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Twissted posted:I tried to adjust the seat belt properly, but it was quite difficult with the real coaster gun tucked away inside my hoodie. I reached for the top clasp to untangle an annoying knot when I heard the safety come off the gun. Thinking too quickly, I moved my hand down to find the safety only for the SUV to ride up on a curb. The jostle was all it took. Twissted posted:“Thanks.” I replied clicking the phone shut. I stopped at a red light and waited. A police car pulled up beside me. I quickly put on some sunglasses and a baseball cap, that way if the officer looked over he couldn’t know it was me. Twissted posted:I smiled silently to myself and hung up the phone. pathetic little tramp fucked around with this message at 18:14 on Jun 25, 2013 |
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JosephWongKS posted:Stop being so intellectually lazy! I think this applies to the whole book.
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Vertigo: Plot summary Part 2 I did a bit of checking, the next total lunar eclipse that happens on a blood moon will be Oct. 8th, 2014. Though I very much doubt Miranda thought about that. So, Railrunner got infected by Vertigo, a disease that has 100% fatality rate. And he failed to stop Darkrail's arrival. So he's brought to Timberwolf for treatment. There Railrunner spends about a week suffering from the various effects of Vertigo (including throwing up mixture of oil and hydraulic fluid) and being in operations. But the end result is that he survives because there is something special in his blood. (My bet is that it's because he had measles when humans.) But there is a larger problem. Darkrail is out and has reunited with his waiting Fallen brethren. Railrunner and co have to figure out how to defeat him. Thunderbark knows that Firetrack, the second red, was trying to devise a way to defeat him, but he doesn't know where the information about that would be kept. But he knows that there is a Ferris wheel, called Farris, who knows that. The problem is that Farris the Mayor of Hudong, a city far away from where they are. So Railrunner, Thunderbark, Merrylegs, Static and, ugh, Shadowtrack head out. As they're heading out, they go through a forest. Static becomes increasingly worried since this forest is the home of his former pack, who had exiled him for befriending Thunderbark. Soon enough, Static gets kidnapped in the dead of night, and it's up to Railrunner to rescue him. With the possibly dangerous situation, Railrunner asks Shadowtrack to stay behind, because he's driven by instinct to protect her. Despite what he wanted, Shadowtrack disobeys and she and Thunderbark head in the fray when it looks dark for Railrunner. Railrunner gets mad that Shadowtrack went against his direct orders and he goes to sulk. The conflict will be resolved by the next chapter as according to Leek's Law of "There can't be any lasting conflicts between heroes!" (Shadowtrack will most likely apologize). The second phase of the journey to Hudong takes them through a mountain gorge called "Coaster Graveyard." It's a dangerous place as the roller coaster tracks are in disrepair. And that there are savages that call the gorge their home. But after getting in some precarious situation, one of the said savages rescues the group. It's Shureshot (Yes, she spells it that way). Thunderbark recognizes him since Shureshot was part of a security detail protecting Angeltrack when she had Railrunner. But after Railrunner's assumed death, Shureshot and his team of half-coasters were shunned and they were forced to retreat. Shureshot, along with Jagg and Prototype, decide to join the team. And so the group makes their way to Hudong. Shureshot and Jagg have to stay outside of the city because they're filthy half-coasters. After a bit of rest, the rest of the group meets Farris. Farris doesn't see the real hurry, and jerks Railrunner around by speaking in riddles. Railrunner, amazingly enough, does not threaten him to speak plainly, or that his threats do not affect Farris. Railrunner is left with two clues. "Only a Red can kill an omen" and "Firetrack knows where the secret is" Firetrack is dead already, but there is a museum in Hudong, so the team surmises that the statue of Firetrack there holds the secret of where the method of killing Darkrail is kept. At the statue, Railrunner sees a personalized message addressed to him in the language that only reds can understand. He has to journey to the "Lost Souls Lair" in the Rangora mountains. Third and last part comes later.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 20:29 |
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Holy art style change batman, this doesn't look nearly as bad, it's as if more thought went into it. I think this is what makes me most annoyed - the premise is kind of goofy but it could work. If only all the rules for her world weren't inherently contradictory, if only all her characters weren't scummy assholes who we want to see die, if only if only if only, we could have a respectable story on our hands.
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pathetic little tramp posted:Holy art style change batman, this doesn't look nearly as bad, it's as if more thought went into it. I think this is what makes me most annoyed - the premise is kind of goofy but it could work. If only all the rules for her world weren't inherently contradictory, if only all her characters weren't scummy assholes who we want to see die, if only if only if only, we could have a respectable story on our hands. If only "Twisted" stopped being "Twisted" and Miranda stopped being Miranda.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 21:00 |
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pathetic little tramp posted:Holy art style change batman, this doesn't look nearly as bad, it's as if more thought went into it. I think this is what makes me most annoyed - the premise is kind of goofy but it could work. If only all the rules for her world weren't inherently contradictory, if only all her characters weren't scummy assholes who we want to see die, if only if only if only, we could have a respectable story on our hands.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 23:05 |
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Honestly, beyond the anatomy and the basic concept and everything else, the thing that bugs me the most about Miranda's art is how goddamn smug everybody is all the time.
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# ? Jun 25, 2013 23:47 |
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It rather bothers me that the roller coasters all have the same face. Literally, just take the trimmings off, and every single one of them is the same. Why aren't there different types of coasters, like those hangy-down ones, or a wooden one, so on and so forth?
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DicktheCat posted:It rather bothers me that the roller coasters all have the same face. Literally, just take the trimmings off, and every single one of them is the same. Why aren't there different types of coasters, like those hangy-down ones, or a wooden one, so on and so forth? Thunderbark's supposed to be a wooden coaster, but he has the same face as every other coaster anyway.
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Chapter 60 - Friend or Foe? Part One quote:
The gun isn’t “false”, it’s just that the bullets inside are “fake” “coaster-killers”. Railrunner is too stupid to understand that simple distinction. quote:
I did a word search for “key” in all my chapter reviews up to Chapter 59. Not once was there a mention of Railrunner getting the key to the Park from Thunderbark or anyone else. Also, shouldn’t the “entrance” be at the “front gate” instead of the “back gate”? quote:
Why did he need the key if he was just going to break the lock anyway? quote:
Railrunner has “charged like a gladiator” (Chapter 41), “[fought] like knights” (Chapter 41), “howled like a wolf” (Chapter 16), “squeezed like an anaconda” (Chapter 40), and “[mauled] each other like fighting wolves”. In short, acted like everything other than a “roller coaster”. quote:
In Chapter 1, he said that he’d never been to Mystic Park or any other amusement park, and then after that he went there for a brief “job interview” (Chapter 1), when he chased those two brave police officers into the Park (Chapter 11), when he went to murder those hundreds of police officers after escaping from jail and stealing the McGuffin Jewel (Chapter 18), and when he returned to the real world to “protect” Clare and murder Ironwheel (Chapter 50). He’s never worked a single day in the Park or spent an extended period of time there, nor have there been any scenes of Thunderbark talking about his life as a “human” coaster engineer with Railrunner. So how the hell would Railrunner know what the Park is busy with from season to season? quote:
List of things that Railrunner has found “amusing Chapter 4 – “Railrunner crossly walked up to the police. They began to fire, their bullets simply bouncing off of him. He then grabbed the front bumper of the cruiser, and tossed it like a toy. It smashed into another car. Railrunner flung an officer out of his way and roared in sheer amusement. Within a blink of an eye he obliterated the small police force.” Chapter 27 – “I began to walk up her perfectly paved sidewalk, when Mittens jumped out and hissed at me. I rolled my eyes and barred a set of gleaming white fangs at the cat. Its hair stood on end as it ran away yowling. I smiled a little in amusement.” Chapter 47 – “My beam’s aftershocks badly damaged the city, again I found myself laughing in pure amusement.” Chapter 50 - "I tightened my hold on his neck, his eyes seemed to bulge, and I found that amusing." Chapter 60 - "I charged to him, but before he could swing I put the gun to his forehead. I watched in amusement as beads of sweat rolled down his face." Heroes try to avoid doing harm to innocents. Anti-heroes accept that sometimes they can’t avoid harming innocents in the course of their duties. Even many villains simply disregard collateral damage without having any feelings about it one way or another. What Railrunner has is Joker-levels of malicious pleasure in causing pain for its own sake. It absolutely baffles me how Miranda Leek can think that Railrunner is in any way, shape or form a likable character. quote:
I’m surprised Railrunner didn’t shoot the poor guy. JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 14:45 on Jun 26, 2013 |
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Voltin Bolt posted:More shading =/= better art. The background consists of nothing but rocks, random tracks, and more fog than Turok, and the characters are still whittled down to torsos with one pair of arms. Check out any of the layouts on the older work, you can actually see everyone's body and they're interacting with detailed environments. One thing that really gets to me in the new "style" Leek is using is that she's using so much human anatomy. In the Turok fog picture, can you even begin to imagine that the next set of limbs, that are only seen partially before the image ends, are actually another set of arms? Leek simply copies human anatomy without knowing for what reason those muscles are there. It is kind of clear that Miranda is aware of that problem of hers, as when she has to show the whole body, she will:
There was a point where she was at least trying to show them off standing on their actual legs and showing off all the limbs. But there is only one example of the transition point and it is... it is a different Shadowtrack being sexy image. But I guess studying animal anatomy and seeing how it could be applied is to drat hard for her.
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# ? Jun 26, 2013 13:50 |
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Every time I see this one, I can only think, "those poor cats"
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JosephWongKS posted:The gun isn’t “false”, it’s just that the bullets inside are “fake” “coaster-killers”. Railrunner is too stupid to understand that simple distinction. The bullets aren't even fake, they're improvised. "Fake" bullets don't act like real bullets in any way, shape, or form; either the gunpowder is missing or it's a blank round or else it's a plastic prop. At best in this situation, a "false" gun would be one loaded with the non-dangerous normal rounds instead of the improvised "coaster-killers."
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quote:“Don’t make any sudden moves,” I demanded. The frightened guard simply nodded. This poor man could not see Captain Vick and I this evening, I would have to dispose of him. Like lightning, I flipped the gun into the air. I then used the handle and clobbered him on the side of the head. The guard fell to the ground knocked out cold. I flipped the gun around and stuck it through my belt and then pulled out my cell phone. Something really bothers me about this passage. "Rodney flips the gun into the air" which I could see him do it, but he does it "like lightning" which I'm assuming Miranda meant faster than what the human eye can process. WTF happened to gravity in this situation? It another one of Railrunner's Mary Sue powers controlling the gravity of other objects? One other thing. The handle is where you hold the gun, which is either underneath where the trigger is, or upfront where you wrap your other hand to hold the gun upwards. The stock is what you hold against your shoulder for support, and also the part where you can club someone over the head with. I am 100% certain she did absolutely no research for anything in her fanfiction of Bobbin's book in progress. poo poo, you don't even need to flip the drat gun in the air to access the stock as a weapon. loving bring it around and smash them in the side of the head. I hate Miranda Leek and I hate her book and I hate her characters and goddamnit she is the worst. I don't know why this bothers me more than anything else. Mercedes fucked around with this message at 21:03 on Jun 26, 2013 |
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Mercedes posted:I don't know why this bothers me more than anything else. Your mind is trying to protect you from the consequences of severe Miranda exposure.
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# ? Jun 26, 2013 20:48 |
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Mercedes posted:I don't know why this bothers me more than anything else. What bothers me the most when it comes to guns is Detective Black carrying a rifle in a crowded opening day at an amusement park/fair or whatever it is called.
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# ? Jun 26, 2013 21:44 |
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Iced Cocoa posted:What bothers me the most when it comes to guns is Detective Black carrying a rifle in a crowded opening day at an amusement park/fair or whatever it is called. That bothered me as well, but at that point in the story, I was somewhat hopeful. The crowd not going chaotic when a man brandishes a loving rifle was eclipsed by the stupid surrounding that specific event; which is not the point. The point is that I (mistakenly) gave Miranda the benefit of the doubt. Thinking about it again, where the hell did Black get a goddamn machete?
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Mercedes posted:
Anyway, whatever he's doing he's blatantly not adhering to principles of gun safety. Pointing a loaded gun at someone's head, even with the safety on? Railrunner could totally have killed that guy by accident.
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# ? Jun 26, 2013 22:12 |
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The image for this chapter. Notice the new snazzy leather coat with metal spikes. If Railrunner is seventeen feet tall, then this gun in his purse is clearly pretty heavy-duty something. Larger than a rifle at least.
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# ? Jun 26, 2013 22:17 |
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I'm so glad this thread exists. This thread fills that schadenfreude-shaped hole left in my life by the end of Dominic Deegan.
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Mercedes posted:Thinking about it again, where the hell did Black get a goddamn machete? Fleet Farm, or Gander Mountain. They're pretty easy to find in sporting goods stores. Even northern forests can get undergrowth thick enough to call for one, and you can also use them for lawn care if you have a particularly wild area on your property.
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 01:11 |
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I hope you guys enjoy this, because otherwise I just spent an hour reading Twisted aloud for nothing.
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 02:25 |
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Chapter 60 - Friend or Foe? Part Two of Three quote:
It’s a large public place, and Thunderbark was an employee and not the owner of the park so the park wouldn’t shut down in his absence, so of course there’d be guards patrolling the place. How can Railrunner have lived in human society for 38 years and be completely ignorant of its norms? quote:
The only thing it’s easier to do as a roller coaster is murder people. Coincidentally, that’s the only thing that Railrunner cares about. quote:
If you are expecting more guards, perhaps you shouldn’t “jog”, idiot. Either you run at full pace to get out of their range, or you walk quietly to avoid detection. quote:
The only other time that Miranda Leek has described someone as “fat” or a synonym thereof was in Chapter 11 – “The news crews began to make their broadcast. They started to interview a tubby police officer that kept pulling at his belt.” It’s only security personnel that are fat-shamed in this book. quote:
The avatar of Amusement Park Between’s hopes and dreams only knows how to solve a crisis – almost always crises of his own making - with violence, often gratuitously sadistic and excessive violence. How and why does Miranda Leek think this is admirable? quote:
A little self-awareness for once, in that Miranda Leek recognizes that the people Railrunner torments and bullies are “victims”. quote:
The “magical” “active” “night life” in Amusement Park Between has never been described or depicted in the book. Making bald assertions without having the slightest shred of supporting evidence – truly Miranda Leek is well-suited to be a politician. quote:
Didn’t Railrunner just say “It wouldn’t matter if they called the real police since they were coming anyway”? Why is he now concerned that Captain Vick was “planning a sneak attack”? Secondly, why is he only now suspecting that Captain Vick was “planning a sneak attack”? Shouldn’t that be the first thing one anticipates? How “advanced” can the coasters be if they are constantly surprised and never plan for contingencies? Thirdly, why is Railrunner angry at the thought that Captain Vick was “planning a sneak attack”? He did the same thing when he attacked the jail in Amusement Park Between. quote:
How can ears sharp enough to “[pick] the click of a car door” have missed the far louder and continuous sound of the car driving into the place? And why should the "negative thoughts" be "silenced" upon this "click of a car door"? Railrunner doesn't know what's the door or how many people are in it. It could be the door of an armoured van carrying a squad of SWAT agents. JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 03:29 on Jun 27, 2013 |
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Chapter 60 - Friend or Foe? Part Three of Three quote:
There is no reason for Captain Vick to be acting so cordially towards a wanted criminal who just murdered / injured another group of people as recently as the day before and whose last interaction with Captain Vick entailed the brutal death by burning of Captain Vick’s brave colleagues in Chapter 28: “You’ll now learn that I play with fire!” Railrunner yelled. A searing inferno completely wiped out the first row of helpless men. All Vick could now see was the hungry flames in front of him. But out of nowhere, Railrunner sailed over the tank that Vick stood upon. He landed untouched on the other side. The roller coaster headed for the portal, but out of the consuming fireball he had created, emerged six tanks full of angry humans. Railrunner turned to face them, he was ready. All at once the tanks fired missiles. Railrunner simply knocked them off course. He then bended them back to his pursuers. It eliminated one tank. Railrunner smiled, then he let loose a concussion beam. I rid him of his problems and the city could feel its massive shockwave. Railrunner continued his escape route. They aren’t old foes who’ve built up a grudging respect each other, it hasn’t been decades since Railrunner committed his atrocities such that time has healed all wounds, and Ironwheel hasn’t committed anywhere near the level of Railrunner’s offences such that he’s a credible mutual foe against whom you reluctantly ally with past enemies. Miranda Leek doesn’t know how to write believable characters and responses. quote:
What the gently caress does Vick “need to know” anyway? Railrunner’s right there, loving arrest him or kill him if he resists capture! quote:
Why the gently caress should Captain Vick believe anything Railrunner, a known mass murderer, has to say? This whole scene is loving ridiculous and it infuriates me that anyone would write this dreck and believe it to be acceptable for publication and sale. quote:
“A pinch of harmony”. quote:
No no no no no no no. There’s no reason for Captain Vick to take Railrunner at his word. Railrunner has not given Captain Vick any reason to trust him or believe him. If you want to do a “hated enemies ally against a bigger common enemy” then you have to build up that third party as a credible bigger enemy. How can a writer be so intellectually lazy? quote:
Which part of the thesaurus did “conquered” come from? quote:
95th sigh of the book. quote:
Why does Railrunner even need to mention Ironwheel’s piercings? It’s not like animated roller coasters are dime a dozen in the “real world”. quote:
This is the stupidest chapter in the book so far, and that’s really saying something.
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Interlude - Fatal Attractionquote:
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I.. I... Uh. I want to shut my brain off.
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JosephWongKS posted:Which part of the thesaurus did “conquered” come from? At a guess, "congured" [conjured] got spellchecked to "conquered." In fact, "conquered" is on the list of alternatives on my web browser. Bobbin Threadbare posted:I'm kind of curious where the author intends to go with Detective Black; on one hand the narrator pointed out that he thinks he's completely justified in bringing Rodney to justice (leaving aside that, objectively, he is), but on the other the narrator used the adjective "malicious." Black may wind up getting killed off at something resembling a climax, but even if he somehow gets "converted" to Railrunner's side, the Black we know and love may end up just as dead to us as if his torso were shredded apart. Hot drat, I get to be right twice. "Captain" Vick is now dead to me.
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 04:09 |
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Yeah, now I'm kind of sad I made him Dr. Claw.
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Bobbin Threadbare posted:At a guess, "congured" [conjured] got spellchecked to "conquered." In fact, "conquered" is on the list of alternatives on my web browser. Captain Vick is being mind-controlled by Ironwheel, since mind-control is a power that rollercoasters have. That's why Vick could lie - because it wasn't him talking.
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NO NO NO NO NO I WILL NOT STAND FOR THIS HORSESHIT. Step aside Bobbin, I will use my (incredibly mediocre) writing skills to fix this. ~Fanfictions~ posted:Agent Robert "Captain" Vicks arrived on the scene ahead of his colleagues. "This place is going to turn into a warzone!" he growled to himself. Seraphic Neoman fucked around with this message at 05:54 on Jun 27, 2013 |
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SSNeoman posted:NO NO NO NO NO The day is saved! But... where's Detective Black? Surely he's recovered from being slightly inconvenienced earlier in the book.
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 05:44 |
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I've never understood the purpose of this chapter. Railrunner gives Vick an ordinary gun with ordinary bullets, and tells him that it was made to kill only Ironwheel. With Miranda's writing you know that he's being set up for failure because he wouldn't end up betraying Railrunner anyway as Miranda intends to let him think that Ironwheel is the greater threat. This chapter could have been as simple as "Railrunner told Vick not to shoot at him, but at Ironwheel" as that would have the exact same results. Railrunner could have given him the actual bullets made from Thunderbark, told him the same thing as before and Miranda would have written Vick as believing it was the truth because I don't see her actually allowing Railrunner to be wrong about trusting someone or having someone shoot Railrunner in the back once it is all over. gently caress this chapter.
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 08:35 |
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6 more chapters to go, and they are all very long chapters.
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Chapter 61 – Moondance Part One quote:
Chaos you created, you murderous monster! quote:
Steam implies boiling water. I hope that the steam rising from the manholes means that a live electric circuit has fallen into the pipelines running below the factory and that the whole place is going to blow up, taking those horrible vile creatures away with them. quote:
Add that to the list of apologies that Railrunner has received. quote:
Only because Miranda Leek made Captain Vick even stupider than Railrunner and flouted every principle of character motivation and consistency. quote:
Either there’s going to be a Railrunner-Clare sex scene, or Clare gets turned into Shadowtrack in this chapter. Both are horrible to contemplate. quote:
Foreshadowing! quote:
How do they even “[sneak] out the door” when everyone else is right there in the room. How. At the least, won't they notice that Railrunner and Clare aren't there any more? JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 12:18 on Jun 27, 2013 |
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Chapter 61 – Moondance Part Two quote:
He’s so proud of being an indiscriminate mass murderer. quote:
Why is he returning to Mystic Guards? Wouldn’t the guards he terrified have reported the incident? Wouldn’t police come to the scene to investigate? quote:
Speaking of the Hummer, it reminds me that Buddy had first tracked Railrunner down because he had bought the car under his own name. Why haven’t the non-treasonous part of the police force done the same? And why isn’t anyone looking for Buddy? quote:
Drawing power from proximity to roller-coaster tracks is and will always be the dumbest power-up ever. On a related note, roller-coaster tracks make roller coasters more powerful, and roller coasters are the elite class in Amusement Park Between. With all their “advanced technology”, and the fact that the roller coasters can bully the subject classes at will, why haven’t roller-coaster tracks been built all over the place in Amusement Park Between? quote:
Railrunner continues to be the worst liar ever. quote:
96th sigh of the book. quote:
This is the third time so far in the story that Clare has been described as “frail”: Chapter 8 - “That was amazing! She said grasping my arm. She stopped and ran her frail fingers among my skin, puzzled. “Rodney - have you been working out? Your muscles are huge!” Chapter 57 - Clare rolled over onto her belly, her frail body rising up and down along with my chest as I inhaled and exhaled. Chapter 61 - Her frail fingers grasped tightly around the knot. There’s a clear agenda behind the repeated and gratuitous use of “frail” in reference to her. quote:
Note that Railrunner never asked for Clare’s consent to any of this.
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Iced Cocoa posted:I've never understood the purpose of this chapter. Railrunner gives Vick an ordinary gun with ordinary bullets, and tells him that it was made to kill only Ironwheel. With Miranda's writing you know that he's being set up for failure because he wouldn't end up betraying Railrunner anyway as Miranda intends to let him think that Ironwheel is the greater threat. This chapter could have been as simple as "Railrunner told Vick not to shoot at him, but at Ironwheel" as that would have the exact same results. Railrunner could have given him the actual bullets made from Thunderbark, told him the same thing as before and Miranda would have written Vick as believing it was the truth because I don't see her actually allowing Railrunner to be wrong about trusting someone or having someone shoot Railrunner in the back once it is all over. Judging by what Railrunner told Thunderbark in Chapter 61, I think his "clever ploy" is to make an ally of Vick so that Vick will inform Railrunner when the police find Ironwheel, and give him the gun with "fake bullets" but tell him it's a real coaster-killing gun so that Vick will attack Ironwheel, Ironwheel will wipe out Vick for Railrunner, and then Railrunner will attack Ironwheel. Chapter 61 posted:
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 12:58 |
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quote:“Well, first we sort of tossed out some remarks, and then I made him shake on a deal. I told him the legend of our world -.” "You told him about our world?" "Yeah, but I didn't tell him what it's name was." "Well that's okay then."
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Either this execrable book has completely broken my reading comprehension, or this last chapter was especially full of horrifying innuendoMiranda Leek's Repression posted:
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BBQ Crisis posted:Either this execrable book has completely broken my reading comprehension, or this last chapter was especially full of horrifying innuendo I was trying not to notice those. Why did you have to go and point them out? Now I can't ignore them any more.
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JosephWongKS posted:I was trying not to notice those. Why did you have to go and point them out? Now I can't ignore them any more. When we're being primed for a possible Railrunner/Clare sex scene, I have to share the pain of seeing gross rollercoaster sex around every corner . I have a horrible feeling that the book will end with inappropriate coaster train smoochgasms because Leek is just that terrible.
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# ? Jun 27, 2013 17:48 |