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The Saddest Rhino posted:in i guess crabrock posted:in give me game sebmojo posted:Game me up Uranium Phoenix posted:Okay yeah in, give me a good game (gg as they say)
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# ¿ Dec 13, 2017 13:14 |
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Word bounty It's my birthday. You have ~24 hours to write me a nice birthday card for extra words. No mean stuff!!!!!
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# ¿ Dec 13, 2017 13:15 |
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sebmojo posted:i wonder what your videogame is going to b hardmode tetris if she had the guts
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# ¿ Dec 14, 2017 12:09 |
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word bounty over thanks for the The Saddest Rhino posted:Happy birthday jerk Fleta Mcgurn posted:Happy birthday to you Aesclepia posted:Happy birthday, Entenzahn! Tyrannosaurus posted:Dear Entenzahn Uranium Phoenix posted:Happy birthday Entenzahn! Thranguy posted:E is for Elder BabyRyoga posted:on your day of birth Jay W. Friks posted:This is the annual analysis of your birth. Entenzahn, you take a look in the mirror and ask yourself- Freakie posted:Today you're a year older flerp posted:happy birthday ent sebmojo posted:roses are red +5000 oh poo poo ur not actually in welp big scary monsters posted:Good writing is rare as duck's teeth yes i know some of these were haikus
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# ¿ Dec 14, 2017 15:09 |
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Fumblemouse posted:I wasn't going to enter, but if Friks is leaving, it should be safe. Also, I have previously played games of the kind that you find on computing machines so I expect that will give me an overwhelming advantage. Dr. Kloctopussy posted:blah blah blah
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# ¿ Dec 15, 2017 12:35 |
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Kaishai posted:In. Dr. Kloctopussy posted:RIP SEBMOJO is way more than 2 letters
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# ¿ Dec 16, 2017 12:55 |
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signups are closed friendly reminder that playing video games does not count as research Entenzahn fucked around with this message at 12:58 on Dec 16, 2017 |
# ¿ Dec 16, 2017 12:56 |
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8 hours to go – you guys are really polishing those jewels up to the last minute eh
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# ¿ Dec 18, 2017 01:03 |
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On that note if you ever wanted to judge a week with like five entries this is shaping up to be your chance make your dreams come true
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# ¿ Dec 18, 2017 01:04 |
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you can still lose if you submit late so dont worry about it
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# ¿ Dec 18, 2017 02:47 |
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Submissions are closed
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# ¿ Dec 18, 2017 10:36 |
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sebmojo posted:interprompt: shot down, in a blaze of glory Thunderdome CCLXXX Judgement – Game Over lol and other video game jokes in the title Hi. I've never said this before about a week of Thunderdome: good job, you didn't suck. No really, I enjoyed judging this. Thanks. Maybe I'm getting old and soft but it's almost like multiple years of practicing how to crank out flash fiction stories from 9 to 10 PM Sunday paid off. First, let's look at the Hard Mode challenges: Siddhartha Glutamate narrowly defeats Freakie by judge fiat. The other judges thought a story about violin playing cows was a bit silly, and yeah it was, but I absolutely loved the dynamic between father and son as it was portrayed here. It gave me the feels, and that's something I've been missing in Freakie's entry. That said, Freakie, dude, this was a solid story and I've been hearing some good things from the other judges about how you applied criticism from last week to visibly improve yourself. You weren't the one who entered the hard mode challenge and your story was by no means bad, so you're obviously not eating a DM for this. Keep going, you're doing fine. We argued about the Tetris fight more than we did about winners, because for their respective strengths and weaknesses these stories were equal. But draws are for pussies so sebmojo wins a cowardly win with a very sebmojo story that was fun to read while it lasted and turned out to be much cleverer than we'd known for the better part of actually reading it. Dr. Kloctopussy, your story was original and ambitious but in the end it felt like you overreached and couldn't keep up with your own ideas, good as they were. god have mercy on my soul what have i done On to the results proper: First of all, congratulations to The Saddest Rhino, who sits his rear end back down with an honorable disqualification for writing about one of the rats from Bad Rats: the Rats' Revenge discovering that they are in the video game Bad Rats: the Rats' Revenge. I'm calling it an honorable disqualification not because it's an honorable mention along with a disqualification, but because the fanfic you wrote wasn't complete utter poo poo so you're just getting disqualified instead of tarred, feathered and banned from ever touching a keyboard again. The sole dishonorable mention goes to BabyRyoga for writing about pokemon, but the pokemon are live animals who eat children, but it's not actually about the live animal pokemon who eat children, but about the minds behind the live animal pokemon who eat children, and their mission to.........?????????? The pokemon story would have lost but then Fuubi came along with a This was a good week so there's a bunch of honorable mentions: Thranguy – I love how this totally incorporates a bunch of Max Payne poo poo right down to the bullet time and the original Max Payne Vibe™ without coming off as a cheap Max Payne knockoff. It could be right at home in the universe, but it's totally its own thing. Fumblemouse – Your story got stale at the middle part but until then I pissed myself with laughter so thanks for bringing some good comedy into this lovely writing thread. Honk. Sebmojo – you win the party Dr. Kloctopussy – I know you're supposed to DM but I'm still the boss of this stupid writing contest and your use of the prompt was so loving genius that it still puts a faint smile on my face. What can I say, zero backbone, who judges the judgemen etc Obliterati – Your story was such, such a strong win contender. I loved it to bits, and there was a lot of arguing about this, not because it was so divisive but because it was pretty much on par with the winner. In the end, two things went against you: we all were a bit confused by your ending, and the incorporation of your video game was not quite as well realized as the winner had done it. But well loving done. This is cocaine in writing form and I legit want to see more of this kind of poo poo from you. The winner is Kaishai. Kai, I was personally torn between your piece and Obliterati's, but the other judges ended up preferring you. There's some nitpicks here, but that's for crittin'. Right now I'll just say this: your piece was absolutely beautiful, heartfelt, original and a great use of the prompt. Well loving done and godspeed, you gentle soul.
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# ¿ Dec 19, 2017 04:10 |
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gently caress thunderdome
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# ¿ Dec 27, 2017 21:29 |
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thunderdome 2018teen: gently caress thunderdome
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