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Solitair
Feb 18, 2014


I can't resist JoJo. In with a flash rule.

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Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


Solitair posted:

I can't resist JoJo. In with a flash rule.

Thranguy
Apr 21, 2010

'Read over your compositions, and when you meet a passage which you think is particularly fine, strike it out.' -Samuel Johnson

In and flash

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


Thranguy posted:

In and flash



Read from right to left, top to bottom

Deltasquid fucked around with this message at Apr 10, 2018 around 08:23

big scary monsters
Sep 2, 2011

-~Skullwave~-


I am in, please flash me.

Chainmail Onesie
May 12, 2014


LoserWinner
of "Thunder Dome!

Tanz! posted:

The other two judges state they will be expanding their crits in their own posts. However I am lazy and instead I am offering detailed crits to anyone who asks for one, that submitted this week. Just quote this post.

Me pls

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


big scary monsters posted:

I am in, please flash me.

Schneider Heim
Oct 17, 2012


In with a flash rule!

Fleta Mcgurn
Oct 5, 2003

Who has two thumbs, speaks limited French, and hasn't cried once today? This moi!



Oh, hey, I actually have time for this!!! in; flash me

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


Schneider Heim posted:

In with a flash rule!




Fleta Mcgurn posted:

Oh, hey, I actually have time for this!!! in; flash me

Bad Seafood
Dec 10, 2010

If you must blink, do it now.


In with a little story that must be told.

Gimme a taste of the remedy.

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


Bad Seafood posted:

In with a little story that must be told.

Gimme a taste of the remedy.

crabrock
Aug 2, 2002

aka sticklegs



Grimey Drawer

in

CascadeBeta
Feb 14, 2009

I failed to submit because I was so excited about New Zealander Tim Price winning the Burghley Horse Trials on the quirky but freakishly talented Ringwood Sky Boy

In

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


ATTENTION everyone: to make the prompt a bit less insane I decided to go and drop the wordcount a bit.

Now you get 1750 words (+500 if flashruled) rather than 2500. I'd rather do the change now and save you from rewriting your stories tomorrow (ha.)

Also, still looking for one co-judge!

Bubble Bobby
Jan 28, 2005


Thanks to last weeks judges for reading my retarded story. I'm in with a flash rule

derp
Jan 21, 2010

a little less conversation and a little more filthy rodents


Lipstick Apathy

hello. i'm having trouble writing lately so i guess i'll do one of these with a flash also k thanks.

BabyRyoga
May 21, 2001

THUNDERDOME LOSER

6th Anniversary Edition


Ok, i'll go in with a flash rule

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


Bubble Bobby posted:

Thanks to last weeks judges for reading my retarded story. I'm in with a flash rule



derp posted:

hello. i'm having trouble writing lately so i guess i'll do one of these with a flash also k thanks.



BabyRyoga posted:

Ok, i'll go in with a flash rule

Flesnolk
Apr 11, 2012

If only, THUNDERDOME


In. Flash.

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


Flesnolk posted:

In. Flash.

apophenium
Apr 13, 2009

I am a real boy.


I'm in

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016

Six of one, half dozen of another.

Grimey Drawer

In

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk

In, and flash me with your anime nonsense

Antivehicular
Dec 30, 2011

I won a rosette in the Thunderdome


Ah, what the hell. I need to work on not writing comfortable empty little stories, so in with a flash.

ThirdEmperor
Aug 7, 2013


SCREAMING YES
MOTHERFUCKER
I AM GUILTY, I AM DEATH


<%TDbot> tanz! has 1 submissions, 1 wins, and 0 plants they haven't killed

Your perfect record disgusts me and so does your floricide

Let's dance, tanz! Brawl me.

Jon Joe
Oct 19, 2011

HELP! I'VE FAILED AND I CAN'T SUBMIT


Grimey Drawer

ThirdEmperor posted:

<%TDbot> tanz! has 1 submissions, 1 wins, and 0 plants they haven't killed

Your perfect record disgusts me and so does your floricide

Let's dance, tanz! Brawl me.

Who the gently caress is tanz!?

I reject attacks against the imaginary, so I'll brawl you instead.

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016

Six of one, half dozen of another.

Grimey Drawer

Jon Joe posted:

Who the gently caress is tanz!?

I reject attacks against the imaginary, so I'll brawl you instead.

BRAWL TIIIIIIIIME

Jonjoe AKA the TANZ is brawling the Emperor hisself THIRDEMPEROR.

For a brawl like this, I have a special contest to test these literary gladiators abilities.

Two of the same suit

In an earlier discussion in mibbit, I fumbled with the idea of a brawl in my head that involves telling the same story twice but by different authors.
This seems like an excellent time to test out a prototype of that,

PROMPT: Jonjoe and Third both write about this "A lawyer gets into a fight with a member of the press hounding him." You can change the genders of the two characters/races/ but there must be a lawyer and a member of the press. There must be a fight between them. The rest is up to you. May the better goon win.

EDIT: Due by 4/14/18 at 8pm PST (SATURDAY)

EDIT: 1300 word limit!

Jay W. Friks fucked around with this message at Apr 11, 2018 around 19:34

SurreptitiousMuffin
Mar 21, 2010

I got it wrong. Look, I'm well aware I got it wrong and uh, I got it wrong.


Yeah sure I'm in.

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


sebmojo posted:

In, and flash me with your anime nonsense



Read right to left kudasai

Antivehicular posted:

Ah, what the hell. I need to work on not writing comfortable empty little stories, so in with a flash.



Right to left

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk

Deltasquid has won, but remains unscrolled.

See to it if you think him worthy.

avs for the 'taxgod, for the spinethrone

sebmojo fucked around with this message at Apr 11, 2018 around 12:39

Deltasquid
Apr 10, 2013

awww...
you guys made me ink!


THUNDERDOME


sebmojo posted:

Deltasquid has won, but remains unscrolled.

See to it if you think him worthy.

avs for the 'taxgod, for the spinethrone

Wow thanks

You made me splurt ink all over my desk

Uranium Phoenix
Jun 20, 2007


RADIOACTIVE DUST SURGE DETECTED


Jon Joe posted:

The other two judges state they will be expanding their crits in their own posts. However I am lazy and instead I am offering detailed crits to anyone who asks for one, that submitted this week. Just quote this post.

Yeah I'll take one of these

Jay W. Friks
Oct 4, 2016

Six of one, half dozen of another.

Grimey Drawer

Jay W. Friks posted:

BRAWL TIIIIIIIIME

Jonjoe AKA the TANZ is brawling the Emperor hisself THIRDEMPEROR.

For a brawl like this, I have a special contest to test these literary gladiators abilities.

Two of the same suit

In an earlier discussion in mibbit, I fumbled with the idea of a brawl in my head that involves telling the same story twice but by different authors.
This seems like an excellent time to test out a prototype of that,

PROMPT: Jonjoe and Third both write about this "A lawyer gets into a fight with a member of the press hounding him." You can change the genders of the two characters/races/ but there must be a lawyer and a member of the press. There must be a fight between them. The rest is up to you. May the better goon win.

EDIT: Due by 4/14/18 at 8pm PST (SATURDAY)

EDIT: 1300 word limit!

Witness these edits.

Kaishai
Nov 3, 2010

Scoffing at modernity.

Thunderdome Recap!



As I was listening a' alane,
I heard thre cappers makin' a mane.
The tane untae on tither did say-o,
"What even is this dialect-o?
What even is this dialect?"


Hop aboard the failure train, Thunderdome, and join Sitting Here, Ironic Twist, and me in the dining car for scones and a review of Week 290: Fiasco Week 2: Return to the Chicken Hut and Week 291: You are Such a Loser, Good for You! Never have fake heroin in a cartoon-giraffe suit or rockers skydiving into a skeleton horde been so dull as here, but at least we have our deaths in a randomly generated black hole to look forward to. We talk a little about what makes for a successful story of failure, though our attention is preoccupied by an eternal question: how does one ge'ez a laptop?

“Who the gently caress is that?” Jimmy asked, pointing to a naked man covered in dried blood.

Episodes past can be found here!

Exmond
May 31, 2007


im doin it ma im writing

THUNDERDOME


Jon Joe posted:

The other two judges state they will be expanding their crits in their own posts. However I am lazy and instead I am offering detailed crits to anyone who asks for one, that submitted this week. Just quote this post.

50% DM rate sucks, crabrock what I gotta do to have TD accidentaly purge all my records.

I'll take a crit, also

Fast Critting, Good Critting

crabrock
Aug 2, 2002

aka sticklegs



Grimey Drawer

Exmond posted:

50% DM rate sucks, crabrock what I gotta do to have TD accidentaly purge all my records.

I'll take a crit, also

Fast Critting, Good Critting

venmo or paypal

derp
Jan 21, 2010

a little less conversation and a little more filthy rodents


Lipstick Apathy

Kaishai posted:

Thunderdome Recap!





*bumps into signpost, falls down, spends rest of life there*

Tyrannosaurus
Apr 12, 2006

I failed to submit because I was so excited about New Zealander Tim Price winning the Burghley Horse Trials on the quirky but freakishly talented Ringwood Sky Boy

I'm in

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QuoProQuid
Jan 12, 2012

WHO LOVES BLOOD SODA?
KEL LOVES BLOOD SODA!


I do. I do. I do-oo.


im in

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