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Who What Now
Sep 10, 2006

by Azathoth
Penne

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Maxwell Lord
Dec 12, 2008

I am drowning.
There is no sign of land.
You are coming down with me, hand in unlovable hand.

And I hope you die.

I hope we both die.


:smith:

Grimey Drawer
At first I just hated this strip because it was boring and not going anywhere, and then this happened.

Jesus Christ, Mookie. You have hit a new low.

girl dick energy
Sep 30, 2009

You think you have the wherewithal to figure out my puzzle vagina?
Taking bets now. Are they going to sex, or is Ink Witch going to tsundere anime slap him for being a pervert?

Maxwell Lord
Dec 12, 2008

I am drowning.
There is no sign of land.
You are coming down with me, hand in unlovable hand.

And I hope you die.

I hope we both die.


:smith:

Grimey Drawer
I think it'll be a while before we get to a sex scene, we're now in some pathetic "Oh how *risqué*" scenario.

Just, none of this makes sense. Why did Snout even get naked if he's so self-conscious about being naked next to her? Like if he's just naturally a nudist kinda guy, with minimal contact with other people anyway, he'd likely be all "Oh this is perfectly natural". That's just how he lives right? Doesn't know anything else. But if he is aware that other people aren't always comfortable being around naked people, maybe he then keeps his pants on or makes some accommodation? Like there are so many ways you could have played this.

It's weird how adding frequent gratuitous nudity has made this feel even more repressed. It's like the anti-Oglaf.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Of COURSE Ink Witch is based on his wife

rudecyrus
Nov 6, 2009

fuck you trolls
His wife strips in her sleep?

The Ink Witch's right foot is hosed up. It's flat as a pancake.

Drunk Theory
Aug 20, 2016


Oven Wrangler
Why must every naked sleepy time interlude take a whole week of comic. It’s like a cycle now. 3-4 weeks of comic, then a week of journal and naked sleep.

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome


Does Mookie's penis bend at the tip or something? What the gently caress is he drawing there.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Drunk Theory posted:

Why must every naked sleepy time interlude take a whole week of comic. It’s like a cycle now. 3-4 weeks of comic, then a week of journal and naked sleep.

The Importance of Doing Nothing.

TLDR: Mookie finally read Understanding Comics and he thinks he's making a manga now because he has slow parts

Pyrotoad
Oct 24, 2010


Illegal Hen
The perspective of the bed plus the way the ink witch is lying makes it look like Snout is levitating off the bed as he sleeps.

edit: what the gently caress is up with the way her shoulder and back connect?

Pyrotoad fucked around with this message at 21:24 on Apr 1, 2020

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Called it.

Regalingualius posted:

He’s totally psyching himself up to finally draw a woman’s tiddy.

Fister Roboto posted:

And when he does it will just be a sphere with a dot in the middle of it.

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

PMush Perfect posted:

Taking bets now. Are they going to sex, or is Ink Witch going to tsundere anime slap him for being a pervert?

You really have to ask this poo poo? There's no way they'll have sex, that would give the girl agency and make her a whore instead of a madonna. She will slap him and go "b-baka!" like in Mookie's animes.

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious

rudecyrus posted:

His wife strips in her sleep?

The Ink Witch's right foot is hosed up. It's flat as a pancake.

All characters in this comic suffer from a very rare bone disease where between panels their limbs break and reknit themselves painlessly. But since they have to move during this process the bones end up in positions they shouldn't.

And Ink Witch is just going to bone Snout in his sleep so Mookie doesn't have to try and build up a relationship between the two. That would take work.

rudecyrus
Nov 6, 2009

fuck you trolls
They're going to bone in their dreams.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Invisible Clergy posted:

You really have to ask this poo poo? There's no way they'll have sex, that would give the girl agency and make her a whore instead of a madonna. She will slap him and go "b-baka!" like in Mookie's animes.

Nah that was the old Mookie. The new Mookie has horny liberated dad energy, and wants everyone to know about the sex he has with his wife, and how he totally isn't afraid to draw nudity and sex, which is :nws: totally a unique quality :nws: in online comics in TYOL 2020.

rudecyrus posted:

They're going to bone in their dreams.

Oh god I would not be surprised.

rannum
Nov 3, 2012

it's mookie so they'll literally be hitting giant cartoon bones while naked

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious

rudecyrus posted:

They're going to bone in their dreams.

I thought they already did?

rudecyrus
Nov 6, 2009

fuck you trolls

evilmiera posted:

I thought they already did?

They were just naked.

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

evilmiera posted:

All characters in this comic suffer from a very rare bone disease where between panels their limbs break and reknit themselves painlessly. But since they have to move during this process the bones end up in positions they shouldn't.

And Ink Witch is just going to bone Snout in his sleep so Mookie doesn't have to try and build up a relationship between the two. That would take work.



For less than the cost of a cup of coffee a day, you can give to help prevent boneitis from claiming another victim. Please call the number on your screen.


Rotten Red Rod posted:

Nah that was the old Mookie. The new Mookie has horny liberated dad energy, and wants everyone to know about the sex he has with his wife, and how he totally isn't afraid to draw nudity and sex, which is :nws: totally a unique quality :nws: in online comics in TYOL 2020.
Given that they're already bed sharing and naked, I feel like the chance for an adult consensual sexual encounter has kind of come and gone and we're going to get some kind of puritanical cheat in the upcoming comics if we don't get an overt avoidance. Mookie may be flaunting his new love of drawing dicks and boobs, but he's still afraid of sex because he's a gross manchild.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

He already declared his intention to draw hardcore loving. Hell, he already DID draw that in some Dominic Deegan Patreon bonus comics. It's happening.

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything
In DD, there were slutty churches and chaste churches.

Mookie wants to draw porn, but he has to include a scene with grotesque, cheap porn to contrast for some reason. Not like his artistic porn.

rudecyrus
Nov 6, 2009

fuck you trolls
I mentioned this before, but I guarantee Mookie's version of hardcore loving -- excuse me, passionate lovemaking will look like two Barbie dolls being rubbed against each other, not unlike the sex scenes in Ride to Hell: Retribution.

Who What Now
Sep 10, 2006

by Azathoth
It's gonna be missionary or cowgirl if he's feeling extra "kinky".

Vox Valentine
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

Who What Now posted:

It's gonna be missionary or cowgirl if he's feeling extra "kinky".
"He whisked off her shoes and panties in one movement, wild like an enraged shark, his bulky totem beating a seductive rhythm. Ink Witch's body felt like it was burning, even though the room was properly air conditioned. They tried all the positions: on top, doggy and normal. Exhausted, they collapsed onto the recently-extended sofa bed. Then Dominic Deegan showed up."

Mr.Pibbleton
Feb 3, 2006

Aleuts rock, chummer.

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Nah that was the old Mookie. The new Mookie has horny liberated dad energy, and wants everyone to know about the sex he has with his wife, and how he totally isn't afraid to draw nudity and sex, which is :nws: totally a unique quality :nws: in online comics in TYOL 2020.


Oh god I would not be surprised.

What, no :nws: https://www.oglaf.com/ ???

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Good Lord, I legitimately don't know why that wasn't my first choice.

Synthbuttrange
May 6, 2007

I'm trying to place this whole stupid comic tonally and all I can come up with is incompetent looney tunes with dongs.

girl dick energy
Sep 30, 2009

You think you have the wherewithal to figure out my puzzle vagina?

Synthbuttrange posted:

incompetent looney tunes with dongs.
Thread title?

Tesseraction
Apr 5, 2009

I think what's getting to me is the lovingly rendered arse on the witch compared to the not-even-shaded dick and balls.

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!

Synthbuttrange posted:

I'm trying to place this whole stupid comic tonally and all I can come up with is incompetent looney tunes with dongs.

Mookie never adds tone to his work cause he doesn't know what tone is, but at face value I would've expected something like Jucika (Which you can read here (It's good): https://twitter.com/JucikaDaily). Simple jokes told with no dialogue, but also clearly horny in parts. The difference is the creator of Jucika didn't try to hide behind some thin veneer of being the thinking man's horny and none of the scenarios in Jucika feel as contrived as this one.

Fish Noise
Jul 25, 2012

IT'S ME, BURROWS!

IT WAS ME ALL ALONG, BURROWS!

Who What Now posted:

It's gonna be missionary or cowgirl if he's feeling extra "kinky".
kinky? or inky?

GET THE INK ALL UP IN THERE

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

TheHan posted:

Mookie never adds tone to his work cause he doesn't know what tone is, but at face value I would've expected something like Jucika (Which you can read here (It's good): https://twitter.com/JucikaDaily). Simple jokes told with no dialogue, but also clearly horny in parts. The difference is the creator of Jucika didn't try to hide behind some thin veneer of being the thinking man's horny and none of the scenarios in Jucika feel as contrived as this one.

It's pretty cute.




Some of them can be a bit hard to understand without context of Soviet-era Hungary. Like what is the contraption here?

(It's a paternoster.)

Evrart Claire
Jan 11, 2008
Mookie's attitude on sex and female sexual agency still feels like a comic strip version of Ernest Cline's "nerd porn auteur" poo poo.

SardonicTyrant
Feb 26, 2016

BTICH IM A NEWT
熱くなれ夢みた明日を
必ずいつかつかまえる
走り出せ振り向くことなく
&



PMush Perfect posted:

Thread title?
It shall be done.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Oh I like this one

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!
A whole story told in three panels, but Dominic Deegan can’t do a drat thing with infinitely more space.



Didn’t even redraw them.

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome


That broken dick and monotesticle really do add to the aesthetic of the piece :wotwot:

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything

evilmiera
Dec 14, 2009

Status: Ravenously Rambunctious

rudecyrus posted:

I mentioned this before, but I guarantee Mookie's version of hardcore loving -- excuse me, passionate lovemaking will look like two Barbie dolls being rubbed against each other, not unlike the sex scenes in Ride to Hell: Retribution.

No what'll happen is the comic will look moderately better for however long he can keep interest, but then the moment he gets off he will just copy-paste other panels and call it a day.

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Who What Now
Sep 10, 2006

by Azathoth

TheHan posted:

A whole story told in three panels, but Dominic Deegan can’t do a drat thing with infinitely more space.



Didn’t even redraw them.

How is her rear end both flat and lumpy?

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