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Quiet Feet
Dec 14, 2009

THE HELL IS WITH THIS ASS!?





3 DONG HORSE posted:

Thank you for the feedback. I needed this kick in the butt to understand my faults. I shall digest and evolve my writing.

I shall return!!!!!!

Writing stories is like pulling ghosts out of your sinuses. You have to keep exorcising them or your head is gonna go all weird. Keep it up!

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Data Graham
Dec 28, 2009

📈📊🍪😋

So that's what happened

Volcano
Apr 10, 2008


I would also like to thank the judges for their feedback. Next time, I will include more corpse desecration :hai:

beep-beep car is go
Apr 11, 2005

I can just eyeball this, right?




3 DONG HORSE posted:


I think that actually made the intro much better. Thanks!

It’s WILD how often this works.

Works for novels too, but usually one cuts the first 200-500 words then.

Innernette Persona
Jul 11, 2013
Hey, can I get a link to the Discord?

curlingiron
Dec 15, 2006

b l o o p

Here you go!

https://discord.gg/U9htmFcK

Innernette Persona
Jul 11, 2013
Also, I think I'm ready for a gangtag whenever someone has time!

Sitting Here
Dec 31, 2007

Innernette Persona posted:

Also, I think I'm ready for a gangtag whenever someone has time!

Queued it up. Well done!

Tree Bucket
Apr 1, 2016

R.I.P.idura leucophrys

I am gonna rewrite GK Chesterton's Lepanto to be about vegan food. Nothing rhymes with "tofu," sadly

DropTheAnvil
May 16, 2021

Tree Bucket posted:

I am gonna rewrite GK Chesterton's Lepanto to be about vegan food. Nothing rhymes with "tofu," sadly

He said nothing rhymes with tofu
And I replied, can do
A bit of a stretch but Ill show you
In this wonderous debut
Thank you

signalnoise
Mar 7, 2008

DropTheAnvil posted:

He said nothing rhymes with tofu
And I replied, can do
A bit of a stretch but Ill show you
In this wonderous debut
Thank you

beaucoup

Tree Bucket
Apr 1, 2016

R.I.P.idura leucophrys

Good, good. Taking notes here.

Bread crumbs
Jun 6, 2025


I am ready for a gang tag, pretty please! Also, any tips for how I get rid of my default image on my profile?? :-D

sebmojo
Oct 23, 2010


Legit Cyberpunk









Bread crumbs posted:

I am ready for a gang tag, pretty please! Also, any tips for how I get rid of my default image on my profile?? :-D

in this case, by posting in a thread i had bookmarked

you can buy a new one with the 'new avatar' link up top ^

Bread crumbs
Jun 6, 2025


Thank you! :-)

Tomoe Goonzen
Nov 12, 2016

"Too paranoid for you?"
"Not me, paranoia's the garlic in life's kitchen, right, you can never have too much."
Hi! Could I have a link to the Discord, please?

3 DONG HORSE
May 21, 2008

I'd like to thank Satan for everything he's done for this organization


Thank you for the critiques! I feel like I wrote a better story this time around compared to my stressed out and panicked writing from my first go around. I've been doing more reading and writing in my spare time so it feels good to receive criticism that feels positive, haha. Of course I have more work to do but this is a good step I think!

May I have the link to the Discord?

curlingiron
Dec 15, 2006

b l o o p

Hello! Sorry I missed both of these posts until now. Here is a Discord link: https://discord.gg/K9Xhq4f5

Tomoe Goonzen
Nov 12, 2016

"Too paranoid for you?"
"Not me, paranoia's the garlic in life's kitchen, right, you can never have too much."
Thanks!

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alexandriao
Jul 20, 2019


Joined the discord, I hope that's ok :)

Still not sure if I'm able to battle (myself and my writing demons) in the thunderdome but spending time around other writers would be a good first step I think?

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