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Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Why are they hugging. Why is snout just a complete anime now?

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Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

All of those examples are better drawn because they're at least dynamic. Some of them are exaggerated on purpose because that's how a lot of superhero comics work. Also lol at using the Spider-Man cover, because that's actually a female robot designed to look that way.

Except stubby arms Wolverine. But the artist is old and not what he used to be.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Wait, why is Snout wearing different clothes in the new strips?

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

tiny orc is loving hilarious

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Hope nobody walks out the giant opening on the third floor

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Tracing is helpful to help you learn things. But it's a tool to help, not a crutch like how he uses it. You shouldn't have anything in your finished product be traced.

And yes, he needs to do actual life drawing. Like I guess he kind of did this with his softcore porn stuff if he used his wife and himself for reference, but again, it seems more like he traced than reference.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Why does everyone want to gently caress Snout?

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

the best giant library in the world only had books about this one dude

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Spaceballs still rules.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Dalris Othaine posted:

SpaceBalls is still a fun ride (we got the creeps, the bleeps and the sweeps), but it still has all those Dru-ish princess jokes which are pretty fuckin yikes in TYOOL 2021, plus whatever I'm not remembering off the top of my head.

Mel Brooks can get a pass on those jokes, I think.

And sure it's not a classic like Blazing Saddles, but few movies are. It's still got Rick Moranis at his best and so it's always gonna hold up thanks to his performance.

But anyway, yeah, the joke with Sandurz seeing the camera moving in and getting out of the way isn't something that people miss.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

lol so Dominic definitely wrote that rule because he saw the future and has been puppet-mastering Snout all this time

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Why is there a time limit

Why is his torso so long

How long was he actually in there? He had a stack of books but we only saw a few pages. And apparently everyone is okay just hanging around while Snout reads

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

How long had he been drawing? Because he can't even get proportions right.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

I seriously can't get over how bad his proportions are.

Here's the Loomis method, which a ton of people probably study for help in learning to draw. Even as a kid I knew about how many heads tall someone should be. It's basic stuff to drawing figures. Generally when you draw, you draw someone between 7-8 heads tall.



Mookie not only draws his figures between 6-7 heads tall, which leads to all sorts of hosed up proportions and inconsistency.



Mr. Bad Guy on the left has his elbows up to where his nipples are and his hands to where his belly button should be. The figure might look all right if he made his arms the right size, but he's still going to look a little off because he's missing a whole head, so his organs and limbs are all squished together.

Snout is a little over six heads tall, but 4 heads of those are his body. His legs are about 2 heads. Legs should be about the same number of heads as the body. So the body is fine, so long as he was drawing the figure to be 7 1/2 or 8 heads. But as it is now, he's got short stubby little legs.

I mean, I'm no expert and drawing and it's only a hobby of mine that I've recently gotten more serious about. But this is poo poo that any sort of professional artist should know. These are mistakes that someone who has been drawing for a short time makes, not someone who's been drawing for what, almost 20 years?

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Hmm what is the legacy of George Washington? Nobody knows! I better go read all these books about him and his history so I can figure out why he's such a big deal.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Mookie doesn't know how researching unknown topics works.

Like if it's in a book at a library or other people know what happened, it's not unknown.

If you were actually trying to learn something about someone who died 200 years ago, and supposedly nobody knows what happened to them, you'd have to find descendants and work your way back to see if there are any remaining possessions or stories passed down about them. You'd have to find things that they might have physically possessed and that their descendants kept, like photos or letters or family histories.

But since Deegan is such a well known figure, there's nothing to learn. Everything has already been written. There's nothing new to discover that hasn't already been found, and all he's doing is like writing a book report about Deegan rather than discovering anything new.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

He's the goodest softest boi

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

It's funny seeing old ugly Snout next to soft anime boi Snout

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

This comic is gross.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

HazCat posted:



Literally the only significant change is loving up her chest so he draw draw both her breasts.

But remember, this man definitely has a developed understanding of anatomy and is not a hack!

He drew her butt and breasts i in the wrong place, even when tracing

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

He used that traced bed picture AGAIN.

Also gotta make sure we always see his limp dick and balls

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

The shading under her nipples makes it look like she's had breast augmentation surgery.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Did Ink Witch and other guy sleep together?

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Oh my God he actually made a Vietnam memorial ripoff.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

I want you, the person named Snout, to give me a name. What's that? Okay, I am now known as Floppy Tits!

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

this comic is the stupidest loving thing

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

This takes him like 15 minutes to poo poo out. Maybe even less because of reusing the same art over and over again

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Whats everyone else doing in the ship that has no seats while Snout is writing? Sleeping? Standing around all bored? Having a naked cuddle session?

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Many people are saying my hosting is the heart and soul of the show. You won't hear this from the lamestream comics journalists. But more and more people are saying it.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

The other three have just got to be considering throwing him out. Snout loving sucks as a character. He's got the brain of a child and that makes the naked cuddling even more gross.

This isn't endearing or funny. It's stupid.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Mookie wishes he could draw facial expressions like that

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

He's not even good at drawing boobs

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

If it was a dream he'd draw Snout naked because he never misses a chance to draw these dumb characters naked

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Him highlighting the ink witch's nipples is gross. Also that her dress is vacuum sealed to her breasts even though that's not how dresses work.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Twelve by Pies posted:

Snout wagging his tail and smiling while thinking about them naked is very creepy.

Yes I know he's remembering the times they yelled at each other but it's still loving creepy.

He's shipping them. He thinks they're falling in love. It's gross. Especially with how he's gotta picture them naked. And like it was said, Mookie has to get those poorly drawn breasts in because this is a mature comic.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

TheHan posted:

Arudak has so clearly become another Mookie self-insert, but I have my doubts he'll take Ink Mom away from self-insert prime. If anything I'm expecting them to create a totally self-insert focused polycule.

Has he ever been that sex positive? Everything I've seen from him makes it seem like he thinks a woman that sleeps with multiple men should be slut shamed.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Stop drawing naked people. You're no good at it and it just makes the comic gross

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Yeah true. And the same pubic hair.

Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

How can you be that bad at drawing after doing it every day for like 20 years.

Can't draw in profile. At all. It looks like she comes out of the water and now only has one tit.

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Codependent Poster
Oct 20, 2003

Nighthand posted:

I really really really really really hate that first panel and the loving gormless stare snout has while he's strips. Especially since it looks like another trace and I'm really worried he's taking selfies to model himself for the tracing.

He looks so excited to just get naked with this compete stranger. Then we gotta make sure to get a dick and ball shot in there.

And yeah that's probably from using himself as a model. Isn't that what he does with his softcore porn stuff?

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