Need help finishing my movie script

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The Something Awful Forums > The Finer Arts > Creative Convention > Need help finishing my movie script

Victor Vermis: Dec 21, 2004; WOKE UP IN THE DESERT AGAIN

Nitpicky stuff:
- Grammar needs a little love
- I'm not totally sold on the character names.

The Good:
- I did find the images helpful.

Other Notes:
This might just be me, but things get a little confusing in the 3rd act. Have you considered killing yourself? SEEK YOUR FORTUNE BENEATH THE KITCHEN SINK

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