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CelticPredator
Oct 11, 2013
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I don't have a steady hand. My hand moves like seismic monitor.

I actually had no idea about that shift thing. Gonna try it!

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Ramos
Jul 3, 2012


Unsteady hands is just something everyone has until they put out about a hundred thousand drawings and actually get good at the craft.

e X
Feb 23, 2013

cool but crude

Guy A. Person posted:

"In media res" is a concept as old as storytelling and just because all-star writers Dan Harmon and Justin Roiland don't like it doesn't mean it's suddenly hacky.

Regardless if you like it or not, In media res has nothing to do with flashbacks.

sticklefifer
Nov 11, 2003

by VideoGames

Space Cadet Omoly posted:

My favorite cliched line from the screen play was "Hot, but she doesn't know it".

:agreed: That was so dead-on, it had to be Harmon getting some things off his chest.

Krinkle posted:

"this, is not her day" how do you film that? What does that mean in what is supposed to describe a film? Is she going to blow her bangs back and roll her eyes and I'm supposed to read "wow, not my day" in her expression?

I can't tell what is part of a bad script like what that guy did or what all scripts do and it's up to the director to figure out the details.

"This is not her day" is a character note and would be an actor's choice in how to portray it. It's really up to the director to tell them how, but the actor can put their own spin on it.

I think the point of all the criticisms in the episode were that everyone thinks they can use these techniques to good effect, but few really do. Just like anything, a talented writer can use flashbacks or voiceover or in medias res really well, but most suck at it.

Philip Rivers
Mar 15, 2010

Ramos posted:

Unsteady hands is just something everyone has until they put out about a hundred thousand drawings and actually get good at the craft.

I actually have shaky hands moreso than the average person, like to the degree where I'd sometimes feel uncomfortable doing chemistry labs because I was afraid I'd spill something on myself.

Crop_Top_9000
Jun 20, 2014

CelticPredator posted:

My hand moves like seismic monitor.

The real advice is to use your whole arm and draw a shitload for practice, but if you want to "cheat" and let software help you out you can get LazyNezumi to stabilize your inputs.

Irish Joe
Jul 23, 2007

by Lowtax

Guy A. Person posted:

"In media res" is a concept as old as storytelling and just because all-star writers Dan Harmon and Justin Roiland don't like it doesn't mean it's suddenly hacky.

I'm pissed because I've been bitching about it for years, and now, if I say anything, I'll have idiots jumping down my throat for "stealing" it from R&M.

An action scene from the climax tacked on to the beginning of a film isn't an excuse to have an hour of boring exposition. gently caress!

Guy A. Person
May 23, 2003

e X posted:

Regardless if you like it or not, In media res has nothing to do with flashbacks.

I know, it has to do with starting your story at a key point of interest. It's the exact thing Morty complains about : "I think you should start at the beginning, not where it gets interesting." The bad screenwriter man combines that technique with a flashfoward to try and force interest.

The Cheshire Cat
Jun 10, 2008

Fun Shoe

Guy A. Person posted:

I know, it has to do with starting your story at a key point of interest. It's the exact thing Morty complains about : "I think you should start at the beginning, not where it gets interesting." The bad screenwriter man combines that technique with a flashfoward to try and force interest.

The thing is there's two different things - In Medias Res just means starting the story right in the middle of the action - you can make a story that's presented in chronological order with an in medias res opening - Saving Private Ryan begins with a huge, confusing, intense battle scene but continues on from that point rather than flashing back to the leadup, because it's the consequences of that battle that kick off the story rather than the battle being the climax.

The "Three weeks earlier" thing is combining an in medias res opening with a big flashback - basically starting at the climax and rewinding, rather than working up to the climax organically.

Veryslightlymad
Jun 3, 2007

I fight with
my brain
and with an
underlying
hatred of the
Erebonian
Noble Faction
In media res is good and proper storytelling.

In media res with flashbacks is a crime against humanity.

You sometimes want to start a story in the middle so it's tense (or some other feeling) wire-to-wire. You cut out the beginning because the beginning doesn't fit the mood you want for the piece. You have to lovingly craft the relevant backstory by events that take place during the remainder of the story.

The whole POINT of starting in the middle is so you don't include the boring beginning. Starting in the middle then going BACK to the beginning is bad. Full stop.

Rexides
Jul 25, 2011

Veryslightlymad posted:

You sometimes want to start a story in the middle so it's tense (or some other feeling) wire-to-wire. You cut out the beginning because the beginning doesn't fit the mood you want for the piece. You have to lovingly craft the relevant backstory by events that take place during the remainder of the story.

I think that Mad Max: Fury Road is a good example of this. It knows that it's elements are so simplistic (evil warlord, girls making their escape) that the audience can be trusted to put two and two together so it jumps straight to where it matters instead of putting us through the very obvious backstory.

Inspector Gesicht
Oct 26, 2012

500 Zeus a body.


Gravity didn't feel the need to tell us anything more than "Normal day at space station, BOOM. asteroids."

What filmmakers would be greatly improved if they cut out 30 minutes of bullshit? Anything by Judd Apatow. No comedy should be longer than 90 minutes.

PostNouveau
Sep 3, 2011

VY till I die
Grimey Drawer
Rick's secret superpower showed up again this episode. Arthricia was immediately in step with him when they started dancing in the blood.

Space Cadet Omoly
Jan 15, 2014

~Groovy~


PostNouveau posted:

Rick's secret superpower showed up again this episode. Arthricia was immediately in step with him when they started dancing in the blood.

Rick is originally from a dimension where everyone acts like they're in a bollywood musical at all times.

Mushroom Zingdom
Jan 28, 2007
Nap Ghost
The DeviantArt Rick and Morty fanart contest just ended:

http://madizzlee.deviantart.com/journal/Rick-and-Morty-Contest-Winners-563067266

Some of the semi-finalists are really good too, in particular the mindbending recursive-meatball one:

http://madizzlee.deviantart.com/journal/Rick-and-Morty-Contest-Semi-Finalists-560893941

qntm
Jun 17, 2009
Those are all really great.

hoobajoo
Jun 2, 2004

Jerry's apron in the third place art made me really happy. He totally has a box of Hungry for Apples merchandise stashed somewhere.

Excelzior
Jun 24, 2013

hoobajoo posted:

Jerry's apron in the third place art made me really happy. He totally has a box of Hungry for Apples merchandise stashed somewhere.

*snaps finger, points* Yes!

Segmentation Fault
Jun 7, 2012

Excelzior posted:

*snaps finger, points* Yes!

*pumps right arm* My man!

Sockser
Jun 28, 2007

This world only remembers the results!




One of my favorite details in the series was the secret back room in the Jerry daycare had "HUNGRY FOR APPLES" grafitti'd on the wall

Maybe blood? I forget.

Grizzlegrax
Mar 21, 2013

:ghost: Bustin' Makes Me :ghost:
:ghost: Feel Good
:ghost:

Segmentation Fault posted:

*pumps right arm* My man!

CelticPredator
Oct 11, 2013
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I did one. I kinda rushed this one because I legit got bored of drawing Rick and Morty the same way and so I scrapped it and went with a different style. It was a fun experiment.



But tbh, I wish I just narrowed it down to just this.



I'm most proud of the puss filled fat alien.

Space Cadet Omoly
Jan 15, 2014

~Groovy~


Is the purple alien in the first one really a guy in an alien suit or is it a real alien who just happens to look like a guy wearing an alien suit?

CelticPredator
Oct 11, 2013
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The first purple Alien is a real purple Alien, the second is an Alien wearing a suit of the owner of the Casino.

Eifert Posting
Apr 1, 2007

Most of the time he catches it every time.
Grimey Drawer
How did recursive meatball not win something? Way better than the 2nd and 3rd.

Sankara
Jul 18, 2008


Eifert Posting posted:

How did recursive meatball not win something? Way better than the 2nd and 3rd.

I agree.

MariusLecter
Sep 5, 2009

NI MUERTE NI MIEDO

Somebody fucked around with this message at 21:06 on Oct 4, 2015

Jonas Albrecht
Jun 7, 2012


After the car got its own personfication fanart, I'm genuinely surpised we're not neck deep in Arthricia fanart.

Segmentation Fault
Jun 7, 2012
You really don't need to post this.

Jonas Albrecht posted:

After the car got its own personfication fanart, I'm genuinely surpised we're not neck deep in Arthricia fanart.
I'd go looking but I'm too worried I'll find exactly what I'd be looking for.

Arist
Feb 13, 2012

who, me?


Segmentation Fault posted:

You really don't need to post this.

Actually, he does.

Excelzior
Jun 24, 2013

:cripes: oh man here we go again

curse of flubber
Mar 12, 2007
I CAN'T HELP BUT DERAIL THREADS WITH MY VERY PRESENCE

I ALSO HAVE A CLOUD OF DEDICATED IDIOTS FOLLOWING ME SHITTING UP EVERY THREAD I POST IN

IGNORE ME AND ANY DINOSAUR THAT FIGHTS WITH ME BECAUSE WE JUST CAN'T SHUT UP

Mushroom Zingdom posted:

The DeviantArt Rick and Morty fanart contest just ended:

http://madizzlee.deviantart.com/journal/Rick-and-Morty-Contest-Winners-563067266

Some of the semi-finalists are really good too, in particular the mindbending recursive-meatball one:

http://madizzlee.deviantart.com/journal/Rick-and-Morty-Contest-Semi-Finalists-560893941

I love all the entries but I was a bit disappointed I didn't see this one in the finalists.

Mushroom Zingdom
Jan 28, 2007
Nap Ghost
Also reminded me of this:

CelticPredator
Oct 11, 2013
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Megaspel posted:

I love all the entries but I was a bit disappointed I didn't see this one in the finalists.

What the gently caress. DA sucks rear end. This is amazing.

Say Nothing
Mar 5, 2013

by FactsAreUseless

Jonas Albrecht posted:

After the car got its own personfication fanart, I'm genuinely surpised we're not neck deep in Arthricia fanart.

I'm surprised that Arthricia is apparently a real name.

Ror
Oct 21, 2010

😸Everything's 🗞️ purrfect!💯🤟


CelticPredator posted:

What the gently caress. DA sucks rear end. This is amazing.

DA just hosted it, the winners were supposed to be picked by Roiland. I thought the top 3 were a little strange myself, but I imagine certain trippy images just resonate with his own weird mind more than others.

Jonas Albrecht
Jun 7, 2012


Segmentation Fault posted:

You really don't need to post this.

I'd go looking but I'm too worried I'll find exactly what I'd be looking for.

My curiosity got the better of me.

http://mortyandrick.tumblr.com/post/130413594015/radianq-arthricia

That'a currently all there is. It's fine.

CelticPredator
Oct 11, 2013
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Ror posted:

DA just hosted it, the winners were supposed to be picked by Roiland. I thought the top 3 were a little strange myself, but I imagine certain trippy images just resonate with his own weird mind more than others.

According to Roiland, it was the opposite. DA picked the ones Roiland should vote on, rather than him doing it himself. Which I understand, but if that didn't get into the running at all....

Ror
Oct 21, 2010

😸Everything's 🗞️ purrfect!💯🤟


CelticPredator posted:

According to Roiland, it was the opposite. DA picked the ones Roiland should vote on, rather than him doing it himself. Which I understand, but if that didn't get into the running at all....

That's retarded.

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Applewhite
Aug 16, 2014

by vyelkin
Nap Ghost

Ror posted:

That's retarded.

Umm, I dunno if you're supposed to say that.

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