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Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007

im mad gay and im gonna also app to this game

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Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007


Sergeant Matias Solomon, 10th Company

quote:

LONG AGO IN A DISTANT LAND
I, TZEENTCH, THE SHAPESHIFTING MASTER OF DARKNESS,
UNLEASHED AN UNSPEAKABLE EVIL!

BUT A FOOOOOOOLISH REBEL WARLORD
STEPPED FORTH TO OP-POSE ME.

BEFORE THE FINAL BLOW WAS STRUCK,
I TORE OPEN A PORTAL IN TIME AND FLUNG HIM INTO THE WARP
WHERE MY CHAOS IS LAW!

NOW THE FOOL SEEKS TO RETURN TO THE PAST
AND UNDO THE FUTURE THAT IS TZEENTCH.

A Terran born operative, active since the inception of the Alpha Legion. Solomon has spent a significant portion of his life embedded as an infiltrator within various Space Marine chapters, usually adopting the identity of a captured or slain Astartes whose memories can be plundered and then re implanted into Solomon's mind. He served as one of many spies for a cabal of Alpha Legion sorcerors, whose mission since the end of the Horus Heresy has been to bring about the fall of the Chaos Gods. It took until the 43rd millennium for them to succeed in provoking a shift in the balance of power in the Warp. In the metaphysical wars that would follow Slaanesh would perish, then Khorne, followed shortly thereafter by Nurgle. So too would perish the remainder of the Eldar Gods. A reborn Kaela Mensha Khaine would fall dealing the final blow to Khorne, Isha would perish to see the end of Nurgle, and Cegorach would fall as the cabal and its allies made war against Tzeentch. The Cabal too would perish attempting to cast a spell that would bind Tzeentch. Solomon survived by virtue of being the only non-psyker Legionnaire to penetrate Tzeentch's Impossible Fortress and was banished to the warp as he attempted to shatter Tzeentch using an ancient Eldar artifact. Although greatly weakened, Solomon was able to avoid being completely consumed by Tzeentch's daemons and escaped, with the help of a dying Cegorach, back to the past. Now back in the 41st millennium, Solomon has taken up the mantle of Scout Sergeant among the Blood Ravens, one of the Chapters he spent time among when he operated as a seeker of archeotech and forbidden lore for the cabal.

The appearance of the Warmaster's Son was a good omen for the cabal, but as his memories were ripped apart one by one in the warp, Solomon can't remember why it was a good omen. All he knows is that something of importance is on that ship and he will search every meter of it until he finds it. In the meantime, the Chapter will no doubt commend him for all the other "relics" he finds along the way.



pre:
Name: Matias Solomon
Role: Alpha Legionnaire
Alignment: Unaligned
Pride: Wealth
Disgrace: Regret
Motivation: Violence

10#2d10+30: 10 # 35 [2d10=3, 2] 46 [2d10=7, 9] 33 [2d10=1, 2] 36 [2d10=1, 5] 35 [2d10=2, 3] 40 [2d10=8, 2] 44 [2d10=7, 7] 47 [2d10=8, 9] 38 [2d10=1, 7] 41 [2d10=9, 2]


WS:   59 = 30 +  14 [+10 Advance] [+5 Equipment]
BS:   45 = 30 +  5 [+5 Advance] [+5 Equipment]
S:    60 = 30 + 10 [+20 Equipment]
T:    40 = 30 + 5 [+5 Advance]
Ag:   56 = 30 + 16 [+10 Advance] 
Int:  40 = 30 +  8 [+5 Archetype] [-3 Motivation]
Per:  41 = 30 +  6 [+5 Archetype]
WP:   38 = 30 + 11 [-3 Pride]
Fel:  47 = 30 + 17

Wounds: 16/16  Wounds: 1d5+15 16
IP    : 4/4
Infamy:     40 Infamy: 1d5+19+15 35 [+5 Advance]
Corruption: 40 [+5 Disgrace] [+5 Motivation]


Skills:

Acrobatics
Athletics
Awareness +10
Charm
Command +10
Common Lore (Imperium)
Common Lore (War)
Deceive +30
Dodge +10
Forbidden Lore (Astartes)
Forbidden Lore (Long War)
Forbidden Lore (Psykers)
Intimidate
Linguistics (Low Gothic)
Navigate (Surface)
Operate (Surface)
Parry
Scholastic Lore (Tactica Imperialis)
Security +10
Scrutiny
Stealth +30


Talents:

Ambidextrous
Ancient Warrior
Berserk Charge
Blademaster
Blind Fighting
Bulging Biceps
Cold Hearted
Crippling Strike
Crushing Blow
Disarm
Enemy (Inquisition)
Excessive Wealth
Foresight
Furious Assault
Hatred (Astartes)
Heightened Senses (Hearing, Sight)
Hip Shooting
Legion Weapon Training
Lightning Reflexes
Nerves of Steel
Paranoia
Preternatural Speed
Quick Draw
Rapid Reaction
Rapid Reload
Resistance (Cold, Heat, Poison)
Sprint
Street Fighting
Swift Attack
Takedown
Unarmed Warrior


Traits:

Amphibious
Dark Sight (Auto-Senses)
Deceitful Tactics
Haunted
Insurrectionist
Unnatural Strength +4
Unnatural Toughness +4

Gifts/Mutations:


Gear:

Mark 4 Maximus Legion Power Armor
 - History
   - To forget is to forgive. Forget nothing - Gain Hatred (Astartes)
   - Blood of Those Who Came Before - +10 to Pinning Tests
   - The Emperor's Finest: +5 to Pinning, Fear, and Command Tests
 - Auto-senses
 - Chain Loinguard
 - Enhanced Ceramite
 - Sustainable Power Source
2 Legion Bolters
 - 7 clips
Legion Bolt Pistol
 - 3 clips
Legion Chainsword
Legion Combat Knife
4 Legion Frag
Cameleoline cloak
*** Best Legion Combat Knife
     - Mono
     - Venom Drip
* (Elevate Combat Knife to Legacy)
* Infernal Star
* Best Bionic Legs
* Beguiling Gem

Legacy Combat Knife:
 - Legacy of Betrayal
 - Artful Legacy weapon abilities: 2#1d10 6 4
   - Backstabber (6 modified to 10 with IB)
   - Fast (4 Modified to 8 with IB)


XP:                      14950/15000
Advances by Alignment: 9 K/1 N/9 S/2 T


Alpha Legionnaire               3600
Agility +5                       250
Agility +5                       500
Ballistic Skill +5               250
Toughness +5           [N]       250
Weapon Skill +5                  250
Weapon Skill +5                  500
Infamy +5                        500
Acrobatics             [S]       200
Berserk Charge         [K]       250
Blademaster            [K]       750
Blind Fighting         [T]       250
Charm                  [S]       250
Command                [K]       200
Command +10            [K]       350
Crippling Strike       [S]       500
Crushing Blow          [K]       750
Excessive Wealth       [S]       250
Furious Assault        [K]       500
Intimidate             [K]       250
Lightning Reflexes     [S]       250
Paranoia               [T]       500
Precise Blow           [S]       500
Preternatural Speed    [S]       750
Rapid Reaction         [S]       500
Security                         200
Security +10                     350
Stealth +20                      500
Stealth +30                      750
Street Fighting        [K]       250
Sure Strike            [S]       250
Swift Attack           [K]       500




WS    BS    S     T     Ag     Int    Per    WP    Fel  
59    45    60    40    56     40     41     38    47

Wounds: 16/16    Infamy 4/4   Fatigue Level: 0    Initiative: 2d10k1+7
Ground: 6/12/18/30

SB: 10  TB: 8 (10 to the Legs)
Awareness: 51 (71 for Sight/Hearing)
Dodge: 66
Parry: 59
Stealth: 96

Armour: 8 All  10 Body
Field: 50/1-5

Weapons: 
Legacy Combat Knife   Melee  ---   1d10+18 R  Pen  6  Clip:   ---    ----   Backstabber, Fast, Toxic 0
Legion Bolter         100m  S/3/-  1d10+ 9 X  Pen  4  Clip:  24/24   Half   Tearing
Legion Bolt Pistol     30m  S/2/-  1d10+ 9 X  Pen  4  Clip:   8/8    Half   Tearing
Legion Chainsword     Melee  ---   1d10+20 R  Pen  3  Clip:   ---    ----   Balanced, Tearing

Viva Miriya fucked around with this message at 01:53 on Jul 13, 2018

Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007


LONG AGO IN A DISTANT LAND
I, TZEENTCH, THE SHAPESHIFTING MASTER OF DARKNESS,
UNLEASHED AN UNSPEAKABLE EVIL!

BUT A FOOOOOOOLISH REBEL WARLORD
WIELDING A MAGIC LASCANNON
STEPPED FORTH TO OP-POSE ME.

BEFORE THE FINAL BLOW WAS STRUCK,
I TORE OPEN A PORTAL IN TIME AND FLUNG HIM INTO THE WARP
WHERE MY CHAOS IS LAW!

NOW THE FOOL SEEKS TO RETURN TO THE PAST
AND UNDO THE FUTURE THAT IS TZEENTCH.

pre:
Name: MAJA LAZA
Role: Chosen
Alignment: Unaligned
Pride: Foresight
Disgrace: Destruction
Motivation: Perfection

Characteristics: 10#2d10 9 17 7 11 11 15 6 18 11 7

WS:   41 = 30 +  9 [-3 Motivation] [+5 Armor]
BS:   68 = 30 + 18 [+5 Motivation] [+10 Advance] [+5 Armor]
S:    56 = 30 +  9 [+20 Armor] [-3 Motivation]
T:    41 = 30 + 11
Ag:   51 = 30 + 11 [+10 Advance]
Int:  57 = 30 + 17 [+10 Advance]
Per:  50 = 30 + 15 [+5 Pride]
WP:   41 = 30 + 11
Fel:  35 = 30 +  9 [-5 Pride] [-4 Disgrace] [+5 Advance]

Wounds: 17/17  Wounds: 1d5+16 17
IP     : 4/4
Infamy:     41 Infamy: 1d5+34 39 [+2 Disgrace]
Corruption: 30 


Skills:

Athletics
Awareness +20
Common Lore (War)
Commerce +10
Dodge +20
Forbidden Lore (Astartes)
Forbidden Lore (Long War)
Intimidate
Linguistics (Low Gothic)
Navigate (Surface)
Operate (Surface)
Parry
Security +10
Stealth +20
Tech Use +20
Trade (Armorer) +10

Talents:

Ambidextrous
Ancient Warrior
Armor Monger
Bulging Biceps
Crack Shot
Deadeye Shot
Disarm
Excessive Wealth
Heightened Senses (Hearing, Sight)
Hip Shooting
Legion Weapon Training
Lightning Reflexes
Marksman
Mighty Shot
Nerves of Steel
Quick Draw
Rapid Reload
Resistance (Cold, Heat, Poison)
Sharpshooter
Step Aside
Storm of Iron
Target Selection
Unarmed Warrior
Weapon Tech


Traits:

Amphibious
Cold Killer
Unnatural Strength +4
Unnatural Toughness +4

Gifts/Mutations:

Flesh-Fused Weapon (Lascannon)

Gear:

Mark 6 Corvus Legion Power Armor Armor pattern: 1d10 5
 - Hero's Shame - +5 to WS and BS, -10 Command
 - Unknown Provenance - Roll to see effects during mission
 - Auto-Senses
 - Black Legion's Armor armor customization: 1d10 10
 - Sustainable Power Source
 - Vox Link
Legion Bolter
 - 4 clips
Legion Bolt Pistol
 - 2 clips
Legion Combat Knife
Legion Chainsword
* Hellhammer Lascannon
* Combi-Tool
* Good Cerebral Implants
* Cameleoline Cloak

XP:                     14900/15000

Ballistic Skill +5              250
Ballistic Skill +5              500
Agility +5                      250
Agility +5                      500
Intelligence +5                 250
Intelligence +5                 500
Tech Use                        200
Tech Use +10                    350
Tech Use +20                    500
Stealth +10                     350
Stealth +20                     500
Dodge +20                       500
Awareness +10                   350
Awareness +20                   500
Trade (Armorer)                 200
Trade (Armorer) +10             350
Fellowship +5                   250
Ancient Warrior                 250
Weapon Tech                     250
Excessive Wealth                250
Armor Monger                    500
Hip Shooting                    500
Sharpshooter                    500
Marksman                        500
Storm of Iron                   500
Crack Shot                      500
Step Aside                      750
Target Selection                750
Mighty Shot                     750
True Grit                       750
Eye of Vengeance                750
Security                        200
Security +10                    350
Commerce                        200
Commerce +10                    350


WS    BS    S     T     Ag     Int    Per    WP    Fel  
41    68    56    41    61     57     50     41    35

Wounds: 17/17    Infamy 4/4   Fatigue Level: 0    Initiative: 2d10k1+6
Ground: 7/14/21/35

SB: 9  TB: 4
Awareness: 70 (90 for Sight/Hearing)
Dodge: 81
Parry: 41

Armour: 11 All  12 Body

Weapons: 
Lascannon             300m  S/-/-  5d10+13 E  Pen 10  Clip:   5/5    Full   Best Quality, Proven 3
Legion Bolter         100m  S/3/-  1d10+12 X  Pen  4  Clip:  24/24   Half   Tearing
Legion Bolt Pistol     30m  S/2/-  1d10+12 X  Pen  4  Clip:   8/8    Half   Tearing
Legion Chainsword     Melee  ---   1d10+12 R  Pen  3  Clip:   ---    ----   Balanced, Tearing
this is a comedy app

Viva Miriya fucked around with this message at 19:40 on Jul 7, 2018

Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007

John Dyne posted:

Apps will remain open another day or so; one applicant needed a little more time due to being with their family over the weekend, so everyone gets an extra day or two to polish off your characters.

i mean should I? I feel mine is perfectly vague

Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007

John Dyne posted:

Yours is the loving Samurai Jack opening.

I thought it was atlatl OC

Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007

(Sigh)


So, what did I do wrong in my character? So I know to avoid that in the future? Given how my character was actually Done, as opposed to a character sheet with no background or other information?

Or did I just get unlucky and apply for a position that someone who was promised a spot wanted?

Long story short, I'd just like to know what removed me from consideration so I don't make that mistake in the future.

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Viva Miriya
Jan 9, 2007

Squad Notes

Astartes Personnel

The Antiquarian (Xaiphos the Erudite): Potential asset, though I may have to kill him if he acquires a critical artifact before I do. Has an obsession with the past that borders on the heretical. This can mean one of a few things in my experience: either he is one of the many radical souls genuinely interested in advancing the Imperium in the universe, he is a Chaos plant subtly trying to compromise those around him, or he is simply a Blood Raven. Due to the nature of this Chapter, it is hard to tell which at times. If he happens to be a brother Legionnaire, I also might have to kill him if his aims diverge with my own. Our work cannot be stopped if the species is to survive. For the Emperor.

The Armourer (Techmarine Captain? Orlov): I like this guy. Witty for a Techmarine and somehow a Captain to boot? He's more akin to an Iron Warrior warsmith in knowledge and responsibilities and that makes him incredibly useful. This one may be suitable to lead a tertiary cell because of his knowledge and expertise. Perhaps he will need a lot of convincing and manipulation to take the job. Then again, I have a gut feeling that at this point in life, he's more interested in destroying xenos and daemons in new and exciting ways. I've always had pretty good luck recruiting loyalists. Generally when you tell them their job is "same as before, except you get to kill the real enemy" they tend to get on board fast, just like we did. Oh the Cabal. They really had us convinced their way was the only way. And look where that got us. Now we gotta figure out a way to undo the damage we did before the species is kaput. I feel like we came close but my memory is all fuzzy.

The Chaplain (Aster the Blue Wake): One of the most jaded Chaplain's I've ever met. He's right to be so tired of this bullshit. Living through most of 12 MILLENNIA in real time got old quick after the first few hundred years. Anyway this guy is definitely an Asset to be recruited mach fething schnell. Thats old Terran Imperial Fist slang for NOW MOTHERFETHER NOW! Man I miss those guys, even if I had to kill a lot of them. The mission at all costs though eh? Chaps might not be too smart though, because he somehow has me confused for a fething BOOT! We're gonna have to sort that at some point but right now it's good to be underestimated.

The Librarian (Brother Catchibald): He's one of the most powerful psykers to ever live. And he's obviously compromised by Tzeentch so he's going to have to die at some point. I will be certain to convince that Rogue Trader that one of the most powerful psykers in the universe would make a great trophy and an even greater story of triumph. Because feth that, I'm not going up against him.

The Terminator (Sergeant Thyrakos): A grunt who hosed up and forgot to kiss the right pissbaby's shiny ceramite rear end. He's not going to open up to me, or anyone, easily. But if I ever find out why he got sidelined, I can definitely use it.

Me (Cover: Matias Solomon, 200 years active service): This one's so I remember who I need to be incase a Keeper of Secrets feeds on my memories again or some poo poo. I am Matias Solomon. I hail from the underhives of Meridian and was inducted into the Blood Ravens Chapter on my 16th birthday after being swept up in a purge of some of the underhive gangers. Most of my intake did not survive implantation. I was a scout during the Cleansing of Obscurus, a Devastator during the Tartarus Campaign, an Assault Marine during the Koronus Campaign, and I made Tactical in time for the Targa campaign where I fought the Tau. I returned to the 10th Company because I wanted to ensure the next generation of Blood Ravens are trained properly, ensure that no trash makes it to the Fleet, that sorta thing. I turned down a chance to be seconded to the Deathwatch for the opportunity to make Sergeant in the 10th so other Marines may have mixed feelings on this. If anyone asks me more than that and I can't remember, tell them you have to return some dataslates to the Librarium and walk away really fast. It usually buys you time to read up on whatever the feth they were talking about so you can lie about it later.

Human Personnel

The Rogue Trader (Feth your name): If he isn't a Slaanesh worshipper, he soon will be. Incredibly loud and annoying when drunk, but that's par for the course for most humans/post humans. Has his own agenda so cannot be considered a reliable asset. However he can be exploited for short-term use and he's a competent combatant. He will be useful on the ship. Whether he lives to get off of it will be reevaluated as the mission progresses.

The Mercenary (Francisco de Borja): Normally I'd just throttle some human and put the fear of the warp into him, but he's got none. I'm just gonna have to play to his greed and kill him if he takes something that should be mine.

Viva Miriya fucked around with this message at 14:23 on Jul 12, 2018

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