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Hey. I'm not looking for any kind of fundraising or anything, just wanted to share this thing I made recently. It's a 2 minute dark comedy/spooky short. I wasn't sure what to do with it after I made it so I thought I would post it on a couple of places I go to online and see if people respond to it. I was really happy with the response it got from people I know, but y'know, they know me, and I want to be able to entertain and intrigue strangers! So here it is: Stuck: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2rxDNnnPg10 It has a theme, and I'm happy to explain what I was trying to say, but I'm curious to see how people take it and not preempt whatever response you might have. I know there are an infinite amount of things to watch online, and I'm not different than any other creative person trying to share my stuff, but I really hope you check it out. And feel like it was a good expenditure of 2 minutes, obviously. Anticipating some tough replies in here but I will be a tough guy and take it. real_slime fucked around with this message at 19:03 on May 5, 2015 |
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hm seems pretty cool op for me to poop on
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May 5, 2015 18:38
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didnt watch
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May 5, 2015 18:39
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Cool stuff op.
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May 5, 2015 18:39
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restroomreview.com
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May 5, 2015 18:40
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there are monsters
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May 5, 2015 18:42
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goongradulations
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May 5, 2015 18:43
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take it take it, tough guy
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May 5, 2015 18:44
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i'm takin it
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May 5, 2015 18:47
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If he's stuck in the wall why is he talking through the ceiling that's hella dumb you stupid op
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May 5, 2015 18:47
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should called it suck, imo
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May 5, 2015 18:47
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on the same budget, kevin smith made clerks and you made stuck.
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May 5, 2015 18:48
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Grem posted:If he's stuck in the wall why is he talking through the ceiling that's hella dumb you stupid op the vents allow him to be heard because they go through the walls. it would be less plausible to have his voice come through solid wall. in the original script he was heard through a seashell, but focus testers had a huge problem with that.
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May 5, 2015 18:49
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gently caress I hate british accents so much
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May 5, 2015 18:49
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remake and call it cuck and make a 4 1/2 hour long movie about you being a sad sack of poo poo
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May 5, 2015 18:50
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haunted glade plug-in
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May 5, 2015 18:51
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it would have been better if he used the towel to wipe the dust off the vent instead the only other thing that could be improved is the sound of the trapped man's voice, it sounds like he's in a large empty space when he should sound muffled instead
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May 5, 2015 18:55
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Novo posted:it would have been better if he used the towel to wipe the dust off the vent instead haha, yeah i see your points, but for those two things: i liked the gross dust on the vent. nobody's cleaned that thing for a while. and for the reverb, i wanted to imply he wasn't exactly in the walls at all. maybe he's somewhere else.
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May 5, 2015 18:57
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great post, op, cause you made something i enjoyed watching
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May 5, 2015 18:58
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does it touch on any race-realism issues? Not watching if not
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May 5, 2015 18:59
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this didnt make sense without sound. downvoting
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May 5, 2015 18:59
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Vin BioEthanol posted:does it touch on any race-realism issues? Not watching if not yes, its meditation on the apathy of the scots. The cloth he uses represents heroin.
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May 5, 2015 19:02
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Not too bad OP, could possibly be used as a Radiohead video
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May 5, 2015 19:03
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youre supposed to put little streamers on the vent so that people know its a vent and not an intercom
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May 5, 2015 19:03
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I'm not going to watch your movie
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May 5, 2015 19:03
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I feel it's safe to assume that your filmmaking is very poor
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May 5, 2015 19:04
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THE DOG HOUSE posted:this didnt make sense without sound. downvoting and you actually did. huh.
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May 5, 2015 19:04
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i liked it, op
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May 5, 2015 19:04
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Nation posted:restroomreview.com yeah im preparing to sue the op for stealing my intelectial property
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May 5, 2015 19:11
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great job op your film career is certainly going places.................................................................................................................................................................................the toilet for instance haha
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May 5, 2015 19:13
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HomeStuck
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May 5, 2015 19:15
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a starwar betamax posted:yeah im preparing to sue the op for stealing my intelectial property maybe you could franchise it out, think about it this could be the door to the european market
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May 5, 2015 19:15
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May 5, 2015 19:18
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the hell is this crap
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May 5, 2015 19:22
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HomeStuck
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May 5, 2015 19:23
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I want to say I think the story is about silencing all the little voices in one's head, the apathy of people, or a quick absurd story. The lighting was really cool, and the dust around the vent was cool too.
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May 5, 2015 19:23
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gnarlyhotep posted:the hell is this crap something reeeeeeeeeally stupid, Gnarls
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May 5, 2015 19:24
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howd the guy get into the wall, i dont get it
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May 5, 2015 19:25
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i liked it OP felt a lil rough round the edges (particularly: a couple camera angles, and also the audio mixing) but otherwise good jerb
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May 5, 2015 19:26
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This is just a metaphor for him being a woman stuck in a mans body.
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