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JMBosch
May 28, 2006

You're dead.
That's your greatest weapon.
Yeah, I think I dropped the ball in this last round. I wanted to add a lot more space for roleplaying between the rounds in Spotlight Harmony because, currently, it feels much more like a boardgame than an RPG, but I basically got to none of that. I've just been copyediting, fixing some broken bits, and rephrasing things to work more generically.

I mostly had up until now to get it done because I'm super busy and on vacation for the next week, so I apologize to the original author and Dog Kisser. I'll still send in what I've got in a few days, as some of the fixes will definitely help whoever might run with the project after the competition, but I think it'll only be marginally more complete than the document I received this round.

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potatocubed
Jul 26, 2012

*rathian noises*
Alright, third-round entry in. I didn't really change much, just expanded on what was already there.

That said, I'd been kind of burned out on game design before I signed up for this little contest and this was a fun way to get back into it -- just doing small bits and pieces, a mechanism there, some lore here, limited to a couple of thousand words a go, that kind of thing. I've enjoyed all three stages and I'm looking forward to seeing what people do with the stuff I made in prior rounds.

Zurui
Apr 20, 2005
Even now...



I'm very glad you enjoyed it! That was kind of the hope; it's easy to burn out having to carry the torch from concept to execution on a single idea. Plus, working with other people is always more fun!

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011


I wanna sing one for the cars
That are right now headed silent down the highway
And it's dark and there is nobody driving And something has got to give

I've had some pretty serious IRL stuff come up over this past week; I'm going to do my best, but I apologize in advance if I don't submit, or it's really bad.

Otherkinsey Scale
Jul 17, 2012

Just a little bit of sunshine!
I'm in a similar spot. I'll do my best to get it in, but the heat lately has been so epochally awful, I've just had no energy for creative endeavours.

Vox Valentine
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

By hook or by crook I'll be done with this entry come Sunday. It's not gonna be pretty but it'll be done. Layout is a hell of a thing I have trouble getting a handle on or making look good because I just do everything in Word.

DalaranJ
Apr 15, 2008

Yosuke will now die for you.
Yeah, my formatting consists of:
a) Make sure everything is a consistent font scheme
b) Add page breaks so tables don't get split

e: 25 entries left to go.

DalaranJ fucked around with this message at 06:55 on Aug 14, 2021

DalaranJ
Apr 15, 2008

Yosuke will now die for you.
*Yeets self unceremoniously over the finish line*

I'm done. Finally.

e: Unsurprisingly, google drive doesn't care what the documents original formatting settings were. Oh, well.

DalaranJ fucked around with this message at 23:14 on Aug 14, 2021

Vox Valentine
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

Done. First one of these I've ever done and happy I got it done a day earlier. This was a good experience of figuring out how to pace myself and chip away at something to make a complete game, but wow did it help that I kept getting other people's stuff or prompts to work off of instead of making it all from scratch.

Agent Rush
Aug 30, 2008

You looked, Junker!
I wasn't able to get anything done with my selection, it looks like I'll be missing the deadline. :(

LaSquida
Nov 1, 2012

Just keep on walkin'.
Since this is the final leg of the jam, is it better to turn in something incomplete tonight or something feature complete in the next few days?

DalaranJ
Apr 15, 2008

Yosuke will now die for you.
Personally I'd like to see completed versions of games that I worked on so I can post them on my itch.io, but I don't know what's best for the contest.

LaSquida
Nov 1, 2012

Just keep on walkin'.
Well, the main thing that isn't useable-finished is the character classes, so I'm going to send in the rest of it tonight, and send in/make available the second part when it's finished (hopefully tomorrow)

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011


I wanna sing one for the cars
That are right now headed silent down the highway
And it's dark and there is nobody driving And something has got to give

Welp, here's hoping being 20 minutes late and having no formatting besides basic Google Docs stuff is okay. At least it's in?

WereGoat
Apr 28, 2017

I had a hectic few weeks, so I'm only half done. Not made the deadline, and won't be ready for a few days. I'll have missed the cut off, but I'll try and get something posted in a few days.

Lux Anima
Apr 17, 2016


Dinosaur Gum
*hacker voice*

I'm in. :coal:

Zurui
Apr 20, 2005
Even now...



Y'all have turned in some amazing stuff and it sounds like there's till more cooking!

Here is the list of entries so far

pre:
DalaranJ	Sćhrímnir
JMBosch		Tempo City Dreams
Hostile V	MAGICON
LaSquida	Shadow of the Moon Wizard
Antivehicular	In the Court of the Invisible King
Lux Animus	Skeleton Justice Warriors - Wizards Must Die!
Let me know if I missed anyone.

In the interest of encouraging fun, creativity, and goodwill, I will be extending the contest for another week. You have until the end of next Sunday, 22 August, to get your final finished really-for-real-complete version of your game in. Formatting is not important but all other forms of content are! Also, as mentioned before, there is no word limit so if you need 2000 words to have playbooks or classes or random generation tables loving rock out.

Zurui fucked around with this message at 21:46 on Aug 16, 2021

Vox Valentine
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

Zurui posted:

Y'all have turned in some amazing stuff and it sounds like there's till more cooking!


pre:
DalaranJ	Sćhrímnir
JMBosch		Tempo City Dreams
Hostile V	MAGICON
LaSquida	Shadow of the Moon Wizard
Antivehicular	In the Court of the Invisible King
Lux Animus	Skeleton Justice Warriors - Wizards Must Die!
Let me know if I missed anyone.

In the interest of encouraging fun, creativity, and goodwill, I will be extending the contest for another week. You have until the end of next Sunday, 22 August, to get your final finished really-for-real-complete version of your game in. Formatting is not important but all other forms of content are! Also, as mentioned before, there is no word limit so if you need 2000 words to have playbooks or classes or random generation tables loving rock out.
(you might wanna take our emails out of that signup sheet)

Vox Valentine fucked around with this message at 22:05 on Aug 16, 2021

Dog Kisser
Mar 30, 2005

But People have fears that beasts do not. Questions, too.
That's actually awesome, maybe I can get something out then!

potatocubed
Jul 26, 2012

*rathian noises*

Zurui posted:

Y'all have turned in some amazing stuff and it sounds like there's till more cooking!

Here is the list of entries so far

pre:
DalaranJ	Sćhrímnir
JMBosch		Tempo City Dreams
Hostile V	MAGICON
LaSquida	Shadow of the Moon Wizard
Antivehicular	In the Court of the Invisible King
Lux Animus	Skeleton Justice Warriors - Wizards Must Die!
Let me know if I missed anyone.

I'm on the spreadsheet but not on the above list, and I definitely sent you the link a few days ago.

Zurui
Apr 20, 2005
Even now...



Hostile V posted:

(you might wanna take our emails out of that signup sheet)

poo poo poo poo poo poo wrong link

I've changed it so there's no access to that sheet. Will you please edit it out in your quote as well?

Zurui fucked around with this message at 21:48 on Aug 16, 2021

Zurui
Apr 20, 2005
Even now...



potatocubed posted:

I'm on the spreadsheet but not on the above list, and I definitely sent you the link a few days ago.

Will you please re-send it? I cannot find it.

Thank you!

LaSquida
Nov 1, 2012

Just keep on walkin'.

Zurui posted:

Y'all have turned in some amazing stuff and it sounds like there's till more cooking!

Here is the list of entries so far

pre:
DalaranJ	Sćhrímnir
JMBosch		Tempo City Dreams
Hostile V	MAGICON
LaSquida	Shadow of the Moon Wizard
Antivehicular	In the Court of the Invisible King
Lux Animus	Skeleton Justice Warriors - Wizards Must Die!
Let me know if I missed anyone.

In the interest of encouraging fun, creativity, and goodwill, I will be extending the contest for another week. You have until the end of next Sunday, 22 August, to get your final finished really-for-real-complete version of your game in. Formatting is not important but all other forms of content are! Also, as mentioned before, there is no word limit so if you need 2000 words to have playbooks or classes or random generation tables loving rock out.

Hoshit! Time to get those character classes done!

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011


I wanna sing one for the cars
That are right now headed silent down the highway
And it's dark and there is nobody driving And something has got to give

Zurui posted:

In the interest of encouraging fun, creativity, and goodwill, I will be extending the contest for another week. You have until the end of next Sunday, 22 August, to get your final finished really-for-real-complete version of your game in. Formatting is not important but all other forms of content are! Also, as mentioned before, there is no word limit so if you need 2000 words to have playbooks or classes or random generation tables loving rock out.

Can those of us who already submitted take this week to get you a better version? I have, uh, a lot of post-submission regrets and would really love to be able to give it another swing.

Vox Valentine
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

Zurui posted:

poo poo poo poo poo poo wrong link

I've changed it so there's no access to that sheet. Will you please edit it out in your quote as well?
No worries.

Agent Rush
Aug 30, 2008

You looked, Junker!

Zurui posted:

Y'all have turned in some amazing stuff and it sounds like there's till more cooking!

Here is the list of entries so far

pre:
DalaranJ	Sćhrímnir
JMBosch		Tempo City Dreams
Hostile V	MAGICON
LaSquida	Shadow of the Moon Wizard
Antivehicular	In the Court of the Invisible King
Lux Animus	Skeleton Justice Warriors - Wizards Must Die!
Let me know if I missed anyone.

In the interest of encouraging fun, creativity, and goodwill, I will be extending the contest for another week. You have until the end of next Sunday, 22 August, to get your final finished really-for-real-complete version of your game in. Formatting is not important but all other forms of content are! Also, as mentioned before, there is no word limit so if you need 2000 words to have playbooks or classes or random generation tables loving rock out.

Oh! I'm not sure what I can do, but with another week I might be able to finish something. Thanks!

DalaranJ
Apr 15, 2008

Yosuke will now die for you.

Zurui posted:

Here is the list of entries so far

Oh god, somehow the formatting got even worse when it transferred to your drive. It's truly amazing.

Zurui
Apr 20, 2005
Even now...



Antivehicular posted:

Can those of us who already submitted take this week to get you a better version? I have, uh, a lot of post-submission regrets and would really love to be able to give it another swing.

Yes please! Treat this as if we'd just nullified the previous submissions and you can send over your final version on Sunday.


DalaranJ posted:

Oh god, somehow the formatting got even worse when it transferred to your drive. It's truly amazing.

If you'd like me to keep yours as a PDF or something I'd be happy to.

Vox Valentine
May 31, 2013

Solving all of life's problems through enhanced casting of Occam's Razor. Reward yourself with an imaginary chalice.

How's y'alls entries coming?

Dog Kisser
Mar 30, 2005

But People have fears that beasts do not. Questions, too.
So, strangely okay EXCEPT I refocused on UG Overdrive instead of Pirates. Thinking I'll still be done by tonight, hopefully!

LaSquida
Nov 1, 2012

Just keep on walkin'.
:smith:

Dog Kisser
Mar 30, 2005

But People have fears that beasts do not. Questions, too.

Sorry, the problem with Pirates! is that it's just... Very good? I'd run it as is! I spent a week banging my head against it and I couldn't think of a clever twist on it!

DalaranJ
Apr 15, 2008

Yosuke will now die for you.

Zurui posted:

If you'd like me to keep yours as a PDF or something I'd be happy to.

It was too much trouble for me to reformat it in Affinity. I would have had to recreate all the tables by hand.

Agent Rush
Aug 30, 2008

You looked, Junker!

Hostile V posted:

How's y'alls entries coming?

Another messed up week, but at least I managed to address some of the holes and turn something in.

LaSquida
Nov 1, 2012

Just keep on walkin'.
It's ugly, but in much happier with what I got in with the additional week.

Dog Kisser
Mar 30, 2005

But People have fears that beasts do not. Questions, too.
Submitted! Very late! Two hours after a week late! ALSO ended up being it off UG Overdrive instead of my stated game!

I just had a weird inspiration!

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011


I wanna sing one for the cars
That are right now headed silent down the highway
And it's dark and there is nobody driving And something has got to give

Just got my revision in; it's probably not as extensive as it needed to be, but it addresses my major concerns with my last design. I'm not particularly pleased with it, but it's at least kinda finished, so that's good?

Otherkinsey Scale
Jul 17, 2012

Just a little bit of sunshine!
In under the wire! I ended up taking up the Jolly Roger of Let's Be Pirates. I concur with Dog Kisser that it was already a very strong entry on its own merits, so I mainly applied my own strengths - editing, formatting, and a bit of prose to taste.

Zurui
Apr 20, 2005
Even now...



Yesterday and today are a bit crazy for me but I will confirm receipt some time today and then we'll get to judging!

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DalaranJ
Apr 15, 2008

Yosuke will now die for you.
Any news yet, Zurui?

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