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I started writing for Screen stuff again (just purely for fun), and I've run into the same issue that I do every time: Dialogue. I don't know if I channeling George Lucas or what, but I can't seem to give my characters any real weight to what they're saying - they just seem to talk and talk without really saying anything. The other issue is just making things funny - I've been writing short little comedy scenes, but the spoken "jokes" just seem really flat on the paper. They're funny when I think about them, but two people exchanging them seems...not funny. So, uh...are there any easy tips for making my dialogue less wordy and better shaped?
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May 26, 2009 02:29
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