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Jaguars!
Jul 31, 2012


I want to apply to a professional association and their application requires a 'detailed summary of relevant experience.' The local branch needs to endorse it(presumably as part of their regular meeting) and then the national council that runs things has to approve it.

So here is what I wrote. I'd like some pointers on formatting; in particular if my use of lists is correct and whether an actual letterhead is required when this will be part of an application package.

I'd also like to change the salutation at the top, 'panel' or 'board' is not accurate enough, I'd like a succinct way of saying 'To whoever ends up processing and approving this document.' Or should I just go with 'To whom it may concern?'

General Business writing critique is also OK by me.

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