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Dynastocles
May 29, 2009

"If you'll excuse me, my dinner time is six o'clock. Only gangsters eat at 9 o'clock, after some bootlegging and a hot game of craps."

College Slice

Hey y'all. We just completed the promo for our new cyberpunk noir:




The film is here.

The story: in the year 2009, a drug-addicted assassin is offered one last mission by his old government employer. The reward? A resurrected, cybernetic clone of his dead lover Valerie, who's haunted his dreams for years.





A straight-up homage to 1980s science fiction thrillers, shot illegally on the streets of Los Angeles and powered by a classic synth score. I hope you like it.


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FuckenPunchOn
Nov 9, 2013


Not bad.

IMO, it needed a LOT more hard neon lighting, and I'd like to see a faster cut of it.

Also, it couldn't have hurt for the main character's hero gun to have a bit of chrome and a chunky 80s laser sight on it (rather than just being a generic SIG Sauer) and for every character in it to be a chain smoker, but it's a neat little concept, and these are just minor criticisms.

Is there more to come?

Dynastocles
May 29, 2009

"If you'll excuse me, my dinner time is six o'clock. Only gangsters eat at 9 o'clock, after some bootlegging and a hot game of craps."

College Slice

Thanks for the critique. It was shot only as promotional material for a feature film, so luxuries like lighting, expensive props, dollies, more than one lens, etc, were for the most part denied us, and we made due with what we had.

The plan is now to do the standard running around raising funds for the full project.

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Aug 19, 2014

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