Dick Burglar posted:I was more thinking chunky thighs rubbing together. I wonder if Lani actually contacted all these bands and celebrities to ask if they wanted to be in her book. Also your friendly reminder that Carrot Top is 52 years old this year.
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Do you think she plans any of this or is it pure Stephen King style stream of consciousness plotting
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 17:13 |
Mel Mudkiper posted:Do you think she plans any of this or is it pure Stephen King style stream of consciousness plotting Her interview said she started with a screenplay that ballooned to a novel and it has multiple glaring typos. I'm pretty sure this is a first draft without an editor.
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 17:24 |
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I wondering if later she'll run into Penn & Teller, and reveal that Teller can actually talk, but only talks to her!
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 17:48 |
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Dick Burglar posted:Of note: according to her modeling page, Lani is in fact 5'9. Ahh... I was wondering if that was the case. Davros1 posted:I wondering if later she'll run into Penn & Teller, and reveal that Teller can actually talk, but only talks to her! I vote for a Siegfried and Roy cameo where she convinces them to come out of retirement.
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 17:55 |
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Wait lani has a modelling page
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 17:57 |
I decided to skim through to the ending out of frustration at not knowing even basic stuff. The book continues to get dumber as it goes on, and features an extended sequence where Zade does literally nothing and we're in a quasi-third person for an incredibly long time.
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 18:04 |
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"Wow, Carrot, it's so great to see you again!" "Please, all my friends call me Scott. Scott Top." drat, the man was born in 1965. He's already probably graying.
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 18:06 |
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Rough Lobster posted:"Wow, Carrot, it's so great to see you again!" The latest teen heart throb!
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 18:08 |
I'm honestly intrigued to see how deep the rabbit hole goes. Before: A woman makes a lovely novel to try and be a movie star. Now: Jackson Rathbone's former manager writes a story about how she's a witch and he's in love with her. Carrot Top and Wayne Newton are her friends.
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# ? Aug 31, 2017 18:17 |
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chitoryu12 posted:Her interview said she started with a screenplay that ballooned to a novel and it has multiple glaring typos. I'm pretty sure this is a first draft without an editor. Which is funny because in that same interview she says she sucks at grammar "but that's what editors are for, right?" Mel Mudkiper posted:Wait lani has a modelling page I linked it earlier, or you can just google her name and Model Mayhem. It used to be on the first page of Google results for her name, but now there are a zillion stories about the NYT Bestsellers list scam. The motorcycle picture is truly portfolio material.
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# ? Sep 1, 2017 01:43 |
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Dick Burglar posted:
The motorcycle and the wedding dress pictures definitely don't belong in a portfolio. The rest aren't half bad, I wonder how much touch-up was done to them.
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Mel Mudkiper posted:B. The author lives in a terrifying approximation of reality in which the fundamental laws that govern the fragile structure of sanity are no more So, 2017?
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PJOmega posted:The motorcycle and the wedding dress pictures definitely don't belong in a portfolio. The rest aren't half bad, I wonder how much touch-up was done to them. Model Mayhem actually bans those sort of pictures. Your portfolio is supposed to be nothing BUT modeling shots.
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# ? Sep 1, 2017 03:37 |
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What a coincidence for me to run into my two good friends Michael Buble and Norm Macdonald in this humble Krogers!
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# ? Sep 1, 2017 04:06 |
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This reads a lot like a modern day Eye of Argon. Of course the kid who wrote Eye of Argon had obviously just read a couple of Conan the Barbarian stories and really wanted to imitate Robert E. Howard, and this woman seems to just be imitating Stephenie Meyer because she thinks it will make her rich and famous.
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https://twitter.com/giadio_amicitia/status/903526393190932480
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# ? Sep 1, 2017 18:39 |
I'm making the somewhat unusual decision to split this chapter into two updates. Lani's poor writing rears its head once more and she ends up making this chapter last far too long, and it flows much better with its latter half being combined with the upcoming chapter, so that's what I'm going to do.quote:I stood outside the bar, nervous. I had so many things to think about that my head was starting to hurt. I probably should have worried more about the girl in the parking garage but I just wasn’t ready to deal with her yet. Tad, Mac, and Riley are at the bar talking, so Lani heads up to them to get some "Mac time" while Jackson is busy. She then makes the bizarre decision to pretend not to notice them and ask the bartender for a drink, for reasons I can't quite figure out. Her plan to spend time with Mac fails as Jackson and Tim show up and start chatting with her instead. They introduce her to Dave, one of their bandmates. Because this is literally the Plain White T's with the lead singer replaced by an alternate universe Jackson Rathbone, these are Tim Lopez and Dave Tirio. Jackson kisses Zade lightly on the lips. She describes it as the kind of kiss that friends give, which makes me wonder what the hell kind of friends Lani Sarem has. He then returns to get ready for their set while Mac, Tad, Cam, and Riley spot her and move in. Riley mentions with astonishment that the Plain White T's are pretty popular in Vegas and might get a record deal soon! A tall, overweight man pushes his way onto the stage to announce the Plain White T's coming on, and the crowd goes wild shoving toward them and screaming in excitement. quote:I had to yell over the crowd pretty loudly to be heard at all. “Wow, it’s like they’re *NSYNC and they got the band back together or something!” I shouted—to Riley, mainly, though I’m sure Mac, Cam, and Tad heard me too. I knew for sure Mac had heard, since I saw that he chuckled at my comment. Thanks for letting us know that "The T's" are also "The Plain White T's". Never would have guessed if you didn't tell me. The band goes on, with Zade name dropping several of their songs like "Stay", which she describes as sassy. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sPt8pxo_qYc The rest of the conversation is kinda boring and pointless. Mac kinda sorta admits that last night's kiss in the rain mainly happened because Jackson was hitting on her and he got jealous. quote:Mac and I didn’t talk about the situation any more for the remainder of the night. I think Mac could feel that he was going to just have to chill and see what happened. He moved away from me and started a conversation with Tad, Pete, Zeb, and Cam about work. Riley had walked away, and was apparently pounding back drinks like they were water. I let myself have some alone time to focus on everything going on in my head. You're so vain you probably think this song is about you. Jackson comes down after they finish and chats up Zade, though he does notice that she's eyeing Mac across the room in the middle of their conversation. Riley ends up wasted to the point where his eyes are bloodshot and he's falling over, so they drag him out to take him home. Cam hitches a ride with Zeb, and nothing else important happens. quote:It was nearly four in the morning when I finally made it home. I’d stayed at the bar with Jackson for a while after everyone else had left, and found that it was much easier to relax around him once Mac was gone. I'll end it here, since the chapter goes on for basically the same length. Next time, we learn just how much Lani Sarem knows about tarot! It's not a lot.
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Rough Lobster posted:"Wow, Carrot, it's so great to see you again!" Oh no, he dyes it, and by it I mean his entire body. He looks like some kind of donald trump tinted goblin
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A good look in my opinion.
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chitoryu12 posted:names UGH the names. Tim Tom Tad "Trig" Mike Mac Zade Zeb and of course who can forget Cam. She's going to end up with Jackson because he's the only one in the drat book with more than one syllable.
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Rough Lobster posted:UGH the names. Don't forget Lil!
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# ? Sep 2, 2017 22:07 |
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Rough Lobster posted:UGH the names. She names her characters like its a comic book fight scene
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Rough Lobster posted:UGH the names. Are these people all members of the Palin family?
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 08:23 |
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It's fitting that the Plain White T's ended up in this creeper fanfiction considering "Hey There Delilah" was written to creep on an uninterested chick in a long term relationship.
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 09:01 |
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I wonder whether the author is aware that most of the attempts to start new YA adaptation movie franchises have tanked in the last five years? (Rhetorical question; I realise she probably isn't.) Harry Potter and Twilight ended in 2011 and 2012 respectively and they did pretty well. Hunger Games debuted in 2012 and ended in 2015, but it ended up not doing as well as had been hoped for. In the interim, His Dark Materials was tried and failed, Beautiful Creatures was tried and failed, Mortal Instruments was tried and failed, Ender's Game was tried and failed, Vampire Academy was tried and failed, Divergent was successful for a while but petered out in the end, Chronicles of Narnia started off well but I have no idea what's going on with it now, and there's probably a bunch of other examples I've forgotten about. Point is that even if this novel was actually good and even if it sold on its own merits, then surely its chances of getting optioned by a production company would be potentially slim at this point? I'm pretty sure that the pre-existing "YA audience" mainly goes in for superhero movies and Star Wars and the like now.
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I'm not sure how well The Maze Runner is doing as a film adaptation of a YA series but I got a bizarre phonecall from my 56 year old father who usually only watches WW2 movies last year to tell me that the first two movies were really good and he was excited for the third in the series so they must be doing something right.
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 18:35 |
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I've just started glazing over the actual book portions of this thread and I'm only reading the reactions.
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 18:51 |
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Arcsquad12 posted:I've just started glazing over the actual book portions of this thread and I'm only reading the reactions. I started doing that with update one.
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 18:53 |
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tbh I do that with every one of these threads
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Baron Corbyn posted:I'm not sure how well The Maze Runner is doing as a film adaptation of a YA series but I got a bizarre phonecall from my 56 year old father who usually only watches WW2 movies last year to tell me that the first two movies were really good and he was excited for the third in the series so they must be doing something right. Oh, yeah, my dad likes those. I forgot about them. I suppose there's The 100 as well but it's on TV, and the TV show is almost completely different from the books it's adapting.
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Wheat Loaf posted:I wonder whether the author is aware that most of the attempts to start new YA adaptation movie franchises have tanked in the last five years? (Rhetorical question; I realise she probably isn't.) Harry Potter and Twilight ended in 2011 and 2012 respectively and they did pretty well. Hunger Games debuted in 2012 and ended in 2015, but it ended up not doing as well as had been hoped for. I was so disappointed in the Golden Compass movie attempt. The giant fuckoff armored bear was the best part of the movie, but it did not do the books justice and I really think a lot of fantasy series would be better adapted as full CGI/animation instead of trying to do them live action.
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Mel Mudkiper posted:She names her characters like its a comic book fight scene Holy loving lol batman! Not to empty quote, but had the author emphasized the homoerotic potential of the two male members in the love triangle, she could have tried to utilize the hosed up fandom girls who fetishizing gay male relationships. In the least the series may have had more staying power. Though this shindig with jacking up the best sellers list meant it was always doomed in some way. Still, if that 'Snape's Wife' person was any indication, someone out there would have obsessed over Trig like he was a real live celebrity. Side note: never read the books, but I did enjoy those Narnia movies and wish there were more. At least Lev Grossman's series is filling that void.
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TheKennedys posted:I was so disappointed in the Golden Compass movie attempt. The giant fuckoff armored bear was the best part of the movie, but it did not do the books justice and I really think a lot of fantasy series would be better adapted as full CGI/animation instead of trying to do them live action.
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 19:25 |
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Oh, and I forgot Eragon as well.
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 19:43 |
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TheKennedys posted:I was so disappointed in the Golden Compass movie attempt. The giant fuckoff armored bear was the best part of the movie, but it did not do the books justice and I really think a lot of fantasy series would be better adapted as full CGI/animation instead of trying to do them live action. It was a horrible movie and a horrible shame since the casting was actually really good. The kid who did Lyra was fine but Nicole Kidman could have been so good as Mrs Coulter, and Sam Elliott as Lee Scoresby was inspired. McKellan as Iorek was clearly not that into it which is sad because he could've been perfect. And Eva Green was a lovely Serafina. Daniel Craig didn't work for me as Asriel though. It just all went so wrong. The bear fight was awesome though. e: like she is radiant, but the script. THE SCRIPT. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_rE45VHtSzw eating only apples fucked around with this message at 21:30 on Sep 3, 2017 |
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Isnt the Golden Compass a three novel gently caress you to CS Lewis
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# ? Sep 3, 2017 21:30 |
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Mel Mudkiper posted:Isnt the Golden Compass a three novel gently caress you to CS Lewis His Dark Materials, but yeah. God is a withered useless old man that the main characters kill just by interacting with him. I'm going to read that series again even though The Amber Spyglass was Pullman wittering on about religion for 500 pages with 200 pages of plot
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eating only apples posted:I'm going to read that series again even though The Amber Spyglass was Pullman wittering on about religion for 500 pages with 200 pages of plot I think I figured out why the movies didn't work out
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