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Solitair
Feb 18, 2014

TODAY'S GONNA BE A GOOD MOTHERFUCKIN' DAY!!!
I can't resist JoJo. In with a flash rule.

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Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

Solitair posted:

I can't resist JoJo. In with a flash rule.

Thranguy
Apr 21, 2010


Deceitful and black-hearted, perhaps we are. But we would never go against the Code. Well, perhaps for good reasons. But mostly never.
In and flash

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

Thranguy posted:

In and flash



Read from right to left, top to bottom

Deltasquid fucked around with this message at 09:23 on Apr 10, 2018

big scary monsters
Sep 2, 2011

-~Skullwave~-
I am in, please flash me.

Chainmail Onesie
May 12, 2014


LoserWinner
of "Thunder Dome!

Tanz! posted:

The other two judges state they will be expanding their crits in their own posts. However I am lazy and instead I am offering detailed crits to anyone who asks for one, that submitted this week. Just quote this post.

Me pls

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

big scary monsters posted:

I am in, please flash me.

Lily Catts
Oct 17, 2012

Show me the way to you
(Heavy Metal)
In with a flash rule!

Fleta Mcgurn
Oct 5, 2003

Porpoise noise continues.
Oh, hey, I actually have time for this!!! in; flash me

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

Schneider Heim posted:

In with a flash rule!




Fleta Mcgurn posted:

Oh, hey, I actually have time for this!!! in; flash me

Bad Seafood
Dec 10, 2010


If you must blink, do it now.
In with a little story that must be told.

Gimme a taste of the remedy.

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

Bad Seafood posted:

In with a little story that must be told.

Gimme a taste of the remedy.

crabrock
Aug 2, 2002

I

AM

MAGNIFICENT






in

CascadeBeta
Feb 14, 2009

by Cyrano4747
In

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME
:siren: ATTENTION everyone: to make the prompt a bit less insane I decided to go and drop the wordcount a bit. :siren:

Now you get 1750 words (+500 if flashruled) rather than 2500. I'd rather do the change now and save you from rewriting your stories tomorrow (ha.)

Also, still looking for one co-judge!

Bubble Bobby
Jan 28, 2005
Thanks to last weeks judges for reading my retarded story. I'm in with a flash rule

derp
Jan 21, 2010

when i get up all i want to do is go to bed again

Lipstick Apathy
hello. i'm having trouble writing lately so i guess i'll do one of these with a flash also k thanks.

BabyRyoga
May 21, 2001

THUNDERDOME LOSER 2021
Ok, i'll go in with a flash rule

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

Bubble Bobby posted:

Thanks to last weeks judges for reading my retarded story. I'm in with a flash rule



derp posted:

hello. i'm having trouble writing lately so i guess i'll do one of these with a flash also k thanks.



BabyRyoga posted:

Ok, i'll go in with a flash rule

Flesnolk
Apr 11, 2012
In. Flash.

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

Flesnolk posted:

In. Flash.

apophenium
Apr 14, 2009
I'm in

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


Got Out.
Grimey Drawer
In

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk









In, and flash me with your anime nonsense

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011


I wanna sing one for the cars
That are right now headed silent down the highway
And it's dark and there is nobody driving And something has got to give

Ah, what the hell. I need to work on not writing comfortable empty little stories, so in with a flash.

ThirdEmperor
Aug 7, 2013

BEHOLD MY GLORY

AND THEN

BRAWL ME
<%TDbot> tanz! has 1 submissions, 1 wins, and 0 plants they haven't killed

Your perfect record disgusts me and so does your floricide

Let's dance, tanz! Brawl me.

Emmideer
Oct 20, 2011

Lovely night, no?
Grimey Drawer

ThirdEmperor posted:

<%TDbot> tanz! has 1 submissions, 1 wins, and 0 plants they haven't killed

Your perfect record disgusts me and so does your floricide

Let's dance, tanz! Brawl me.

Who the gently caress is tanz!?

I reject attacks against the imaginary, so I'll brawl you instead.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


Got Out.
Grimey Drawer

Jon Joe posted:

Who the gently caress is tanz!?

I reject attacks against the imaginary, so I'll brawl you instead.

BRAWL TIIIIIIIIME

Jonjoe AKA the TANZ is brawling the Emperor hisself THIRDEMPEROR.

For a brawl like this, I have a special contest to test these literary gladiators abilities.

Two of the same suit

In an earlier discussion in mibbit, I fumbled with the idea of a brawl in my head that involves telling the same story twice but by different authors.
This seems like an excellent time to test out a prototype of that,

PROMPT: Jonjoe and Third both write about this "A lawyer gets into a fight with a member of the press hounding him." You can change the genders of the two characters/races/ but there must be a lawyer and a member of the press. There must be a fight between them. The rest is up to you. May the better goon win.

EDIT: Due by 4/14/18 at 8pm PST (SATURDAY)

EDIT: 1300 word limit!

Jay W. Friks fucked around with this message at 20:34 on Apr 11, 2018

SurreptitiousMuffin
Mar 21, 2010
Yeah sure I'm in.

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

sebmojo posted:

In, and flash me with your anime nonsense



Read right to left kudasai

Antivehicular posted:

Ah, what the hell. I need to work on not writing comfortable empty little stories, so in with a flash.



Right to left

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk









Deltasquid has won, but remains unscrolled.

See to it if you think him worthy.

avs for the 'taxgod, :10bux: for the spinethrone

sebmojo fucked around with this message at 13:39 on Apr 11, 2018

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME

sebmojo posted:

Deltasquid has won, but remains unscrolled.

See to it if you think him worthy.

avs for the 'taxgod, :10bux: for the spinethrone

Wow thanks

You made me splurt ink all over my desk

Uranium Phoenix
Jun 20, 2007

Boom.

Jon Joe posted:

The other two judges state they will be expanding their crits in their own posts. However I am lazy and instead I am offering detailed crits to anyone who asks for one, that submitted this week. Just quote this post.

Yeah I'll take one of these

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


Got Out.
Grimey Drawer

Jay W. Friks posted:

BRAWL TIIIIIIIIME

Jonjoe AKA the TANZ is brawling the Emperor hisself THIRDEMPEROR.

For a brawl like this, I have a special contest to test these literary gladiators abilities.

Two of the same suit

In an earlier discussion in mibbit, I fumbled with the idea of a brawl in my head that involves telling the same story twice but by different authors.
This seems like an excellent time to test out a prototype of that,

PROMPT: Jonjoe and Third both write about this "A lawyer gets into a fight with a member of the press hounding him." You can change the genders of the two characters/races/ but there must be a lawyer and a member of the press. There must be a fight between them. The rest is up to you. May the better goon win.

EDIT: Due by 4/14/18 at 8pm PST (SATURDAY)

EDIT: 1300 word limit!

Witness these edits.

Kaishai
Nov 3, 2010

Scoffing at modernity.
:siren: Thunderdome Recap! :siren:



As I was listening a' alane,
I heard thre cappers makin' a mane.
The tane untae on tither did say-o,
"What even is this dialect-o?
What even is this dialect?"


Hop aboard the failure train, Thunderdome, and join Sitting Here, Ironic Twist, and me in the dining car for scones and a review of Week 290: Fiasco Week 2: Return to the Chicken Hut and Week 291: You are Such a Loser, Good for You! Never have fake heroin in a cartoon-giraffe suit or rockers skydiving into a skeleton horde been so dull as here, but at least we have our deaths in a randomly generated black hole to look forward to. We talk a little about what makes for a successful story of failure, though our attention is preoccupied by an eternal question: how does one ge'ez a laptop?

“Who the gently caress is that?” Jimmy asked, pointing to a naked man covered in dried blood.

Episodes past can be found here!

Exmond
May 31, 2007

Writing is fun!

Jon Joe posted:

The other two judges state they will be expanding their crits in their own posts. However I am lazy and instead I am offering detailed crits to anyone who asks for one, that submitted this week. Just quote this post.

50% DM rate sucks, crabrock what I gotta do to have TD accidentaly purge all my records.

I'll take a crit, also

Fast Critting, Good Critting

crabrock
Aug 2, 2002

I

AM

MAGNIFICENT






Exmond posted:

50% DM rate sucks, crabrock what I gotta do to have TD accidentaly purge all my records.

I'll take a crit, also

Fast Critting, Good Critting

venmo or paypal

derp
Jan 21, 2010

when i get up all i want to do is go to bed again

Lipstick Apathy

Kaishai posted:

:siren: Thunderdome Recap! :siren:





*bumps into signpost, falls down, spends rest of life there*

Tyrannosaurus
Apr 12, 2006
I'm in

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QuoProQuid
Jan 12, 2012

Tr*ckin' and F*ckin' all the way to tha
T O P

im in

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