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dont be mean to me
May 2, 2007

I'm interplanetary, bitch
Let's go to Mars




Oof, last-reply-on-the-page update. Dang.

1B - Stop loving up. Seriously. Nisa is too big of a deal to gently caress up gracefully anymore. ... I can understand the impulse to apologize, but seeing as how the dolphin seems to be more worried about us than itself, I'd rather use the knowledge of our mistake as a cautionary tale for ourselves than apologizing for it as a salve for our conscience.

2D - Figure out a way to let Zoni know that someone other than Manos knows she exists, and that Nisa is down for a summit meeting. Being the ocean and having access to what Oracle knows, we can figure out some way to add a mutation to some common life form that does nothing until it runs into where Zoni is or was, and then leaves a message that is recognized as little as possible by anyone else (certainly not enough that it's a tell for anyone else), but speaks volumes to her. Speaking of which.

3C - obviously Nisa will have to pull that information from Oracle, and she might as well request a whatever-scopes-are-relevant-to-her security briefing while she's at it. I see no reason this has to be mutually exclusive with talking to anyone else, though.

dont be mean to me fucked around with this message at Oct 16, 2017 around 19:10

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I ride bikes all day
Sep 10, 2007


I shitposted in the same thread for 2 years and all I got was this red text av. Ask me about my autism!



College Slice

1D - Follow the sympathetic link between the dolphin and his pod. Give both groups a subtle desire to travel in the directions that will lead to them reuniting.

2D - There exist a reality in which Nisa rapidly expands her sea life to scour the oceans for the target, no doubt at huge cost to the ocean's ecosystem. Look in on that reality, see where Nisa found the target.

3E - Disassociate from human concerns. The last human concern is vengeance, and even that is secondary to simple safety. God doesn't need friends.

AJ_Impy
Jun 17, 2007



Toilet Rascal

1C Being this powerful means never having hosed up in the first place.
I ride Bikes' 1D. Skip the hard work and exploit the result.
3E Write the news. What I will shall have happened.

Prince of Space
Apr 17, 2016

Your weapons are useless against me!


Okay Ms. NEGU, I've finally caught up to you.

Step 1: Attempt to Save.

Step 2: Feel shame, for keeping Kelly-Anne around this long as your fragile human "pet." She deserves better.

Step 3: 1A - Follow Follow that Dolphin to apologize! Seriously. Apologize to it because - even if you reverse time, you'll still have stolen its memories in a parallel universe, (which it will know about anyway).

Step 4: 2D - Convert Whales and Dolphins Do 2B except focus EXCLUSIVELY on tapping into the minds of cetacean life in order to call out. With their built in sonar you'll find your target a lot faster than with other forms of life. This is why 1A is necessary. Gotta be nice to the smart animals!

Step 5: 3B - Kelly Kall Out to Kelly and ask if she wants to be reinKARNated as something greater, by officially incorporating her into the greater goddess. She can always be released as her own entity later. If she declines, offer her an augmentation that allows her to regenerate her wounds and to absorb defeated foes' powers for the benefit of the team.

E: Step 6: Lastly, if she's on the fence ask Kelly if she'd like to be a whale:


Prince of Space fucked around with this message at Oct 29, 2017 around 01:58

Dog Kisser
Mar 30, 2005

But People have fears that beasts do not. Questions, too.


So! I haven't forgot about this, but my new CYOA blew up ridiculously. Posting to ensure this doesn't go to archives just yet, hoping to get an update out tomorrow. Sorry for the delay!

Toughy
Nov 29, 2004

"A grudge over food is deeper than the ocean."

Dog Kisser posted:

So! I haven't forgot about this, but my new CYOA blew up ridiculously. Posting to ensure this doesn't go to archives just yet, hoping to get an update out tomorrow. Sorry for the delay!

Hello I'm still interested in this story if you were wondering if anyone cared.

Deadmeat5150
Nov 21, 2005

OLD MAN YELLS AT CLAN


Toughy posted:

Hello I'm still interested in this story if you were wondering if anyone cared.

Me too!

FlocksOfMice
Feb 3, 2009


Same also here! But if the spark is gone that is OK it happens

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sheep-dodger
Feb 21, 2013


DK is still around, but his writing and drawing time have been eaten up by his other project, Break Down That Gate, which is about a band of goblins fighting and dying in a war to avenge their queen. Come join us there, NEGU will resume when that winds down.

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