y'know what? gently caress it, I wanna see where this trainwreck of a story goes. I'm still expecting the "legacy" to be a Deegan descendant and/or Ink Witch herself.
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 08:32 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Could be he changed his mind since the concept drawings. No, it's worse than this. Look at it, every line is different. He drew it again and made sure to, aside from the witch's dress and Snout's expression, draw it exactly the same. TheHan posted:
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 11:18 |
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It's like he watched A Game of Thrones and all he took from it was "if there's a penis or some titties then people will take me seriously".
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 13:34 |
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# ? Mar 30, 2020 13:52 |
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I've figured out a good name for the one face Mookie knows how to draw: the Mask of Terracciano.
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 00:31 |
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YF-23 posted:No, it's worse than this. Look at it, every line is different. He drew it again and made sure to, aside from the witch's dress and Snout's expression, draw it exactly the same. He copied the outline but added the details (hair, shading) in seperately for each panel. Mouth and body lines are exact copies My boyfriend has described my tendency to seek out bad media to mock and critique as me being a cinemasochist. I think this is an affliction we all have. Beelzebufo fucked around with this message at 00:45 on Mar 31, 2020 |
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The Little Death posted:He copied the outline but added the details (hair, shading) in seperately for each panel. Mouth and body lines are exact copies They are not. The armpit's more angular in the last panel, the pillow Snout's using has shrunk, the outlines are redrawn too. My guess is he thought it would have a comedic effect to have the panels look so similar.
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 01:07 |
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Invisible Clergy posted:I've figured out a good name for the one face Mookie knows how to draw:
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 01:27 |
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Ok so it is confirmed she is just loving with Snout now, right? She just does not care at all. Heck her entire quest to seek him out was just an inept bootycall. The dress not dissolving is proof of that. If she was really asleep it would've just gone away. Right?
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 02:15 |
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YF-23 posted:They are not. The armpit's more angular in the last panel, the pillow Snout's using has shrunk, the outlines are redrawn too. My guess is he thought it would have a comedic effect to have the panels look so similar. Yup, just look at his hand and his lat, both are different too.
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 02:40 |
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evilmiera posted:Ok so it is confirmed she is just loving with Snout now, right? She just does not care at all. Heck her entire quest to seek him out was just an inept bootycall. You're putting more thought into it than Mookie did
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 02:41 |
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Who the gently caress is this for? You’ve got dicks and boobs and the writing is beyond terrible/nonexistent and the art is still dominated c deegan levl after all these years
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 02:43 |
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The same person DD has always been for.
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 03:53 |
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Synthbuttrange posted:Who the gently caress is this for? You’ve got dicks and boobs and the writing is beyond terrible/nonexistent and the art is still dominated c deegan levl after all these years Besides Mookie himself, honestly he probably has more people who hate-read it than any genuine fans at this point. Dominic Deegan had a small window of time where it was relevant and popular to get promoted by other big webcomics like VG Cats or Ctrl+Alt+Del and get an easter egg namedrop in Girl Genius. Nobody cares or remembers much about it now. Still, Mookie's in that rare and precious position now where he can do whatever he wants and be happy, so this is what he does with his time.
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 04:38 |
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Synthbuttrange posted:Who the gently caress is this for? You’ve got dicks and boobs and the writing is beyond terrible/nonexistent and the art is still dominated c deegan levl after all these years The 95 people who fund his patreon.
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 05:31 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:The 95 people who fund his patreon. ......you?
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# ? Mar 31, 2020 07:42 |
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What I don't understand is why waste a page on the ink witch (why the gently caress do we still not know her name) taking off her dress now, nonsensically while still asleep, when she could've done so right before getting into bed
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# ? Apr 1, 2020 07:09 |
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Nuns with Guns posted:Besides Mookie himself, honestly he probably has more people who hate-read it than any genuine fans at this point. Dominic Deegan had a small window of time where it was relevant and popular to get promoted by other big webcomics like VG Cats or Ctrl+Alt+Del and get an easter egg namedrop in Girl Genius. Nobody cares or remembers much about it now. Still, Mookie's in that rare and precious position now where he can do whatever he wants and be happy, so this is what he does with his time. Also, the creator of VGCats is doing porn now, too!
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# ? Apr 1, 2020 08:01 |
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ninjewtsu posted:What I don't understand is why waste a page on the ink witch (why the gently caress do we still not know her name) taking off her dress now, nonsensically while still asleep, when she could've done so right before getting into bed Because if she undressed while conscious she'd be a dirty slattern! Undressing while asleep preserves the innocence of the tits.
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# ? Apr 1, 2020 10:42 |
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I can’t decide if he concocted this scenario out of cowardice or cause he’s just so horny and couldn’t bare to wait another 3 months to naturally develop their relationship to this point. Dongs per panel: .25:1 I don’t think I can look this comic in the eyes.
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# ? Apr 1, 2020 14:27 |
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That dick and balls looks like a mitten if you rotate 90° counterclockwise
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# ? Apr 1, 2020 15:56 |
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I know it's a mongrelman but I still feel like Mookie should spend more time looking at penises or penii if you prefer.
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# ? Apr 1, 2020 17:33 |
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Mr.Pibbleton posted:I know it's a mongrelman but I still feel like Mookie should spend more time looking at penises or penii if you prefer. penï
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