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Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

So nice of orc guy to take him to the skate park.

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Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

So he literally just brought him here to be sad in front of him?

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Beelzebufo posted:



See, this is again Mookie patting himself on the shoulder for help progressive his characters are, despite the fact that Stark's sole characterization is his gayness for Dominic. Also, I understand that DD is a product of a specific time and place, and that Mookie was not writing a subversive gay epic, but again there's of the inherently problematic of having your one gay character remark about how nice it is not to be defined by his homosexuality for once, to the point where it is the nicest thing that anyone has ever said to him. This is why Callan needs gay pride.

You can kind of see how this leads to Mookie having a character literally wearing a "deaf" label. Because god forbid someone doesn't immediately know about his sole defining characteristic that Mookie has assigned him.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

I still can't get over how stupid that paintbrush is. He literally has nothing to dip it in, where is the ink coming from. Like at the very least he could say it's a magic brush, but there's just no sign that he's even thought about this at all.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Mutant Headcrab posted:



Was just flipping the mouths to make them mournfully sad when I realized that Ink Witch's neck looks like someone violently twisted it.

Cool thanks for turning this into Moon Over June.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Mors Rattus posted:

He thinks it’s flirty.

You know, flirtation like “name me, daddy”

"OK your name is Daddy :dadjoke:"

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008


Thought that was a desert at first before I read the text.

Remember all the wild fantasy poo poo he saw while wandering around? But the thing that makes him go "woah" is a really big lake.

Also reminder that this is what he's writing in his diary. This is the second time he's done this.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Rotten Red Rod posted:

The second panel actually looks okay-ish. If the rest of the scenery shots looked like that I wouldn't have any complaints - it's nothing impressive, but it works. But instead this is an art style we've never, ever seen before, so it's pretty jarring, especially after the previous page and its depiction of water.

I'm pretty sure the second panel is just a photoshopped photo. It looks too realistic.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Yeah we're definitely pretty dense :dadjoke:

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

a cartoon duck posted:

invisible ink

This is actually clever and funny, so it's definitely not the case.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Remember, Snout's defining characteristic is curiosity. He's always seeking new knowledge. That's why on an hours long ride, rather than picking the brains of the people who seem to know a lot of things, he chooses to pick his nose and whine about how boring it is.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

It's a good thing he had his diary to remind him of the meaning of these incredibly obscure and complex symbols.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Oh also the renewal spiral is backwards. You'd think that would mean something, but it probably doesn't.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

SubG posted:

Hm, strange runes on the water, I wonder what...oh yeah, those are exactly the ones I already know. Identically literally every one of the exactly three runes I've seen before. Thank god the arcane symbolic language of the dream realm, through which we will unlock the secrets of a centuries-old mystery, is slightly less complicated than a deck of playing cards.

Oh my god it's a "puzzle" from every loving modern video game where they show you the combination and then you enter the combination and you feel good because you got a little dopamine hit for being such a clever boy :keke:

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

super sweet best pal posted:

Never read Pibgorn

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

TheHan posted:

Oh yeah, and it’s funny how much emphasis is put on Serk never being able to hurt Dominic or his family again. Dude’s spent nearly all his screetime being humiliated by the Deegans. They took everything from him, they took his hair. He literally poo poo his pants. He’s not really got the history to warrant such a violent retribution.

Today’s page of the legacy is actually perfect on brand for today’s read through



Kazya’s purity has been TAINTED. Guess Arudak’s got no choice but to move on and let her rot.

jesus christ mookie get over it

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Mookie strikes me as the sort of person who, if he were actually diagnosed with a mental disorder, would be sure to let everyone know about it.

Which is not to say that that's a bad thing, I just don't think he would keep it a secret at all.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Bismuth posted:

whats more unsettling is that gif is reversed!

this motherfucker's trying to do a reverse amigara

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

I hate this comic so much.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008


:five:

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

what the gently caress is ∀N∩˥

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008


He didn't have to draw it, but we all know

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-SClmiso_2Y

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Oh my god she's literally regurgitating the plot for him.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

YF-23 posted:

Except for panels 3 and 4 where the chandak is extremely obviously traced from erotica/pornography.

Oh yeah, that is 100% a woman giving a blowjob.

Congratulations Mookie on reaching the incredible lows set by Day By Day.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Why is being held back even a concern? What is the urgency? There is literally nothing at stake here.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Maxwell Lord posted:

Yeah the problem is Snout has been given absolutely no reason whatsoever to think his friends might be holding him back. There is no actual pressure in this decision because there's no real temptation to go with what the oracle's saying. And of course Snout would never do that because Snout is a nice soft boy etc. You can't make this a decision point when you've established no conflict between "friends" and "the Legacy".

Like okay, in the original Star Wars movies, Luke gets torn between what he sees as his duty to his friends and his duty as a Jedi . He leaves Yoda because he sees his friends in danger. He is told that he must destroy Vader when he wants to save Vader. Those are cases where it seems like he does have to make a hard decision and the choices he makes are important. In the Matrix the Oracle tells Neo that he is not The One, and this instils in him a certain self-doubt because his new friends are relying on him but it helps him to make an important decision.

This is nothing. There is nothing at stake. There is no potential consequence for him being wrong and there is no actual burden he must undertake.

You can't just say two things are conflicting, you have to actually make them conflict.

But also he's known these people for less than a week, all three of them have been abusive to him in some form, and he just spent the entire last chapter not even being aware of their existence.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Remember how this moron spent the entire previous chapter picking his nose for hours rather than interacting with his supposed "friends"? What the hell has Snout ever done to help his friends except maybe hug them once or twice? He is completely and utterly passive in his friendship.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008


Still my favorite thing to come out of this godforsaken comic.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Wow he sure is being there for his friends, isn't he.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Dude can't even be bothered to give Snout an inkwell for his pen lovely paintbrush. Mookie just does not give a poo poo about these kinds of details. Items just vanish and reappear whenever they are needed for the plot. Like Snout doesn't even have his precious diary on him anymore, unless he jammed it in his overalls.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Pulsarcat posted:

The other problem is it would require Mookie to realize that Snout actually is holding everyone back and that simply being "nice" isn't exactly a trait worthy of praise, it's the baseline.

It would mean realizing that being kind and being nice aren't the same thing since it would require Snout actually go out of his way too help out others.
It would mean realizing that being generous and being nice aren't the same thing since it would require Snout to actually sacrifice something more than like five minutes of his time.
It would mean realizing that being gentle and being nice aren't the same thing since it would require Snout to show compassion and humility.

But most of all, it would mean realizing that Snout is an awful protagonist whose only contribution too the group is occasionally stomping his foot when mom and dad fight.

I can't look into Mookies soul or anything, but God drat this comic feels like it's written by someone who listens to his friends complain about their day and then praises himself because he's always there for them.

Also I would like to add, it's hilarious that the Seaweed Seer apparently told the others things that hurt them and made them think hard about themselves and what they want.
But the only thing she told our hero is that he's the goodest of the goodboys and gave him yet another opportunity to prove how nice he is with no effort required on his part.

This entire drat comic has been a string of people giving Snout doting smiles while praising him.

Yeah, this really is the ultimate "nice guy" comic. Not just in the romantic sense, but a guy who does absolutely gently caress all in his interpersonal relationships, but still expects people to praise him for being so "nice". Up to and including two women taking their clothes off and cuddling with him for no reason.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Catching fish *just* for crop fertilizer seems a huge waste of time and energy, doesn't it? Like yeah, fish fertilizer has been a thing for millennia, but usually you eat the fish first and then use the leftover bones and guts as fertilizer. Otherwise you'd want to use manure which is much easier to come by.

There's just zero thought put into this world building. Sure, you can have a race of obligate herbivores, but you have to at least think about how that impacts their history, development, and culture. You can't just throw down a fishing village and say "well I guess they just fish for funsies".

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Also the only plants the orcs eat seem to be greens and roots. Where the hell are all the beans, nuts, and mushrooms, things that actually provide protein? They're mammals so they should be able to digest milk and milk products like yogurt and cheese, right? Or is it literally just lettuce and carrots for them?

Fister Roboto fucked around with this message at 20:24 on Nov 8, 2021

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

To be fair, slightly altering the names of real world things isn't that uncommon in fantasy settings. Like off the top off my head, in His Dark Materials, chocolate is called chocolatl in Lyra's world. But there's obviously some thought put into that, it comes from the original Nahuatl word for chocolate, and it hints and that world's divergent history.

Mavpel is just maple with a V.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Beelzebufo posted:

Right, but these are obligate herbivores, apparently hyper-evolved to root for tubers with their faces if we believe Mookie,

aaaah it's even dumber, why they gently caress would they be bipeds if this was the case

like yeah i've got these cool hands that can use tools, but no lemme just get down on all fours and dig around in the dirt with my loving face

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

RoboRodent posted:

Hell yeah, saber tooth deer.

There is a thing where a lot of plants have evolved "hey you, eat me to complete my life cycle." Plants may have defenses to keep the rest of them from being eaten, but a lot of them will then put out a tempting edible fruit full of seeds to be pooped out somewhere with a convenient supply of fertilizer. Oak forests will create massive crops of acorns, just to play the game of "if we jointly create as many acorns as we can, it's impossible for all of them to be eaten."

There is definitely room for exploring a sapient plant culture that takes a slightly unexpected view of whether or not it's okay for animal races to eat their seeds. There's room to think about motile plant species and how they're constructed, how they behave, to look at plant species that move quickly in the real world and extrapolate. But, you know, Mookie is king of lazy world building and just ignores all this. It's just magic. It works because magic. It exists because I say it does.

Now I'm imagining a race of sentient plant people. They can move around on their own and pollinate themselves, but it's considered "traditional" to have a third party pollinate for them. This leads to many awkward conversations with animal species.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

GreenMetalSun posted:

I don't really get why the 'Your girl loved someone else' thing is loving him up so much.

There was a picture of them together in his house, so presumably they had an actual relationship at some point. If she was with someone before him, surely he would have known about it. If they broke up and she married someone else, he would have known about that too. Was she cheating on him (because if that's the implication, I didn't pick up on it)? Why did the seaweed orc's reveal even matter?

Mookie has extremely bad ideas about relationships. He did an entire story arc in DD where a side character finds out his girlfriend had cheated on him, and he becomes so utterly overwhelmed with manpain that he kills an illusion that he thought was her. The rest of the cast treats him fairly sympathetically.

Given that, I wouldn't be surprised if he also believed that "my ex-girlfriend touched another guy's dick" is something to get sad about.

Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

In the hands of a competent writer, this could be an interesting exploration into whether or not it's moral to bring someone back to life without their consent. Would people in a world where such magic exists have to sign DNR (Do Not Resurrect) clauses?

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Fister Roboto
Feb 21, 2008

Love how all three of them are equally mopey. Everyone processes grief differently, and this would be a great opportunity to show some character development and have them all deal with it differently. But nope, just generic sadness :sadfan:

Oh yeah but not sad enough to write about why they're sad in someone else's journal I guess.

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