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The Ink witch has her left foot forward, and her right foot twisted in a pretty painful direction.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 04:12 |
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# ? Apr 25, 2024 06:05 |
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What is this jawline/chin situation?
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 06:05 |
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Elysiume posted:
I don't know but that's one angry bird!
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 12:48 |
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Oh no these guys are m...mean! Lol at Arudak coming outta nowhere just so our new villains can take a shot at him too. Just in case there was any ambiguity whatsoever that these are the designated bad guys.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 16:02 |
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Does Mookie only have one ‘surprised and frightened’ facial expression for all characters? Because the witch and the orc just had the exact same reaction down to the anime face shadow, and it’s something that would have been an ok gag if animated and if that kind of tone fit into the comic at all and if them having the same expressions was jarring enough to have an effect other than ‘mild unease.’
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 16:11 |
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 16:27 |
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I can't believe mookie dissolved any tension about the hero/villain status of the ink witch and Arudak by doing... this.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 16:49 |
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oh i can
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 16:52 |
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I assume she's jut meant to have fuller lips, but Ink Witch 2: Electric Boogaloo looks like she has some kind of weird mustache or tumor or something because of how he only really seemed to give more detail to the upper lip.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 16:54 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:oh i can It really is Ur-Mookie. Deflect the criticism with any excuse possible, then address the criticism in comic as if it was the plan all along. He didn't gently caress up, you just weren't being patient enough to watch this tapestry unfold. TheHan fucked around with this message at 17:28 on Jul 7, 2020 |
# ? Jul 7, 2020 17:16 |
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There's like 0 chance that it's a coincidence for these two characters to have arrived in the comic right after mookie got called out on how he wrote one of the protagonists as a villain.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 17:17 |
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It's incredible how bad mookie is at conveying literally anything without words.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 17:24 |
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He's also very bad at conveying things *with* words.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 17:25 |
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TheHan posted:Oh no these guys are m...mean! They cant troll Snout because he has no loving ears (that work).
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 18:08 |
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Hey guys, I got a hold of Mookie's notes planning out the last two pages! Two threatening characters show up - note to self, figure out their names later. The woman says something that immediately devastates the ink witch - note to self, figure out what the conflict is and what she said later The other one says something also shocks Ardurak - note to self, same as before, decide on what that conflict is and why it was so shocking once the ink witch can talk to Snout later. I mean write. WRITE to Snout later. NO DIALOGUE Truly, having a deaf main character is a challenge to Mookie's writing skill and not at all a crutch.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 18:57 |
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It's Ink Witch's mom and her new middle-aged stepdad.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 19:16 |
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It's really unfortunate how New Ink Witch is more compellingly designed in pretty much every way than Old Ink Witch. I mean, relatively speaking since costume design has never been a strong suit.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 19:49 |
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dude looks like a dark haired Riff Raff
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 21:11 |
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It's hilarious, we know there will be no confusion or mystery as to what's going on, because the Ink Witch (the good one) is just going to regurgitate what the Ink Witch (the bad one) said in a few pages.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 21:40 |
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I know we're supposed to not like them but all I can see are two people who are as done with The Ink Witch's poo poo as I am.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 22:12 |
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Fister Roboto posted:It's hilarious, we know there will be no confusion or mystery as to what's going on, because the Ink Witch (the good one) is just going to regurgitate what the Ink Witch (the bad one) said in a few pages. And the unsaid question will be why she decided to never even hint at this stuff to Snout even though she keeps saying how much she wants him to trust her
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 23:01 |
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I think she said something about there being Other Ink Witches who messed with Arudak, but it was in the dense text wall that even Snout didn't read I'm just waiting to see all of the criticism aimed at Ink Witch Prime be transferred over to one or both of these newcomers in the most blatantly villainous way possible, so that we can be shown what a "real" manipulator looks like and have Ink Prime be vindicated by their very existence.
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# ? Jul 7, 2020 23:16 |
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Kids these days...
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# ? Jul 8, 2020 00:31 |
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Pfffttt....I just can't get over Arudak appearing from stage left from loving nowhere. Mookie wanted to hammer home that these are the "bad guy" counterparts to our crew so badly, that he couldn't even think far enough ahead to have Arudak there. He's so loving bad at this. It's swung back around to hilarious for me. Drunk Theory fucked around with this message at 07:47 on Jul 8, 2020 |
# ? Jul 8, 2020 01:37 |
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clearly they need to even the playing field by recruiting an evil snout
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# ? Jul 8, 2020 01:44 |
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Lunatic Sledge posted:clearly they need to even the playing field by recruiting an evil snout
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# ? Jul 8, 2020 02:28 |
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The dialogue revealed.
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# ? Jul 8, 2020 16:34 |
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This goes on for several
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# ? Jul 8, 2020 20:06 |
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gHfixzBlB_w
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# ? Jul 9, 2020 00:21 |
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Alright time to bring it on home. Gotta show that these guys are serious big time meanies. Fun fact about these pages is that Mookie finished them way earlier than he ever has before, this week's pages were already done on Sunday. I don't even think the incredibly lazy all dialogue pages get done that fast. It really feels like Mookie knew exactly what he wanted to do this week and got right down to it.
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# ? Jul 9, 2020 18:11 |
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Panel 2 looks like a Fleetwood Mac video
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# ? Jul 9, 2020 18:16 |
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It's a good thing that the meaning of the "endings" page is absolutely 100% clear to everyone without any kind of context, and can't possibly be misinterpreted as a threat, for example. Or more likely, as complete nonsense.
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# ? Jul 9, 2020 19:56 |
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Ok. Real bad guys established. Internet was wrong, they did not wait for me to show them. Now I can go back to wondering what's gonna happen next, as I sit down to trace. Mookies writing when he gets called out is so rote and predictable. It's really apparent when he's reacting to something. Drunk Theory fucked around with this message at 22:47 on Jul 9, 2020 |
# ? Jul 9, 2020 22:43 |
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Fister Roboto posted:It's a good thing that the meaning of the "endings" page is absolutely 100% clear to everyone without any kind of context, and can't possibly be misinterpreted as a threat, for example. Or more likely, as complete nonsense. Imagine witnessing an argument where you have literally no idea what it's about, then intervening when it's over to wordlessly hand one of the participants this while glaring at them:
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# ? Jul 9, 2020 23:00 |
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I like how as far as Snout knows, the worst thing these two have done is ‘stand and glare’ and that’s enough for him to get up in a guy’s face with his weird piece of paper.
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# ? Jul 9, 2020 23:04 |
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Fister Roboto posted:It's a good thing that the meaning of the "endings" page is absolutely 100% clear to everyone without any kind of context, and can't possibly be misinterpreted as a threat, for example. Or more likely, as complete nonsense. Makes you sympathise with these new villains since they're the only ones either not doing bullshit or not putting up with bullshit right now.
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# ? Jul 10, 2020 00:33 |
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YF-23 posted:Makes you sympathise with these new villains since they're the only ones either not doing bullshit or not putting up with bullshit right now. He's accidentally another Siegfried, I wonder how many babies these two are going to have to eat to prove they're really the bad guys. I am less than invested in Snout's health and safety considering he drank earwax remover last month. Plus, someone else being a worse abuser does not somehow make The Ink Witch's abusive behavior OK.
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# ? Jul 10, 2020 00:45 |
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PoptartsNinja posted:Plus, someone else being a worse abuser does not somehow make The Ink Witch's abusive behavior OK. No no no, see if these people are in the Bad Guy role then they have to be in the Good Guy role! Why aren't you getting it? I have to make them do some more bad things.
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# ? Jul 10, 2020 06:03 |
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I'd forgotten how bad Mookie is at conveying someone being thrown backwards. Snout shrank like half a foot at a minimum.
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# ? Jul 10, 2020 06:19 |
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Brought To You By posted:I'd forgotten how bad Mookie is at conveying someone being thrown backwards. Snout shrank like half a foot at a minimum. I mean, what is the action taken by the big ugly guy? He pushed his arm halfway forward, his hair fluttered backwards, and Snout flew back ten feet. Is the intention that he’s just a mega powerful super wizard who can knock Snout aside with the flick of a wrist, or is this just Mookie’s complete lack of ability muddying the scene? I also have no loving clue what “X ENDINGS” means because the plot is completely forgettable and only shows up once every two weeks in a big text dump I can’t be bothered to read
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# ? Jul 10, 2020 06:46 |