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Pinstripe Hourglass
Nov 27, 2008

=RIVER PEOPLE=
Ay yi yi! We look
like... cartoons!

Portals posted:

hey dude wake the gently caress up!!

I never played any of the Spyro games as a kid, but that just means that if I ever do, I will be disappointed because he will not be the lazerbot rendition of Spyro.

Honestly? It's not too far off. Spyro was a huge dick, at least in the first game. He just swears more in this one.

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Pinstripe Hourglass
Nov 27, 2008

=RIVER PEOPLE=
Ay yi yi! We look
like... cartoons!

JazzFlight posted:

New song, ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh!



One Beer (Get It All Out Man)
(song for Chapter 8)

Hey man this is awesome! I just got done rereading the thread and your music has been a pretty great part of it.

If I could just give one bit of advice, and take this with a grain of salt: your bridges/middle eights are really cool, but they come right near the end of the song, after 6 or 7 verses sometimes. Since one of the reasons to have a middle eight is to add variety to the song and keep the verse/chorus from becoming boring, it might be cool to put those a verse or two earlier. Just a thought.

Take all that with a grain of salt though. This is awesome!

Pinstripe Hourglass
Nov 27, 2008

=RIVER PEOPLE=
Ay yi yi! We look
like... cartoons!

JazzFlight posted:

Nooooo, don't expose my complete lack of music theory knowledge! :ohdear:
Haha, yeah, I know. As you can tell, I'm really just wingin' it from a basic cookie-cutter formula from all the way back to the first song I did. The songs also end up too long due to the huge amount of lyrics I want to stick into each one.

Ah well, they're fun to make, though. Once I finish the next two, I'll put the whole thing up as a full album (maybe on Band Camp or something, I haven't looked into it that much).

Thanks for the feedback. I'm thinking of going gospel style for the next chapter's song.

Hahaha, no worries, man. I know less about music than you do, I assure you. your stuff is awesome. (do you listen to a lot of New Wave? I get that feeling listening to this stuff).

Also, I loooove Gospel. Cannot wait to hear what you come up with.

e: oh poo poo, things just got cheesy.

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