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PoptartsNinja posted:It has been less than two weeks since Snout met the Ink Witch and his house got exploded.
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There is no sense of geography in any of this, which makes all the walking especially pointless. They just happen across random things. Come to think of it this is still just the driving sequences from Manos.
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Dec 7, 2020 09:40
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The testicle trees are pretty funny but I don't think mookie intended for it.
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Dec 7, 2020 10:35
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It's nuts how you only need to make a few changes to make this page better: Change the second panel into nighttime so that there's a better sense of time progression. Add in some cut-ins of Corpsemomwife making progress in learning how to write or Arudak and Ink Witch pointing Snout where he should go so we can tell that things are happening during the walk. Lastly, change the location of the last panel to where Snout needs to be so the story can finally move on. I don't know if it would be good, but at least it wouldn't feel like such a massive waste of space.
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Dec 7, 2020 10:41
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this travel page would be more fun if it wasnt the millionth time it came up and also if something interesting happened in the meanwhile
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Dec 7, 2020 11:38
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It'd help if they interacted with the environments they visit in any meaningful way, but that would also require Mookie spending more than a single panel in them. As it is, every prolonged walking trip Snout goes on is just a series of postcards with no context as to why we should give a drat.
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Dec 7, 2020 12:25
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amigolupus posted:It's nuts how you only need to make a few changes to make this page better: Change the second panel into nighttime so that there's a better sense of time progression.
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Dec 7, 2020 13:38
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Who is pumped up for ANOTHER TRAVEL DIGRESSION DELAYING THE MAIN PLOT????
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Dec 8, 2020 18:14
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First panel: Walking. Second panel: A conflict happens! Third panel: The conflict is resolved. Resume walking. Storytelling!
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Dec 8, 2020 18:19
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For sale: overalls with DEAF patch, never worn
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Dec 8, 2020 18:56
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In a better comic with a competent writer, Snout would look at those plants crumbling into inky pieces and compare it to how Ink Witch always lets him down and that his trust on her is nothing more than a flimsy sham.
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Dec 8, 2020 20:06
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It's actually a metaphor for his erection.
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Dec 8, 2020 22:21
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Speaking of Mookie's erection... Oh no. What a shame.
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Dec 8, 2020 22:26
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I'm getting particularly bored of his lovely woodland creature porn. We get it Mookie, you're horny.
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Dec 8, 2020 22:29
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A tiny part of me is morbidly curious what horrible mutant monstrosity he thinks an erection should look like, but I'm absolutely not curious enough to check or pay for it.
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Dec 8, 2020 22:33
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I would be rather surprised if he drew an erection at all, he’s pretty consistently avoided it in all previous pictures.
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Dec 8, 2020 23:14
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That dryad's "Oh, my!" expression WE GET IT YOU'RE BEING NAUGHTY
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Dec 8, 2020 23:15
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Heh I didn't even notice until just now how bad he hosed up the satyr's legs This is probably what happens when he has nothing to trace off of
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Dec 9, 2020 00:45
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Who is pumped up for ANOTHER TRAVEL DIGRESSION DELAYING THE MAIN PLOT???? This clearly isn't a purpose-built bridge. There's apparently no time pressure for the journey. All weird plants you have met have tried to kill you. Take a day or two, look for a safer crossing.
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Dec 9, 2020 01:31
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maltesh posted:This clearly isn't a purpose-built bridge. Again, no major roads or trade routes just outside a major city, apparently.
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Dec 9, 2020 01:36
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It's Infrastructure Week.
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Dec 9, 2020 01:37
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Who is pumped up for ANOTHER TRAVEL DIGRESSION DELAYING THE MAIN PLOT???? This comic turned into recapping a sidescrolling platform game, but without the action.
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Dec 9, 2020 02:02
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Speaking of Mookie's erection... The anatomy on this. :0
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Dec 9, 2020 03:37
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Imagine paying $15 a month to see bad drawings of flaccid dongs
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Dec 9, 2020 03:42
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Oh lol, it totally is at the $15 level, I didn't even notice that.
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Dec 9, 2020 05:07
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Oh lol, it totally is at the $15 level, I didn't even notice that. He also titled that drawing "aftermath" so it's probably a flaccid dong except with jizz somewhere.
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Heh I didn't even notice until just now how bad he hosed up the satyr's legs I hate this so much, it's not that hard to draw good satyr legs! These make me ill to see.
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Dec 9, 2020 07:02
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OK, they're past that obstacle, time to continue along to the main plot. PSYCHE! The digression is now a REGRESSION!
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Dec 10, 2020 17:48
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Loony Tunes assed cliff breaking off as a perfect chunk that falls perfectly downward instead of tumbling or indeed acting like a physical object at all, I hate it.
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Dec 10, 2020 17:50
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It's ok, they apparently crashed into a semi-fluid mass of Mookie's new brush setting, so I'm sure they're. safe? are they still falling in that last panel? did they hit trees? water? did they fall into an ink witch dream???
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Dec 10, 2020 19:35
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WHY DOES NOTHING EVER HAPPEN
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Dec 10, 2020 19:41
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Random guess: Snout will end up injured from the fall, but Corpsemomwife will turn out to be a white mage so there's no tension anyway. And I guess Corpsemomwife can heal by kissing Mookie's ouchies away or something.
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Dec 10, 2020 19:43
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GrossMurpel posted:WHY DOES NOTHING EVER HAPPEN I don't know what you're talking about. They almost fell off a cliff, then they didn't, and then they did. What more excitement do you want? Next comic, they'll keep walking again.
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Dec 10, 2020 19:43
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Huh. A rare instance of mookie refusing his own diffusion of tension. Too bad there's no stakes to the tension, because any interest in the doings of these characters has been systematically assassinated by the author.
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Dec 10, 2020 19:45
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amigolupus posted:Random guess: Snout will end up injured from the fall, but Corpsemomwife will turn out to be a white mage so there's no tension anyway. And I guess Corpsemomwife can heal by kissing Mookie's ouchies away or something. And when it just so happens that one of his wounds was on his dick, well...
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Dec 10, 2020 23:06
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How long has this comic been going? Two years?
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YF-23 posted:Huh. A rare instance of mookie refusing his own diffusion of tension. Too bad there's no stakes to the tension, because any interest in the doings of these characters has been systematically assassinated by the author. It's possible the very next comic will have this problem instantly solved
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Dec 11, 2020 04:28
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I want to post the Wild World of Batwoman clip with Tom Servo just yelling "END" but in order for something to end it has to actually begin.
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Dec 11, 2020 08:53
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DamnitGannet posted:How long has this comic been going? Two years? A year and five months.
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Maxwell Lord posted:A year and five months. To be fair 15 months of that is all travel montages, dream sequences, and recaps.
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