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SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


TheHan posted:

If I had to guess, he’s taking his original style, which heavily cribbed from the worst parts of anime, and trying to apply more detail on top. You can still see the framework of the snout but now he’s trying to add a bunch of anatomy on top without studying structure first. Doing a silent story was kind of a bad idea since it relies solely on your art, and this is Dominic Deegan.
The face close-ups are really bad.

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SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


TheHan posted:

At this point does the story really need to be silent? Could you not, say, trim all the fat that's used to convey they aren't talking and then put speech bubbles around the text without losing any information?
Or he could've just skipped all the words:


Like the ship has been in every other page so it's not exactly subtle, but it's an attempt.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Should probably :nws: that.

Also Mookie writes this isn't a one-off, he's trading graphical violence for graphical nudity (even though she's covered in blood), so consider ourselves warned.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Zerilan posted:

He says this while the nudity in the latest comic is only there for the sole reason of having an excuse to write that post.
Just you wait til that exposed dong turns out to be Chekhov's Gun.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Dr Cheeto posted:

she's got alphabet blood and a nice butt, what more do you need to know
He didn't even cover up the butt, that's how important it is.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


His body anatomy keeps getting more prepubescent. No pits, no nips, can you even call that a butt? :colbert:

Tesseraction posted:

Why was he wearing clothes previously if he's apparently comfortable to go walking nude in broad daylight?
He's clearly comfortable enough to have a bed but no blankets.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Rotten Red Rod posted:

* Almost every single art image of the Ink Witch involves her showing off her boobs or butt through the ink and posing like she's in a porn shoot. She is literally just Ink Bayonetta and is 100% a character Mookie created because he's horny. He's been much, MUCH more restrained with her in the comic so far than he has been in any of the Patreon art pieces.
How else can you lure people to your Patreon without exclusive cheesecake? :v:

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


It's gonna be Dominic Deegan isn't it?

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.




This is the perfect reaction to every page of this mess.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


The Legacy of Dominic Deegan: Full of Hate

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Cat Mattress posted:

Looks like it's been used by a lot of pervs with rape fantasies if that's the kind of things it has learned to generate.
It's based on http://chooseyourstory.com/ so pretty much.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


PMush Perfect posted:

It's dick-based cargo culting.
New thread title.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Cat Mattress posted:

They just banged, right? Snout is just leaving a hostel room and there's a do not disturb sign on the door. Snout and Arudak totally banged.

Looks more like Ink Witch and Arudak used to bang.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


TheHan posted:

So from the very first chapter Mookie couldn’t think of anything to throw at his superhero that was more threatening than regular people with guns and spaceships. Between this chapter and the last there has been no elevation of threats.
It's Mass Effect.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Invisible Clergy posted:

Mookie thinks he's a genius in all respects: basic Dunning-Kreuger. His writing, like his art, also gets noticeably worse as time wears on, especially once he's well-set into the groove of mon-thurs: reminder strips of what happened last friday, sat-sun, filler strips, actual content fridays.
He would be a shoe-in for syndicated newspaper comics.

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Miss posted:

Because in the Dominic Deegan world, there are comic books, and those comic books are of the super hero genre, because
So Star Power is part of the Dominic Deegan Cinematic Universe? :thunk:

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


rudecyrus posted:

what the poo poo does "ilka tuk tak" mean
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OnZQF-3UHag

SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


RoboChrist 9000 posted:

Barely anything has happened, and yet what little things have happened have been so disconnected from one-another and poorly conveyed that I still feel like I'm trying to parse a physics textbook after it has been run through Google Translate several times over.

This reads like a dig at the audience if anything. "Oh don't worry if you don't get it, you're not supposed to, only intellectuals like Mookie can, but he still loves you." :jerkbag:

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SupSuper
Apr 8, 2009

At the Heart of the city is an Alien horror, so vile and so powerful that not even death can claim it.


Daxethar and Veth are these two:

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