|
3 DONG HORSE posted:Thank you for the feedback. I needed this kick in the butt to understand my faults. I shall digest and evolve my writing. Writing stories is like pulling ghosts out of your sinuses. You have to keep exorcising them or your head is gonna go all weird. Keep it up!
|
|
|
|
|
| # ? Nov 12, 2025 17:42 |
|
So that's what happened
|
|
|
|
|
I would also like to thank the judges for their feedback. Next time, I will include more corpse desecration
|
|
|
|
3 DONG HORSE posted:
It’s WILD how often this works. Works for novels too, but usually one cuts the first 200-500 words then.
|
|
|
|
Hey, can I get a link to the Discord?
|
|
|
|
Here you go! https://discord.gg/U9htmFcK
|
|
|
|
Also, I think I'm ready for a gangtag whenever someone has time!
|
|
|
|
Innernette Persona posted:Also, I think I'm ready for a gangtag whenever someone has time! Queued it up. Well done!
|
|
|
|
I am gonna rewrite GK Chesterton's Lepanto to be about vegan food. Nothing rhymes with "tofu," sadly
|
|
|
|
Tree Bucket posted:I am gonna rewrite GK Chesterton's Lepanto to be about vegan food. Nothing rhymes with "tofu," sadly He said nothing rhymes with tofu And I replied, can do A bit of a stretch but Ill show you In this wonderous debut Thank you
|
|
|
|
DropTheAnvil posted:He said nothing rhymes with tofu beaucoup
|
|
|
|
Good, good. Taking notes here.
|
|
|
|
I am ready for a gang tag, pretty please! Also, any tips for how I get rid of my default image on my profile?? :-D
|
|
|
|
Bread crumbs posted:I am ready for a gang tag, pretty please! Also, any tips for how I get rid of my default image on my profile?? :-D in this case, by posting in a thread i had bookmarked you can buy a new one with the 'new avatar' link up top ^
|
|
|
|
Thank you! :-)
|
|
|
|
Hi! Could I have a link to the Discord, please?
|
|
|
|
Thank you for the critiques! I feel like I wrote a better story this time around compared to my stressed out and panicked writing from my first go around. I've been doing more reading and writing in my spare time so it feels good to receive criticism that feels positive, haha. Of course I have more work to do but this is a good step I think! May I have the link to the Discord?
|
|
|
|
Hello! Sorry I missed both of these posts until now. Here is a Discord link: https://discord.gg/K9Xhq4f5
|
|
|
|
Thanks!
|
|
|
|
|
| # ? Nov 12, 2025 17:42 |
|
Joined the discord, I hope that's ok ![]() Still not sure if I'm able to battle (myself and my writing demons) in the thunderdome but spending time around other writers would be a good first step I think?
|
|
|






















