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Subjunctive posted:It's not really YA (though it's not far off), but Ready Player One was thick with that sort of thing. Ready Player One is a love letter to video gaming so I can't blame it.
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iospace posted:Ready Player One is a love letter to video gaming so I can't blame it. It was a love letter to vacuous uncritical pop culture consumptionism Also the Twitter of the author has been interesting. Turns out this is a battle against bullying and trolling.
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SUPERMAN'S GAL PAL posted:50 Shades, which is adult fanfic of a YA series, LOVES brand-name dropping. Then again, so did Twilight when it came to cars. I think it's far less a YA thing and more a consumer porn thing. I think it's extremely telling when an author focuses on what their characters own as a way to communicate how "sophisticated" they're meant to be, because if it's expensive it MUST be better, right? Confessions of a shopaholic did the same but at least that made sense for the character
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iospace posted:Ready Player One is a love letter to video gaming so I can't blame it. Yeah but it's like a love letter written by someone in grade 10. I enjoyed the retro references, too, but it was some clumsy plotting and dialogue and...everything that wasn't retro references.
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SerialKilldeer posted:I kind of hope Lani ends up doing the film as a zero-budget production with some friends and family, as did Gloria Tesch: I was very fortunate to have forgotten about Gloria Tesch...
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iospace posted:Ready Player One is a love letter to video gaming so I can't blame it. Well, if the love letter were written by this guy: https://twitter.com/conversationrag (tragically, his website is down)
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Besesoth posted:Well, if the love letter were written by this guy: https://twitter.com/conversationrag (tragically, his website is down) MY TELOMERES
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chitoryu12 posted:I was very fortunate to have forgotten about Gloria Tesch...
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# ? Aug 29, 2017 11:48 |
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Subjunctive posted:It's not really YA (though it's not far off), but Ready Player One was thick with that sort of thing. That boy band "joke" and Game of Thrones poo poo made me cringe hard in exactly the way RP1 did.
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quote:“It looked like you met everyone that works here today. The line to say hello to you after your performance resembled an autograph signing by a boy band. I don’t really know what the latest one is, but Backstreet, Five Directions, One Second of Winter, 98 Celsius, O-city, NSYNC Boys or Old Kids on a Curb or something like that.” she wants to bang her cousin who was in a boyband
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anilEhilated posted:They actually made that movie, what the hell? It is magical. And by magical I mean highschool project with wardrobe purchases from Halloween Adventures.
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anilEhilated posted:They actually made that movie, what the hell? It sounds like the next book for me to spork when given the opportunity. For now, let's continue our journey through Las Vegas. quote:Considering how much I wanted to keep my secrets, well, secret, a few days later I probably brought a little too much attention to myself. I didn’t really know what to do and felt like I had no choice. I had seen something. I knew someone was going to get hurt. Maybe I should have just kept my mouth shut, but I couldn’t really just stand by and not say anything, could I? I knew by saying something I was opening myself up for people to start asking too many questions. What sort of reaction had I expected? I sounded crazy to any normal person. I'm not entirely sure at this point where the hard limit is on Zade's powers. She's already opened the book by effortlessly teleporting with an expensive special effect, and now she's also got premonitions? Judging from the plot synopsis, the whole "Chaos Magick" thing sounds like it's just going to limit her powers as we go on by making it dangerous for her to be a badass. As Zade is trying to think of what to do, she sees Mac storming across the stage. Zade runs after him to try and get his attention; when he ignores her, she grabs his shirt so hard that one of the seams on his sleeve tears. Holy poo poo this girl is bad at social interaction and we're only 4 chapters in! Zade nervously asks if Mac's crew found anything weird in the safety checks today, and straight up tells him that she gets weird premonition-like feelings all the time. Mac doesn't believe her, being a firm believer in logic over bad feelings. Zade begs him to check everything again, but Mac (understandably) reacts like he's just barely restraining himself from slapping her and tells her to just get into position for rehearsal. Fuming, Zade puts on her harness and clips onto the guide wire along the catwalks. quote:Usually my hints of the future come in random flashes. So, when I try to focus, it gets tricky—like focusing a nice camera for a picture. As you make adjustments, the image gets clearer, but if you try too hard then it gets even fuzzier. I couldn’t see how exactly it was going to occur . . . at least not well enough to stop it. I just saw enough to know that some part of the equipment was going to malfunction and someone was going to fall. But what was going to malfunction? I could hear something about “hitting the E stop” but could only tell it was a male voice yelling it. I had the feeling that if I could only see who fell, I could do something. Zade passes by Riley checking Sofia's gear. She doesn't pay much attention, but hears Riley comment on "broken necks" and turns to find that Sofia is begging Riley to let her rehearse without her uncomfortable harness. Before she can react, Pete announces curtains up in two...and the catwalk platform the trio is standing on begins to raise up before it's supposed to. Riley jumps on the radio to yell at Automation to hit the E-stop, but it's too late. The unharnessed Sofia loses her balance and tumbles backwards, but just before she falls off Zade dives forward and shoves her, giving her just enough momentum to land on her back in the pool of water instead of the stage. Zade rips off her harness and dives into the pool after her, fishing her out and carrying her unconscious body to the surface to begin CPR. quote:A visibly upset Riley had finally reached the ground. Tad and Mac, among others, ran to him and immediately started asking questions. Mac spoke first; I knew he needed to find out the details of what just occurred while they were still fresh in Riley’s mind. “Riley, what happened?” Mac asked, doing his best to remain calm. Sofia wakes up and begins coughing up water. Zade actually bothers to let her animosity drop a bit to comfort her in her time of need, and Riley finally calms down enough to leave. quote:“That was quick thinking, Zade,” Tad said. “Is there anything you don’t do?” I smiled a little. There’s a calming and relaxing energy that surrounds Tad like a bubble. Just like how some people have sporadic energy that makes them hard to be around. Tad is the exact opposite and whenever I am around him or talking to him I instantly feel it effect me in a good way. It’s a rare but delightful quality few people possess. I decided to try to keep things light. Yes yes, we know, Zade is awesome and the only person who doesn't instantly love her and everything she does is the one love interest who needs to provide conflict. Get on with it already. Zade brushes off her fast reactions as "having a feeling" and heads off, but she hears Tad and Mac talking about her as she leaves. The italics return, and we're back to third person only one chapter after the last time this stunt was pulled! quote:“Wonder what that meant?” Tad asked Mac. Well hang on there. You see that "I" slipped in? The last time the book did this, it remained exclusively in third person narrative format. Now Zade is viewing this in first person again? I'm incredibly confused, and haven't read far enough to figure out if the italics are Zade magically spying on people (in which case, why didn't she comment to Mac about him perving on her?) or if Lani just hosed up and forgot she was writing a third person scene. Mac continues to throw a bitch fit, even suggesting that Zade apologize for having her weird feelings in the first place! Tad can tell that he has a crush on her, but this just makes Mac even angrier and he runs off. Returning to first person, Zade has been busy; she's already checked on Riley and borrowed Jackson's acoustic guitar, and she's currently sitting on the loading dock strumming and singing "That's Just What You Are" by Aimee Mann. Just like with the Dixie Chicks before, we get a huge chunk of the lyrics pasted in. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ht8IDwGAei8 Mac comes out for his smoke break behind her. Zade can feel him staring at her, but she intentionally pretends not to see him and keeps playing. Finally, Mac gets her attention by snarking about her "booking a smoke break". quote:“Sounded like that song was about me,” Mac said, sitting down next to me on the edge of the dock and nudging me slightly with his shoulder. Zade is pleasantly surprised. Turns out not only does Mac know Aimee Mann, they both know her because of her presence on the soundtrack for Magnolia and it's one of their favorite films. Three guesses if Magnolia is one of Lani's favorite films, and the first two don't count. Mac and Zade both mutually apologize to one another for being total dickwads for the whole book so far, during which she notices that his Zippo has an engraving of some kind of the front that she can't quite make out. She starts trying to talk to him about her reticence to talk about her illusion, but he waves it off because Charles overruled him anyway. He compares it to Penn & Teller's bullet catch trick as something that they haven't told anyone about. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DK0-ImFaSG4 They continue learning about their mutual interests, like how Mac also plays guitar (are they going to start a threesome band at the end of this?) and likes to ride his Triumph Daytona out in the desert, at which point Zade reveals that she also rides. quote:“I have two. One’s back home in Tennessee. It’s just a classic cafe racer. It’s also a Triumph, a 1969 Triumph Trophy 250. It’s really fun to ride but not super fast. When I got the job out here I bought myself a present. The Triumph Dakota is too heavy for me so I got myself a Ducati Streetfighter. It’s not too shabby but it only has a top speed of 143. So far I’ve probably only topped out at around a hundred.” I shrugged and hoped I didn’t sound too nerdy. For the record, a relatively new Ducati Streetfighter costs around $10,000+ (or 0.06% of the movie adaptation's budget!). She must have been given one hell of an advance on her contract, since she's coming from a Tennessee community of less than 300 and used to make her living as a fortune teller. Mac jokingly calls her "Magi Girl", and they get up to talking about everyone's nicknames here. It turns out Zade is also a nickname, because her real name is loving ridiculous. quote:“Zade is short for my full name—Scheherazade Holder. It comes from a story my mom used to read to me as a kid. It’s about a princess who marries this king who executes his bride each night so he can get a new one the next day. Well, Scheherazade ends up his bride. To stay alive, she tells him a story every night, always stopping at dawn with a cliffhanger, so he will leave her alive for another day. After 1,001 nights he was madly in love with her and decided to keep her. And they lived happily ever after.” I looked over at him. He was still listening intently. “Do you know it?” Also her middle name is Esther. Scheherazade Esther Holder. My tongue feels like it's made of taffy trying to say it. Mac also embarrassingly admits that his real name is Clark, as in Clark Kent. He took his nickname because his parents called him "MacGyver" for his ingenuity. Their time learning about how similar they are is interrupted by Tad coming on the radio, saying that he found the glitch but his control board is going haywire. Before leaving, he shouts back at Zade that his favorite Aimee Mann song (and candy) is "Red Vines". Literally seconds after Mac leaves, Jackson appears. He tells her that while Sofia's ego has been permanently damaged and will never recover, physically she only has a concussion and will need a few stitches. Zade starts stressing over whether Sofia will treat her even worse for bruising her ego by saving her, but Jackson brushes it off. quote:“You’re pretty amazing, you know that?” I chuckled nervously and blushed. I started biting my lower lip and shifted my feet.
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Just to finish off this chapter, I want to point out that I've been checking on the articles around the Internet about Handbook for Mortals and LegendaryWoman on themarysue.com had an interesting story here...quote:Oh it gets so much worse than even that. I got an ARC copy from netgalley before they got all yanked. Anyway, if you read all the way through, she uses the word "g*ypsy" to describe herself and ethnic heritage more than once. It also has a preview at the end that's the first chapter of book 2 (dream on) that's transphobic. Basically, a Mary Sue dumpster fire. The creepiest part, however, is this whole thing is related to Twilight. It was a wattpad fanfiction back in 2013 and pulled to publish and it's Twilight connection is that Sarem was a groupie for Jackson Rathbone (Jasper from Twilight films) band, 100 Monkeys. The story is about a woman (she's 25 in the story so not YA even) who is caught in a love triangle where one of the love interests is a guy with dark hair, plays in a band she becomes backstage friends with/a groupie too, and his name is literally "Jackson," no last name given. Basically, Sarem created a real person fanfic with herself getting accolades from the actor she was obsessed with and then published it in a scheme to create YA buzz, money, and get a movie made somehow. I am baffled as to how because even if this crazy thing had worked (I'm so glad it was got and revealed for the S**tshow and scam it was) but even if it had. She's clearly 40. So how would she be the star of a YA movie or even, let's be honest Hollywood, a movie with a 25 year old woman in it. Seriously, the delusion and entitlement is gross and unfathomable. I guess we now know what Jackson looks like, as this book gets a lot creepier....
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Golly, Scheherazade is just interesting and talented. And wealthy now, too. Let's keep a tally of her flaws as a person. 1) Comes from a small town. 2) Yells at people. 3) Maybe too perfect??
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I now know what being old feels like because for a second I was like "what do you mean gypsy is a slur?"
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Hey I am gonna star as a 20-something in a YA film
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Also also, I overlooked a line at the beginning of the book where Zade offhandedly describes herself as having lived in Centertown for "practically a quarter of a century". This puts her age at 25, a solid 10 years younger than the author who's trying to play her in a movie.
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chitoryu12 posted:Also her middle name is Esther. Scheherazade Esther Holder. My tongue feels like it's made of taffy trying to say it. Wait, I've been thinking of her name as rhyming with "jade". Does this mean it's pronounced "Zod"? (Or does Salem not know how to pronounce "Scheherazade"? )
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side note, Rosemont, IL is also where this happened: http://www.chicagotribune.com/news/local/breaking/chi-19-hospitalized-thousands-evacuated-in-gas-leak-at-rosemont-hotel-20141207-story.html
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Besesoth posted:Wait, I've been thinking of her name as rhyming with "jade". Does this mean it's pronounced "Zod"? Oh no, I left the paragraph out but she tells everyone in Vegas that it's pronounced like "Aid" with a Z. You've got it right.
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Its weird that upon reflection arguably the most delusion part of this whole enterprise was the belief she would get to play the lead role
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Besesoth posted:Wait, I've been thinking of her name as rhyming with "jade". Does this mean it's pronounced "Zod"? chitoryu12 posted:Oh no, I left the paragraph out but she tells everyone in Vegas that it's pronounced like "Aid" with a Z. You've got it right. I'm thinking of the character as "Zod" from now on. So any guesses what "Lani" is short for?
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HungryMedusa posted:I'm thinking of the character as "Zod" from now on. There's another, slower going sporking on a blog I found (it's covering practically every line instead of just pertinent chunks like mine) that's calling the protagonist "Zani" because of how transparent of a self-insert it is.
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chitoryu12 posted:There's another, slower going sporking on a blog I found (it's covering practically every line instead of just pertinent chunks like mine) that's calling the protagonist "Zani" because of how transparent of a self-insert it is. Link?
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Right here. Also, Lani's quote on why the Times knocked her off the bestseller list: quote:“My personal opinion: I’m a first time author; I did some great numbers. They put me on the list. The list is curated. They didn’t have to put me on the list despite how many books I sold. When these people made a big issue, they were like, ‘This is too much effort.’ ”
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Its weird that upon reflection arguably the most delusion part of this whole enterprise was the belief she would get to play the lead role
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Nakar posted:The greatest irony would be if the story of the book's sordid attempt to make it ends up creating a Disaster Artist-style making-of that's a hit but she doesn't get to play herself. I'd prefer it getting the "Overnight" treatment myself
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# ? Aug 29, 2017 21:21 |
Also, apparently Lani got her idea for gaming the system from Cowboys & Aliens. When their attempts at getting the movie off the ground didn't work due to lack of interest from studios, Platinum Studios priced the comic at only $5 and used various business arrangements and bulk purchase deals to turn the comic into a best seller and convince Universal and Dreamworks to move forward with a film adaptation.
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chitoryu12 posted:Also, apparently Lani got her idea for gaming the system from Cowboys & Aliens. When their attempts at getting the movie off the ground didn't work due to lack of interest from studios, Platinum Studios priced the comic at only $5 and used various business arrangements and bulk purchase deals to turn the comic into a best seller and convince Universal and Dreamworks to move forward with a film adaptation. and we saw how that turned out
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# ? Aug 29, 2017 21:40 |
Oh holy poo poo. So I skipped over the epigraphs Lani put at the beginning of the book. Let me copy them in here. quote:Some people are magic...While others are just the illusion of it. – Beau Taplin The CS Lewis quote is actually a tagline for the first Chronicles of Narnia film, and the Stephanie Meyer quote is actually a line of Bella's from Twilight.
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chitoryu12 posted:Also, apparently Lani got her idea for gaming the system from Cowboys & Aliens. When their attempts at getting the movie off the ground didn't work due to lack of interest from studios, Platinum Studios priced the comic at only $5 and used various business arrangements and bulk purchase deals to turn the comic into a best seller and convince Universal and Dreamworks to move forward with a film adaptation. This is really the only part of the authors plan that made sense. I really don't Hollywood would have read the book to see if it would be a good movie. They'd just see that it's s Best seller.
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For the first time, the book actually begins with a third person segment. We also have some unusual use of italics:quote:Several of the cast and crew gathered at McMullan’s bar for a birthday celebration for Drew, one of the audio guys. It was the spot frequented by everyone if there was any kind of hint of going out after work. This usually happened if there was a birthday or any other celebratory event—as well as on the show’s “Friday” (which for the show has always actually been Tuesday night, since the show is “dark” on Wednesday and Thursday). I had learned that most shows don’t take their days off on the weekend because that’s when they sell the most tickets to shows and when Las Vegas, itself, is the busiest. So each shows “dark days” are not usually Saturday and Sunday, and each show in town takes a different “weekend,” so no tourist will ever come to Vegas and find no one is doing a show. The first few words aren't italicized, but I can't see any reason for it. Normally when a large block of text is in italics, you un-italicize it to emphasize it. I can't see any reason for emphasizing such a random line of text. None of the other chapters open with italicized or capitalized words like some books, either. The only explanation I have is that what actually got published was a first draft without an editor and Lani hosed up her Ctrl+I on Word. While the first line says that "several" of the cast and crew showed up, the next paragraph establishes that almost everyone from the show actually came. Mac is sitting alone at a table nursing a beer, wondering if he "made peace with his enemy" by talking to Zade (no joke, he actually describes it as this) when Sofia shows up with another beer for him. She bats her eyelashes and makes an incredibly obvious attempt at being flirtatious. She stares at him awkwardly, and Mac can tell she's just trying to work up the courage to ask him something (we get a good two paragraphs' worth of meaningless and repetitive dialogue explaining how he can tell). After asking Sofia about why Charles hasn't come to the party, Mac lets his single beer get the better of him and rants about how Charles feels uncomfortable in genuine social situations because he's only used to pretending at things like press events and galas. Sofia gets even closer and bunches up her cleavage, and Mac finally clues in that she's just trying to gently caress him. quote:“Sofie, what are you doing?” he asked in a harsh tone. Sofia looked surprised that he had pulled away from her. She sat back up, so she was no longer leaning in either. This is some of the most painful dialogue to get through, and on the Kindle it all just mashes together into big blocks because of Lani's inability to break up her paragraphs. My eyes keep wanting to drift from the page. Is this what it's like to have ADD? Also we get this great typo, once again proving that Lani never had an editor: quote:It almost seemed like it had been planned that, at that exact moment, Mel, another girl Mel, who worked for the show, walked around the corner with a large cake lit with candles. Mel sets down Drew's birthday cake (which has a microphone on top, since he's an audio guy) and Cam takes the opportunity to tink a spoon against a glass to get everyone's attention. Mac sneaks away from Sofia and strikes up a conversation with Zeb, and our third person bit ends once more. Several weeks later, Zade is practicing a 60 foot high dive for her part in the show when she finds Mac standing there and smiling at her. She explains how over the last few weeks, they had finished their period of animosity with each other and become nicer to each other, like Zade giving him a pack of Red Vines because they were two-for-one at the store. quote:“You like the water?” he asked. Again, the big paragraph really is a big paragraph in the book. On Kindle it takes up a whole page, and I had to actually go back and re-read to see exactly where Zade was asked to go scuba diving because my eyes just glazed over. Reading this book is like listening to an old man ramble on the phone after asking a question. Also, I bolded yet another obvious mistake that an editor should have caught. Zade asks about how deep the lake is, and Mac makes a joke about "I can always go deeper" that makes her giggle at the innuendo. Instead of laughing along with her and Tad, Mac gets embarrassed and runs away...again. RETURN TO THIRD PERSON quote:Tad started shaking his head. “I’m surprised you didn’t ask her if she likes being wet!” The back and forth that ends the chapter is pretty much useless, just a continuation of the "You like her!" "Nuh-uh!" dynamic from every other time this conversation occurred. quote:Tad looked at Mac and scoffed, “I’ll bet you $100 you end up making out with her before the end of the year.” Tad put his hand out to shake Mac’s. We're 27% of the way through the book and exactly one thing of note to the plot has happened, and exactly one bit of magic has been performed. No illusions from the show have been seen. The next chapter is a camping chapter. God help us all. chitoryu12 fucked around with this message at 22:21 on Aug 29, 2017 |
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Wow, Tad frowned and furrowed his eyebrows.
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Besesoth posted:Wait, I've been thinking of her name as rhyming with "jade". Does this mean it's pronounced "Zod"? I really want to make a Sade joke but it just isn't coming together.
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chitoryu12 posted:The CS Lewis quote is actually a tagline for the first Chronicles of Narnia film, and the Stephanie Meyer quote is actually a line of Bella's from Twilight. *checks the books*
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A HUNGRY MOUTH posted:It's cool the way she overexplains every joke and reference, it really makes me feel like I'm part of this magical world of popular music and TV programs. AHM's post made me laugh a lot, like when I watch Big Bang Theory and the main character Sheldon yells "BAZINGA!" 'B A Z I N G A!!' I typed with a smile, hoping he'd get that I was refencing the show.
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chitoryu12 posted:Reading this book is like listening to an old man ramble on the phone after asking a question. Now I want an audio book version of this book read by Lenny https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=results A short primer on Lenny (and his ducks) for those who've never spent a rainy afternoon listening to him http://www.independent.co.uk/life-style/gadgets-and-tech/news/lenny-telemarketer-bot-robot-prank-a6813081.html Ms Boods fucked around with this message at 10:46 on Aug 30, 2017 |
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Ms Boods posted:Now I want an audio book version of this book read by Lenny It would be SO cool if that video actually existed...
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Gah -- apologies, that link should have taken you to a list of Lenny recordings. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4lL870ixdsY
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Ms Boods posted:Gah -- apologies, that link should have taken you to a list of Lenny recordings. Cheers! (Really wishing I had the kit to do a build... )
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