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I hated this week and I hate you. I went through this mess of words in Judgemode and I can say I'm very disappointed in most of you and surprised in others. My crits are still a work in progress, but you can view them here, you loving ingrates.
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Is it too late to say I hate you all?
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Considering your current avatar, I'd say we did you a service.
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Djeser posted:Will trade: one crit for your story this week for a crit of my story. Sitting Here, here is your crit
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Is that an avatar handed out in one of the sub-forums, or does this guy just get a million name changes and post everywhere?
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hubris.height posted:Is that an avatar handed out in one of the sub-forums, or does this guy just get a million name changes and post everywhere? This guy just pays for a million name changes. Bad Seafood posted:Considering your current avatar, I'd say we did you a service. Well do me a favor and take a hike, you jerk. Someone else do me a favor and BRAWL me. I'm out for blood.
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Jul 14, 2015 18:23
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I'll brawl the gently caress out of you.
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Djeser posted:I'll brawl the gently caress out of you. I'd brawl as well.
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Who's going to judge this? I don't give a gently caress if I'm brawling one, two, or eight; hell, do it WWF style and have a two versus one match for all I care.
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WeLandedOnTheMoon! posted:Who's going to judge this? I don't give a gently caress if I'm brawling one, two, or eight; hell, do it WWF style and have a two versus one match for all I care. GIVE ME A GODDAMN SECOND
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  MERCBRAWL #SOMETHINGSOMETHING (IT'S BEEN A WHILE JACKASSES) MOTHERFLIPPING NINJAS!!!!!!! This motherfucking week, you three are the last three surviving motherflipping ninjas from your clan. The rest of your clan was slaughtered while the three of you were away and now you have one thing on your motherpunching mind. REVENGE!!!!!! I'm being literal here. You three are the last 3 ninjas from your clan. You're sharing the world. This is a collaborative effort! You ninja star throwers have until JULY 25 11:59 EST to finish your glorious retributions and you each can have a max of 2000 words to make it work. N. SENADA DJESER WE LANDED ON THE MOON HIYAAAAAAAAAH
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One last thing, in case you bitches forgot. You brawl for me, you  as well. I need to see you say it!
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I'll brawl and toxx, even if I would prefer a prompt that allowed me to rip the heads off my enemies rather than require me to ally with them.
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Hey nerds, you all kind of sucked this week, but here's my basic notes. I'll have more comments coming up where I get more in depth but for now, here's what I thought of your stories initially. Additionally I flash ruled myself and have no cursing in my crits! Trust me though, I would've if I could. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hj5U1Kwg2vse6v5VQn13T3P6zeQUd_R4SnJSwd8SvqA/edit?usp=sharing
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WeLandedOnTheMoon! posted:I'll brawl and toxx, even if I would prefer a prompt that allowed me to rip the heads off my enemies rather than require me to ally with them. Who the hell said you had to cooperate you uncreative jackass. Get to work!
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Mercedes posted:One last thing, in case you bitches forgot. You brawl for me, you As Mercedes' honored "guest," I'm you shitbirds' back-up judge in case he meets a "mysterious" end.
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This week on Thunderdome: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TH9sxQ0b0uA Bad Seafood fucked around with this message at 19:11 on Jul 14, 2015 |
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Mercedes posted:One last thing, in case you bitches forgot. You brawl for me, you https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LOZuxwVk7TU
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In unrelated news, crits for the last of the (non-DQ) entries for Week #149 are here. Featuring critiques for SlipUp, Lazy Beggar, SkaAndScreenplays, Entenzahn, and newtestleper. The folks who submitted late will still get critiques. You will just get them late. (As opposed to the timeliness of these crits, you understand.) Also, because apparently I can't get enough of this, I'll offer up three line-crits for this week's stories, first come, first served. If you get a crit from me, give a crit to someone else. (This someone else need not be me, but I certainly wouldn't complain!)
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Well that was entirely unexpected. WELP. Thunderdome Week 154: Naturally Unnatural It’s summertime, and you’re stuck at your grandparents’ house. Your grandparents are cool and all, but they’re getting older, and they can’t always keep you and your siblings entertained. So today, you decide to go exploring in the attic. There’s a ton of cool stuff up there, but eventually, you run into something strange… Welcome to Weird poo poo week! This week, your characters have found something that’s a little out of place: a regular, everyday object with unnatural properties. What exactly that means is up to you, whether it’s fantastical and fun, or completely terrifying. Your object doesn’t even have to be the driving force of the story, although it needs to at least be present. Please write me a story. No vignettes, no ‘scenes,’ no goddamned Wikipedia articles. You should have actual characters with personalities and relationships, and they should change over the course of your narrative. And, as always, no erotica, no fanfiction. You have 1000 words with which to accomplish this task. (To clarify, the grandparents' attic bit is an example, NOT a requirement. Feel free to use it, if you want, but it isn't necessary.) The deadline to enter is Friday, July 17th, 11:59:59 PM, PST. The deadline to submit is Sunday, July 19th, 11:59:59 PM ,PST. Judges: curlingiron Sitting Here Ironic Twist Contestants: Grizzled Patriarch WeLandedOnTheMoon! Broenheim docbeard Benny Profane Bad Ideas Good Thranguy Schneider Heim Killer-of-Lawyers Claven666 C7ty1 Morning Bell spectres of autism Jonked Jagermonster Nubile Hillock Jopoho epoch. Barbed Tongues Bompacho Mad Wack crabrock Kaishai curlingiron fucked around with this message at 07:34 on Jul 19, 2015 |
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This looks like a good week, but I gotta opt out because of some bad news regarding my own grandparents. Good luck on your stories this week, everyone.
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