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amigolupus posted:Mookie came up with an idea for his imaginary race's culture but was too lazy to think the details through. quote:If Mookie wanted us to like Milov, then having the supposedly-progressive guy be the one to blow up the church to appease and fall back in line with the conservatives sure is something. If Mookie had any understanding of writing themes or characterization... There's a very low bar in coming up with satisfying story beats and Mookie fails it every time. I'm not even sure if what happened in werewolf country was originally what Mookie had in mind. He was still reeling from his own IRL breakup and that was clearly influencing...well, everything. The only story beats he wanted to satisfy were his own to make him feel better. Especially for Siegfried. Making the whole cast of characters hate him was still going to happen no matter what, I think.
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 14:55 |
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Bismuth posted:I hate mookie using that splotchy inky brush for ALL plants as well as the ink effects, I didnt even know the necromantic vines were supposed to look like plants at first, and in that image. I wish he'd just draw on leaves or flowers at least for closeups or not always use pitch black
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 15:25 |
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amigolupus posted:If Mookie wanted us to like Milov, then having the supposedly-progressive guy be the one to blow up the church to appease and fall back in line with the conservatives sure is something. If Mookie had any understanding of writing themes or characterization, then Milov could've been torn between being loyal to his people's traditions or loyal with his ideals. Maybe have the ordeal with Siggy give Milov the confidence to say gently caress you to the conservatives and protect the church because he's being loyal to his ideals. Or maybe he could find some clever third solution. There's a very low bar in coming up with satisfying story beats and Mookie fails it every time. But if Milov didn't blow up the church, how would Jayden be punished for her crimes? I mean that's really what it's all about, I think. "Look what you and your wandering uterus did Jayden, Milov had to blow up the Luanian church!" It's just like when Mookie writes arbitrary, ridiculous laws for his fantasy world that force the plot to go where he wants, except he built this whole werewolf culture around shaming one woman.
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 15:36 |
I'm going to call it as inkwitch joining in on the dream, just to be contrarian
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 15:37 |
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RandomPauI posted:I'm going to call it as inkwitch joining in on the dream, just to be contrarian I was thinking the same thing because it will lead to Mookie stepping on more rakes while self-congratulating
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 17:04 |
amigolupus posted:As an aside, I loving hate how Katya stopped mattering to the plot as soon as Mookie reveals that she has a mental disability. Don't worry, she comes back for the arc based around the worst character.
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 17:27 |
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Mookie's taking a break next week: https://www.dominic-deegan.com/my-annual-summer-break-for-2021/
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 17:28 |
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The plants in the library were there to link Corpse-lady's vine theme to Ink Witch and Arudak's ink and paper themes.
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 17:55 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Mookie's taking a break next week: https://www.dominic-deegan.com/my-annual-summer-break-for-2021/ I don't believe this chapter will end soon. Mookie is just straight up lying or delusional that this is story telling
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 18:57 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Mookie's taking a break next week: https://www.dominic-deegan.com/my-annual-summer-break-for-2021/ Is this disappointment I'm feeling?
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 21:21 |
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Now’s your chance to give up Mookie! Take two weeks and we won’t even remember the name Snout.
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# ? Jul 28, 2021 21:35 |
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I realized something, I think he traced that pose and then just added a second (third?) tit to the side under corpsemomwife's arm to try and make her look like she was twisted that way, because if you erase that armpittit it actually looks kind of normal but hes so bad at anatomy he didnt know how to actually make her look twisted, so he just drew a third tit also i have the mind of a 13yo
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 00:42 |
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Man I happened to be laying down while checking this thread and I decided to try replicating Corpsemom's pose. It was a pretty bad experience.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 01:30 |
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RoboRodent posted:Oh yes, I, too, sleep contorted so that both my rear end and tits point towards the ceiling and any unseen voyeurs.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 01:34 |
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Fifth result when searching "couple sleeping"
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 06:15 |
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Bone grass posted:Fifth result when searching "couple sleeping" I don't know why I keep being surprised by this happening
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 06:25 |
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Nah, that can't be it, it's completely flipped from how Mookie drew his scene. That means he couldn't have traced it. That is apparently what Mookie thought people would say when he had the "clever" idea to flip it.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 07:03 |
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Literally the only significant change is loving up her chest so he draw draw both her breasts. But remember, this man definitely has a developed understanding of anatomy and is not a hack!
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 07:16 |
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God bless this trash fire.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 08:11 |
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Thank you for this gif(t)
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 08:53 |
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I cannot get over the decision to give her an extra armpit boob.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 09:29 |
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Bone grass posted:Fifth result when searching "couple sleeping" Of course. Of course. The only thing that suggested it be anything else was the hosed up boobs.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 09:45 |
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One thing that bugs me is that in order to get to that pose, Corpsemomwife is once again the one to scoot over and cuddle Snout while he just lies there.TheHan posted:But if Milov didn't blow up the church, how would Jayden be punished for her crimes? I mean that's really what it's all about, I think. "Look what you and your wandering uterus did Jayden, Milov had to blow up the Luanian church!" It's just like when Mookie writes arbitrary, ridiculous laws for his fantasy world that force the plot to go where he wants, except he built this whole werewolf culture around shaming one woman. Agreed, it's really obvious how Mookie's first priority was to shame and punish Jayden, and every detail in this story just stemmed from it. Mookie finally had the chance to expand what a foreign country's culture is like, maybe show some actual writing chops, and he squandered it. It's really loving gross how much Jayden gets shat on considering Milov does worse with his successful* murder and reinforcing xenophobia by blowing up the church.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 12:15 |
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HazCat posted:
He drew her butt and breasts i in the wrong place, even when tracing
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 13:55 |
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What, you don’t have armtits
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 13:59 |
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His arm is in an unatural position, because the original is much more of a flat overhead view than the angle Mookie drew the headboard at.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 14:08 |
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Just when I thought I was out (because this comic can be agonizingly boring), Mookie pulls me back in
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 14:13 |
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Mors Rattus posted:What, you don’t have armtits https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wk7PWvZcViI
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 14:49 |
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Once again I am impressed not just by the shameless tracing but how he still manages to gently caress it up and make it look bad.
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# ? Jul 29, 2021 16:09 |
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a trace so nice he used it twice e: had to double check this was a new page that symbol is.... very yonic Mx. fucked around with this message at 13:09 on Jul 30, 2021 |
# ? Jul 30, 2021 13:05 |
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Did she just grow a whole head taller?
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 13:18 |
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Man does not have a gently caress to give. Even considered this would be a very unsatisfying page to leave on and said who cares.
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 13:19 |
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Why does he shade her breasts that way, with a line running down from the nipple? It looks like breast reduction scars. Also, seemingly every figure on this page is being traced. We're fast approaching what I predicted: Mookie will soon never have to actually draw Snout - or possibly anyone else - again. Edit: gently caress, he's drawing her pubic hair shaved on the lips again? That's such a weird little gross detail. Rotten Red Rod fucked around with this message at 13:58 on Jul 30, 2021 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Why does he shade her breasts that way, with a line running down from the nipple? It looks like breast reduction scars. Yeah, Jesus, these were my first reactions to that as well. What's good is the stuff that he doesn't draw, and what's weird and creepy are the little details he does draw. But it's also hilarious that he's so adherent to using traces that Corpsemom has gone from somewhat pudgy to fantasy-model thin because god forbid he use these photos for suggestion and placement rather than just tracing outlines.
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 14:18 |
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Rotten Red Rod posted:Why does he shade her breasts that way, with a line running down from the nipple? It looks like breast reduction scars. I think this is what he's going for.
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 14:41 |
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Surely crosshatching requires at least two lines
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 16:45 |
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Mors Rattus posted:Did she just grow a whole head taller? This had better be hosed up perspective on his end, because I shudder to think what the implications would be otherwise.
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 17:32 |
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People just get bigger and smaller in ~mindscapes~. Dominic had a whole thing where he flexed his super wizard brain on people by turning into a giant, and there was the giant fire Greg thing.
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 17:39 |
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I think the size is dreamscape poo poo and not bad perspective or whatever.
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# ? Jul 30, 2021 17:50 |
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I think the size was originally bad perspective but once Mookie reads this thread he will turn it into dreamscape poo poo just so he can say "Gotcha!"
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