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HellOnEarth
Nov 7, 2005

Now that's good jerky!
God drat do I hate the loving “...illusion” bit. It wasn’t that interesting the first time!

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Regalingualius
Jan 7, 2012

We gazed into the eyes of madness... And all we found was horny.




Even if Luna didn’t know about the “fire HEALS him” thing, wouldn’t it still have been a pretty big hint that using fire magic against a guy who’s called an infernomancer would probably end poorly? Like, at bare minimum, you’d probably expect him to be pretty resistant to it, or able to outright control and redirect any fire cast at him.

And agreed that TIM basically looks like a first draft for a generic anime starting villain.

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome


HellOnEarth posted:

God drat do I hate the loving “...illusion” bit. It wasn’t that interesting the first time!

Yeah Mookie loves having her say that. It's not like she's even doing anything different from all the magic users though. If your illusions are perfect magical projections, then there's nothing clever about using them.


Regalingualius posted:

Even if Luna didn’t know about the “fire HEALS him” thing, wouldn’t it still have been a pretty big hint that using fire magic against a guy who’s called an infernomancer would probably end poorly? Like, at bare minimum, you’d probably expect him to be pretty resistant to it, or able to outright control and redirect any fire cast at him.

And agreed that TIM basically looks like a first draft for a generic anime starting villain.

The thing is, Mookie made the connection to devils, not fire, first. Inferno comes to us from Latin, and it originally means "the world below, the lower realm". The association with fire, though present in other myths, comes from Biblical and Talmudic imagery, in particular Gehenna and the Lake of Fire in Revelations. But Hell in Dante's Inferno, or Paradise Lost, or even in DnD, is not necessarily the lake of fire. So initially, I though Mookie was being a little clever, making a kind of warlock where you make a very physical sacrifice for you mancy, which is to say divination, to being of the world below, the infernus, and he was sticking to the Latin origins of those words.

I actually don't hate the concept, and when later you learn that all the demons in hell have a schtick that reflects in their one chosen infernomancer, and that this infernomance pledged himself to the demon of wounds, it sorta works. Or at least, I think in the hands of a better writer it could work well as as story.

But having fire heal him makes me think Mookie started with the idea of a pyromancer, and just decided to be more EXTREME with it, and the devil wizard thing only came because of Dante's inferno. I'd forgotten that fire healed him, and it made me retroactively feel like something I though was clever on Mookie's part was actually not.

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

Regalingualius posted:

Even if Luna didn’t know about the “fire HEALS him” thing, wouldn’t it still have been a pretty big hint that using fire magic against a guy who’s called an infernomancer would probably end poorly? Like, at bare minimum, you’d probably expect him to be pretty resistant to it, or able to outright control and redirect any fire cast at him.

And agreed that TIM basically looks like a first draft for a generic anime starting villain.
It would, it would.

TheHan posted:

If I had to guess it was just to set up a “clever” way to defeat the infernomancer. Since we just got introduced to the guy we don’t know anything about what he is or how he works, so Mookie has to very quickly show the fire healing thing to subvert it immediately with the white magic. It plays out like a game mechanic you would learn in a turn based RPG, probably because it is.
Since the magic system in 3d-Deegan is just final fantasy/dnd, that would be a good guess as to an explanation.

Heliotrope posted:

If I remember, Mookie later said that the fire healing is only temporary. I don't know if it comes up in the strip or was just something he said when people pointed out "Doesn't this guy heal by getting set on fire?"
I don't remember this being said textually (not to say that that it doesn't happen or isn't hidden away in an old blog post) but it's certainly a possibility. If there's one thing Mookie loves and has from day 1 it's retconning obvious plot holes.

FlocksOfMice posted:

Why even plot it out that he's healed by fire if his being healed by fire is just going to get immediately undone anyway? What narrative point does that serve at all, other than to pad things out? At least the fake-out with Dominic is there to say "Dominic is very clever and a puppetmaster" the healing him with fire does literally nothing other than, I guess, answer why Luna can't solve the problem, because of course she can't be allowed to defeat him, right?

But Dominic's brother just could have acted first, anyway. There was--there was no POINT to that, and it's hurting my head.
This really draws attention to how Mookie's whole "I don't plan" thing doesn't just apply on an arc based or even page based scale, but seems to apply within the panels of a single comic. There is no reason for Luna to cast fireball 1 if it is immediately overwritten by Greg (aside to show that she's a woman and can't do stuff.) I think Mookie just drew this in order and then thought "oh I want Greg to do this, that would be cool" and didn't redraw the strip.

While we're talking about this, this is another thing contradicting information we know from earlier. Why wouldn't Luna just use an illusion of a fireball like she did with the racist hicks? Then Tim could think he was going to get healed and be distracted while Greg got into position to kill him with his ki blast. It would let Luna assist and actually kind of do something.

Zereth posted:

Wait.

Why did Tim need the dryad's blood when he could just light himself on fire? Or get somebody to cast fireball at him, whatever.\
EDIT:

:yeah:

also as I recall every time he reappeared, we cared even less about the inhabitants of the world.
Tim does not, at this point in time, have the ability to cast fireball 1. About 5 or 6 years later during the 2 year long "War in Hell" arc, Tim is killed for the 3rd or 4th time. After he is killed, he respawns in Hell where his boss scolds him and then kicks him back up to earth when the comic needs some extra-stakeless filler. He double dips and makes a second pact with his patron, Karnak, the demon of wounds, which gives him the ability to shoot fire out of his gloves and explicitly codifies that since his power stems from the demon of wounds, that he will be eternally hampered by his eye wounds that will never heal so people can't roast Mookie for this obvious plot hole again. I think it also makes him taller and lets him shoot chains out of his rear end like Spawn, but we'll find out when we get there.

Zereth
Jul 9, 2003



Invisible Clergy posted:

Tim does not, at this point in time, have the ability to cast fireball 1.
I mean, he didn't say magical fire, he could build a campfire and stick his head in it. Or get some anachronistic lighter fluid and pour it on himself and strike a match.

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

Zereth posted:

I mean, he didn't say magical fire, he could build a campfire and stick his head in it. Or get some anachronistic lighter fluid and pour it on himself and strike a match.

Both of these things are also true, yes. Since Callan has electric guitars, I'm sure lighter fluid exists.

Mx.
Dec 16, 2006

I'm a great fan! When I watch TV I'm always saying "That's political correctness gone mad!"
Why thankyew!


i absolutely adore bad art. it's so fascinating

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3
I couldn't agree more. Consuming something like this that fails at so many fundamentals really gets you thinking about a lot of components of storytelling in a way that consuming something that is made by someone basically competent really doesn't.

Regalingualius
Jan 7, 2012

We gazed into the eyes of madness... And all we found was horny.




If nothing else, DD has given me tons of insight into what kind of stories I shouldn’t poke with a forty foot pole in my own attempts at writing. :v:

Zereth
Jul 9, 2003



Also, being able to cure his eyes at all seems inconsistent with having a pact with the "Demon of Wounds" as we learn later, but Mookie doesn't seem to care a lot about keeping things straight.

Cat Mattress
Jul 14, 2012

by Cyrano4747

Invisible Clergy posted:

Tim is blind. Why did this plan work? Even if we set aside Dominic's omniscience for a moment, where he'd instinctively know Tim is blind for Reasons, he can see he's got a cloth over his eyes.

Mookie has never been blinded, and therefore does not understand that being blind means not being able to see.

This is a recurring theme, he has at least one other blind villain who just sees normally anyway. No, it can't be daredevil-style super hearing that works like a sonar, he reads books while being blind.

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3
Yeah, yeah he does. He has an after the fact explanation for that too, but it's probably a spoiler and is definitely better seen firsthand due to how dumb it is.

Evrart Claire
Jan 11, 2008
TIM also reads some paper at some point despite being blind/blindfolded.

Marin Karin
Jul 29, 2011

What are you, compared to my magnificence?
Mookie just really liked Illidan from Warcraft, and taking that aesthetic is all the effort he'll put into writing about blindness.

Kavak
Aug 23, 2009


Marin Karin posted:

Mookie just really liked Illidan from Warcraft, and taking that aesthetic is all the effort he'll put into writing about blindness.

This is from late 2002 or so right? You're probably right on the money.

Pyrotoad
Oct 24, 2010


Illegal Hen
IIRC Warcraft's demon hunters 'see' by tracking fel energy which makes marginally more sense than 'just because', like sort of an echolocation thing. Although the playable ones see just fine.

Pyrotoad fucked around with this message at 14:55 on Aug 30, 2020

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!

Zereth posted:

I mean, he didn't say magical fire, he could build a campfire and stick his head in it. Or get some anachronistic lighter fluid and pour it on himself and strike a match.

There seems to be this weird pattern in his stories where Mookie can't figure out how to get his villains to clash with the heroes. If the villains aren't committing senseless evil, then it's some convoluted Scooby-Doo scheme. Croona, Infernomancer, Dr.Hymn, all the antagonists have "gently caress with heroes" as their reason for being but sometimes it's backfilled with these goofy explanations.

Regalingualius
Jan 7, 2012

We gazed into the eyes of madness... And all we found was horny.




Pyrotoad posted:

IIRC Warcraft's demon hunters 'see' by tracking fel energy which makes marginally more sense than 'just because', like sort of an echolocation thing. Although the playable ones see just fine.

This actually gets explained in the novel about him: when Demon Hunters consume the flesh and soul of a demon and then ritualistically gouge out their own eyes, the demon soul grants them access to a whole spectrum of vision, and they eventually learn how to see roughly as normally as they could before.

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

TheHan posted:

There seems to be this weird pattern in his stories where Mookie can't figure out how to get his villains to clash with the heroes. If the villains aren't committing senseless evil, then it's some convoluted Scooby-Doo scheme. Croona, Infernomancer, Dr.Hymn, all the antagonists have "gently caress with heroes" as their reason for being but sometimes it's backfilled with these goofy explanations.

This is true. Once more, it's attributable to Mookie never attaining theory of mind. Whenever Poochie is not onscreen, the bad guys are all looking around asking each other "where's Poochie?"

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

For some reason I can't help but feel like this is my fault

Rotten Red Rod fucked around with this message at 18:38 on Aug 30, 2020

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3
loving Mookie.

YF-23
Feb 17, 2011

My god, it's full of cat!


You forgot to cover the dong. Not that I blame you for not noticing it.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

YF-23 posted:

You forgot to cover the dong. Not that I blame you for not noticing it.

gently caress. Ok, fixed.

Old Kentucky Shark
May 25, 2012

If you think you're gonna get sympathy from the shark, well then, you won't.


The Legacy of Dongadick Dongan: literally dongs in a dong void

Mors Rattus
Oct 25, 2007

FATAL & Friends
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2014-2018

I wonder when the state transition from bad horror to bad porn will happen in the Legacy.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

I kinda get the feeling he's getting that out of his system on Twitter so maybe it won't happen in the comic.

... I hope, anyway.

That said he's taking part in Inktober so get ready for horny Mookie doing a drawing a day pretty soon!

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

Mors Rattus posted:

I wonder when the state transition from bad horror to bad porn will happen in the Legacy.

Implying he won't do both at the same time.

Beelzebufo
Mar 5, 2015

Frog puns are toadally awesome


Speaking of which

Note the time. 3 pm on a Sunday is when Mookie uploads his entire week of work. I just refreshed again and suddenly it was there. i was trying to determine exactly how little time he spends on these.








Yes Thank you mookie for spelling it out for us. Otherwise I would be so confused as to how Snout can survive this thread. Truly your writing is so subtle and original that we, your audience, need you to call things out for us.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

So I guess in this magical fantasy place, the middle finger means the same thing as it does in the United States.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Christ even by Mookie's standards this is exceptionally boring and baffling

FlocksOfMice
Feb 3, 2009
And so he takes a shot that was actually cleverly done, with Snout lowering the book to reveal the Deaf tag, to kind of show naturally that he's immune... and now he does a flashback to it again, and has him point it out, just in case you aren't as clever as he is to pick up on it!

You could have demonstrated the crazy vine guy doing something, mouth open, clearly verbalizing, maybe even have the unconscious people respond to it in some way, make it clear, visually, that he was doing something with sound, and then have Snout shove him down and keep the deaf tag prominent but not, in your textless comic about a deaf character, have an entire panel dedicated to a word balloon and then three panels going "but hahah i'm immune"

like he was SO close and couldn't help but spoil it and that's so deliciously tantalizing

he freakin' looks at his own "deaf" label as if to remind himself that he's deaf, like, he has SUCH a problem with theory of the mind even the characters need to consciously go out of their way to remind themselves of something that's a default fact of their life

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

I'm loving how he drew Snout and this other guy in the exact same position for one and a half pages so he didn't have to work out the anatomy and perspective again each time. He really continues to be exceptionally lazy in his art and it's super clear he's knocking these out as fast as possible.

Also, I can't prove it, but I really get the feeling the big panel on page #2 is traced, as is the bottom panel from this page: https://www.dominic-deegan.com/comic/july-6-2020/

It just looks so totally different from his normal art, the perspective and faces in particular.

Rotten Red Rod fucked around with this message at 20:46 on Aug 30, 2020

Pyrotoad
Oct 24, 2010


Illegal Hen


I know line of sight edits are the lowest of the hanging fruit but come on.

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!
Looking forward to see what could've possibly compelled Snout to haul both these corpses up with him, when one looks completely dead and the other was never alive. It took a whole 14 pages for the necromancer this chapter's named for to show up so we may not even learn what psychic impulses compelled Snout to do this until 2021.

Ague Proof
Jun 5, 2014

they told me
I was everything
We might have another blind character.

No dialog :allears:

Invisible Clergy
Sep 25, 2015

"Behold, I will corrupt your seed, and spread dung upon your faces"

Malachi 2:3

Ague Proof posted:

We might have another blind character.

No dialog :allears:
lol

TheHan posted:

Looking forward to see what could've possibly compelled Snout to haul both these corpses up with him, when one looks completely dead and the other was never alive. It took a whole 14 pages for the necromancer this chapter's named for to show up so we may not even learn what psychic impulses compelled Snout to do this until 2021.
Maybe he was hungry.

Pyrotoad posted:



I know line of sight edits are the lowest of the hanging fruit but come on.
No complaints here. Jesus. Since Mookie loves to have bullshit come in from just off panel, maybe another random encounter is lurking right over the necromancer's shoulder.

Rotten Red Rod posted:

I'm loving how he drew Snout and this other guy in the exact same position for one and a half pages so he didn't have to work out the anatomy and perspective again each time. He really continues to be exceptionally lazy in his art and it's super clear he's knocking these out as fast as possible.

Also, I can't prove it, but I really get the feeling the big panel on page #2 is traced, as is the bottom panel from this page: https://www.dominic-deegan.com/comic/july-6-2020/

It just looks so totally different from his normal art, the perspective and faces in particular.
I mean it's known that Mookie traces, so I don't see anything too unbelievable about the claim here.

FlocksOfMice posted:

And so he takes a shot that was actually cleverly done, with Snout lowering the book to reveal the Deaf tag, to kind of show naturally that he's immune... and now he does a flashback to it again, and has him point it out, just in case you aren't as clever as he is to pick up on it!

You could have demonstrated the crazy vine guy doing something, mouth open, clearly verbalizing, maybe even have the unconscious people respond to it in some way, make it clear, visually, that he was doing something with sound, and then have Snout shove him down and keep the deaf tag prominent but not, in your textless comic about a deaf character, have an entire panel dedicated to a word balloon and then three panels going "but hahah i'm immune"

like he was SO close and couldn't help but spoil it and that's so deliciously tantalizing

he freakin' looks at his own "deaf" label as if to remind himself that he's deaf, like, he has SUCH a problem with theory of the mind even the characters need to consciously go out of their way to remind themselves of something that's a default fact of their life
Mookie thinks that one of the mains having protection from x colored mana is the same thing as them being clever, or him writing a twist, but it's the opposite. It just means there's never even the pretense that Snout is in danger from baron red vines here.

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Christ even by Mookie's standards this is exceptionally boring and baffling
I'm glad we've got the reread going because there's so little to say about this week's updates.

catlord
Mar 22, 2009

What's on your mind, Axa?
You know, there could have been a fun little The Yattering and Jack type story here where the evil vine things are trying to corrupt and tempt a completely oblivious Snout and get more and more frustrated as he just goes about his... whatever he's doing. Of course, that'd require a good sense of dark comedy and timing, and I've not really seen any evidence of either.

TheHan
Oct 29, 2011

Grind, you poor fool!
Grind straight for the stars!

Invisible Clergy posted:

Maybe he was hungry.

I wish! Anything to give this man-void even a sliver of personality. He doesn't want for anything, he isn't searching for something he needs, he isn't growing from his experiences or affecting the world around him through his actions. He's just an object moving through space.

Rotten Red Rod
Mar 5, 2002

Well his one character trait is that he is a Good Guy, which is what this arc seems to be emphasizing.

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Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Rotten Red Rod posted:

Well his one character trait is that he is a Good Guy, which is what this arc seems to be emphasizing.

The Good Guy abandoned his friends to go wandering around instead of showing any concern about them at all, since last he saw they were both frightened of the other two who beat his rear end.

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