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Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Antivehicular posted:

Psst, FM:


I seem to have become that Friks clone there in the italics

This clone looks nothing like me! WTF.

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Oct 4, 2016


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Three Card Combo Crits Part Three.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1i7...iew?usp=sharing

Includes, Chili "Hard to blame Eve", Metrofreak "War Cry", Bad Seafood "Funerals are for the Living", Sebmojo "Last Orders Please", The Cut of Your Jib "Not Gone West".

That's all of them except for Flerps entry which I'm locked out of on the Archives and Muffin's Entry because I don't know what to say about it (other than it's pretty) as its poetry.

I'll be getting my Week#251 crits out next. Gotta print 'em up first.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Grammarpunk Crits 1

Covers Tweezer Reprise "The Four Rs", Obliterati "Salt the Earth", QuoProQuid "Hunger"

https://drive.google.com/file/d/13z...iew?usp=sharing

More to come tomorrow.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Sitting Here posted:

Jay you are a credit to your species (spiders)



(Also: You're welcome Sparksbloom and Chili. Apologies you had to wait so long.)

Jay W. Friks fucked around with this message at 07:45 on Dec 1, 2017

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Grammar Punk Crits 2

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Fr...iew?usp=sharing

Continuing my late crits with Thranguy "Like an Arrow", Hawklad "Something New", Fuubi "High Noon", Flerp "Snacks for Two", Kaishai "The Quality of Mercy", Sittinghere "Imperative"

More to come later.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Grammarpunk Crits part 3

Finishing up with crits of SurreptitiousMuffin "Up-and-up-and-up", Dr. Kloctopussy "Mara's Private Diary", Fuschia_tude "The Revolution Continues", Uranium Phoenix "Sunstorm", and Deltasquid "The Dragon's Disqualification"

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-g...iew?usp=sharing

Next week I'll be posting crits for "AMBROSE BIERCE SAW HIM FIRST", stay tuned.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Jay W. Friks fucked around with this message at 04:12 on Jan 3, 2018

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Thanks for the heads up SH.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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King in Yellow crits are in the making but I'm out of town for this weekend and will be working on something that will take up my time. Letting you all know I will get them in next week instead. I hope your stories for Thranguy are bloody and plentiful.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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gently caress yeah Entenzahn!

IN

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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This is the annual analysis of your birth. Entenzahn, you take a look in the mirror and ask yourself-
Cake or Pie?

This is the day where a number is your itinerary. Entenzahn, if you're over 21, scream "It's my Birthday!" at your local bar and 50/50 someone will buy you a drink. (my gift of advice to you)

On this day the Ent-Entered-Zahn and now whaddya got? Entenzahn, have a Happy Birthday because they get shittier as they get older.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Entenzahn, I'm going to bow out for this week. Taking a break from TD sounds like a good idea.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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d'awwww

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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In with Horror

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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Things i like about TD:

It's still alive in an otherwise decaying portion on the interwebs.

Things I dislike:

Not enough spiders.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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sebmojo posted:

2018: writing our wrongs

I like dis one

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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YELLOW CRITS PART 1

It's taken awhile but I got the first batch up.

Crits for "No Mask" by Burkion, "The new guy" by Yoruichi, "Just a book" by DreamingofRoses, "Shared between us" by Okua.

More coming soon.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1kF...iew?usp=sharing

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016


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flerp posted:

offer still stands i only got one so far

consider this my news year gift or whatever

Thanks Flerp. How about this one?

https://thunderdome.cc/?story=5941&title=Hell+Mary

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Oct 4, 2016


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Archive link:

https://thunderdome.cc/?story=6242&...erned+colleague

Jay W. Friks fucked around with this message at 04:21 on Jan 3, 2018

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