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OK it is on CSC. Better not steal my Mythbuster/Pirate fanfic idea.
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holy poo poo like 100 posts...gently caress you guys
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Apr 2, 2013 21:22
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Martello posted:holy poo poo like 100 posts...gently caress you guys Reported for no punctuation/capitals, round here we got standards new fella.
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Apr 2, 2013 21:56
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Martello posted:holy poo poo like 100 posts...gently caress you guys gently caress you for abandoning the thread long enough for it accrue 100 new posts YOU JERK 
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Apr 2, 2013 22:02
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Martello posted:holy poo poo like 100 posts...gently caress you guys A-bloo-bloo motherfucker. 45 pages and a fuckload of the old thread more like it. Black Griffon fucked around with this message at 00:15 on Apr 3, 2013 |
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Apr 2, 2013 22:11
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Do we have to incorporate the title of the drawing as well as the quote, or is the quote fine on its own?
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Apr 2, 2013 22:25
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Steriletom posted:Do we have to incorporate the title of the drawing as well as the quote, or is the quote fine on its own? I want to judge again so I get to shout at posts like this. READ THE PROMPT WRITE THE STORY POST THE STORY
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Apr 2, 2013 22:54
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Really the process should go: read the prompt, ignore the prompt, write the story you felt like writing, then go back and try to shoe horn the prompt back in. Shrug your shoulders and post.
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Apr 2, 2013 23:06
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sebmojo posted:I want to judge again so I get to shout at posts like this. I reread the prompt to try and figure out what got your panties into such a bunch and the best I can come up with is that you took my use of "incorporate" to mean quote verbatim as opposed to what I actually meant(quoted below). systran posted:I updated the prompt again to make it extremely clear that you should not copy and paste the quote into your piece. "Incorporate" meant that you should break up the essence of that quote so that it flows back into your work in wonderful ways. Each picture comes with a title and a quote-such as the below. Since the prompt makes no mention of the title, I think it's fair game to ask for clarity. http://hrsbstaff.ednet.ns.ca/davidc/6c_files/documents/mysteries/Harris%20Burdick/justdesert.htm
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Apr 2, 2013 23:14
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Noah posted:Really the process should go: read the prompt, ignore the prompt, write the story you felt like writing, then go back and try to shoe horn the prompt back in. Shrug your shoulders and post. Truesay.
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Apr 2, 2013 23:14
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I don't give a poo poo about the title of the drawing. I think the quote that goes with the picture and the Borges quote are enough constrictions so ignore the title of the picture if you want. If you want to cleverly work the title in as well then you are free to do so.
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Apr 2, 2013 23:27
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In with 'Uninvited Guests' His heart was pounding. He was sure he had seen the doorknob turn.
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Apr 2, 2013 23:36
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sebmojo posted:I want to judge again so I get to shout at posts like this. Noah posted:Really the process should go: read the prompt, ignore the prompt, write the story you felt like writing, then go back and try to shoe horn the prompt back in. Shrug your shoulders and post. This poo poo right here is why seb's so much better than you fuckers. EFFECTIVE USE OF WORDS
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Apr 3, 2013 00:11
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Nubile Hillock posted:This poo poo right here is why seb's so much better than you fuckers. EFFECTIVE USE OF WORDS Round 2 of 3. Find a judge.
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Apr 3, 2013 00:27
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Noah posted:Round 2 of 3. Find a judge. Saddest Rhino. sebmojo fucked around with this message at 12:31 on Apr 3, 2013 |
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Apr 3, 2013 00:30
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Noah posted:Round 2 of 3. Find a judge. sebmojo posted:Saddest Rhino. Hello!  EDIT:  Thunderbrawl (ROUND 2 OF 3) - Noah vs Nubile Hillock vs sebmojo PROMPT: Visit the Anti-Food Porn thread and choose a food that is disgusting to you. You shall then write a loving culinary porn story revolving that particular dish/abomination that makes it sound amazing and delicious. RULE: You may not choose a disgusting food you secretly like (like Durian, I actually love that, gently caress Andrew Zimmerman and his inability to discern what food is delicious) (also if you disobey this rule, you know you are only bluffing to yourself and you will never live it down, winning this thunderbrawl on a lie) 1000 words max, submission is the same deadline as this week's TD. The Saddest Rhino fucked around with this message at 04:10 on Apr 3, 2013 |
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Apr 3, 2013 02:52
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Fuckit I'm in. http://hrsbstaff.ednet.ns.ca/davidc/6c_files/documents/mysteries/window.htm The Third-Floor Bedroom
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The Saddest Rhino posted:Hello! I think it's me and Noah in the brawl. But I'll do the story either way because that is the right thing to do. vvvvv YOUR BLOOD WILL STAIN THE SAND vvvvv sebmojo fucked around with this message at 04:09 on Apr 3, 2013 |
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Apr 3, 2013 03:49
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ You're gonna get smeared like wing sauce on a fat man's shirt. sebmojo posted:I think it's me and Noah in the brawl. gently caress it, three way brawl! I'm in with 
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Apr 3, 2013 04:08
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^^^^ YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS This is very sexy I am okay with that Edited my post to reflect 3-way brawl 
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Apr 3, 2013 04:10
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Menage et brawl brb solo-brawling in the corner
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Apr 3, 2013 04:13
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Nubile Hillock posted:gently caress it, three way brawl! Holy poo poo. Well. That's certainly something to look forward to reading, at least.
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Apr 3, 2013 04:13
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Martello posted:holy poo poo like 100 posts...gently caress you guys
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Apr 3, 2013 05:14
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I'm D'ing my TBD: I'm now IN for THE THIRD-FLOOR BEDROOM.
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Apr 3, 2013 07:25
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Sitting Here posted:Menage et brawl Sorry what was that ms I will brawl anyone I couldn't quite hear you over the sound of you not brawling anyone
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Apr 3, 2013 10:27
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Now that I actually am going through that thread there's a lot of people just flipping out over minor stuff like century eggs and deep fried cupcakes and biscuits with meatballs, goons are so scared of everything. This is pretty cool tho  Thai live "Bat Paste" Soup in milk and herbs The Saddest Rhino fucked around with this message at 10:43 on Apr 3, 2013 |
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Apr 3, 2013 10:32
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Kaethela posted:
I'm in for this belly crime.
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Apr 3, 2013 15:16
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sebmojo posted:Sorry what was that ms I will brawl anyone I couldn't quite hear you over the sound of you not brawling anyone I'll brawl anything with letters, I just was taking in the sweet triple brawl action thanks But I am not some petty wandering ronin, no, I am the shogun who sits in the topmost chamber of their pagoda with all their samurai between they and the door. Fools come to ME to fight. They are dispensed with just as easily. Anyway my av is still the standing wager if anyone is feeling masochistic.
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Apr 3, 2013 16:04
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In. House on maple street.
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Apr 3, 2013 16:39
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In from The Third-Floor Bedroom. Let's see if I can improve over my "second-worst" performance from last time.
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Apr 3, 2013 17:11
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In with And the Cranes Flew Home by Yuriko Nakamura, translated by L. Hanzo Tannousis-Smith.
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Apr 3, 2013 19:24
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Martello posted:In with And the Cranes Flew Home by Yuriko Nakamura, translated by L. Hanzo Tannousis-Smith. *slow clap*
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Apr 3, 2013 19:32
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And also this picture Captain Tory.
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Apr 3, 2013 20:27
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Oh jesus gently caress it's been this long already. Sitting Here - Bury Me With Emeralds Don't have a lot to add to this one, sorry for keeping you waiting! A strong, well put-together story with a clear progression from start to finish. Edged out by Malloons despite being stronger technically, I think. Funky Malloons - Flightless Bird Just gorgeous. I liked this one for the winner because, despite being a little clunkier in parts than Sitting Here's (a few odd word choices and somewhat jarring tone of the dialog at the end), I preferred the setting and story. Kleptobot - Internet Relationship This makes no sense at all. Vague hackers are doing a vague thing. Grammar is busted in places. An undercover FBI agent posts “sorry bro” in an IRC room when he thinks the guy he’s talking to has been arrested and so serves no purpose other than to clue the reader into the big shocking twist. Don’t care. Noah - Second Place Massively unclear opening. So there’s Orson and there’s James and they’re brothers I guess? “That’s what Marcy wanted” Okay so Marcy’s dead? Who’s Marcy? Here’s Samantha who- Oh Marcy’s not dead okay. James is the man of the house so his dad’s dead? Is Orson the oh what he’s the son alright gently caress this I’m starting over. Manages to pull off some fairly unsettling imagery towards the end but by that time the point’s already been made. Imaginary snake bites him and he thinks okay, gonna kill my wife. Giant fly baby stabs him and he thinks yeah alright i’m gonna kill my wife gently caress just siddown. Canadian Surf Club - Thomas Patt This one just flows a little weirdly. Noticeable lack of commas and occasional run-on sentences. The overall feeling I had early on (particularly because of the line "She didn't doubt a word they said." after the couple had said he was a good man) was that Samantha believed Thomas had gotten involved in some bad stuff and that she was frustrated thinking that others knew more than she did, as opposed to less. Seemed a little weird when it became clear what had actually happened. Bad Seafood - The Rock of the Selfish Child Overall strong, couple phrases seem odd. “I’ve never seen my brother cry. He's always been the large one” reads a little oddly, and the last line just seems to be an attempt at writing a proverb and is really heavy handed. Dr. Klocktopussy - Rosie's Bench for the Lonely We’ve got orgasmic again god daaang. I quite like the lighthearted feel of this one, although I'm not seeing much to the end other than "and then she turned into a tree". Few weird proofreading things here and there, but a lot of fun.
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In - http://hrsbstaff.ednet.ns.ca/davidc/6c_files/documents/mysteries/uninvitedguests.htm
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Apr 3, 2013 22:18
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MegaBrawlTytan posted:Fried Tarantulas God help me. Looking through that thread with a hangover is a bad idea.
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In again. Also thanks for the crits guys. She turned into a tree because I was full of regret for skipping the magical realism prompt.
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V for Vegas posted:OK it is on CSC. Better not steal my Mythbuster/Pirate fanfic idea. Martello posted:And also this picture You guys can try, but it won't stack up to my 900 word "schooner is alive and magic and the boy's best friend" rollercoaster.
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Sitting Here posted:I'll brawl anything with letters, I just was taking in the sweet triple brawl action thanks Somewhere in Seattle a girl sits alone in her room, typing. The door is closed; febreeze only partially masking the stale, sweaty odours. Blue light from her monitor scatters off the thumbtacks pinning her anime posters to the wall. Satisfied, she wipes her hands on her jeans. The cheeto-dust stain will be the day’s only lasting accomplishment. After I'm done here I'm coming after you.
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Canadian Surf Club posted:You guys can try, but it won't stack up to my 900 word "schooner is alive and magic and the boy's best friend" rollercoaster. watch me stack up my dick in yo rear end baby bitch hahahaha
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