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Chapter 13 – Arrestquote:
Stupid Captain Vicks! His sheer carelessness in turning up the volume on his phone (see Chapter 12) has undermined Detective Black’s masterful investigation by leaking information to the treacherous Clare. I hope that this is just a minor set-back and that justice prevails in the end. quote:
Remember what I said about Miranda Leek being consistent about narrating “Rodney” from the first-person perspective and “Railrunner” from the third-person perspective? I take that all back. quote:
“His eyes turned into that of which they were”. quote:
Railrunner is an rear end in a top hat. quote:
Okay, I guess it makes sense to have “Rodney” be written from the third-person perspective and “Railrunner” be written from the first-person perspective, if she’s trying to convey that “Railrunner” has become the “true self”. quote:
“If you can’t accept me, I can’t accept you!” works if the person saying it has been persecuted for being of a different race / class / etc from the majority, but not if he has already gone on a massive murder-rampage without provocation. quote:
Add “concussion beam” to the ever-growing list of Railrunner’s powers. Also, since when did Thunderbark mention that Railrunner had such a power? quote:
Look at how tremendously courageous these policemen are. They face an evil monster that is immune to bullets and fires beams, but still they stand in the front-line, defending the innocent from that brute’s rampages. quote:
“Powering up from proximity to an amusement park” will never, ever stop being the stupidest superpower. quote:
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gently caress yeah Detective Black! quote:
“New species” implies that there are existing known species of were-creatures. Detective Black is so badass that he has experience dealing with the realm of the supernatural and paranatural. quote:
Big words coming from someone with a million unearned superpowers who nevertheless allowed himself to be captured by a net. quote:
Why is Detective Black referring to Railrunner as “the red”? The only one who did so was Thunderbark. I hope this doesn’t mean Detective Black is part of the grand were-roller-coaster conspiracy. quote:
“Bright red” =/= “Brilliant red”. quote:
I hope you rot in jail forever, you filthy murderer. JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 18:56 on Apr 17, 2013 |
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What the hell is a "secret light"?
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The weirdest thing about this book is that Rodney is quite clearly the villian. I mean, he goes on rampages and feels no guilt or remorse for murdering innocents or police officers. Yet somehow Miranda Leek sees him as the hero because ???
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It's funny how Miranda is trying to make Detective Black the bad guy and yet the audience completely sympathizes with him. I mean the electric shock might seem like a dick thing to do, but he's dealing with a rampaging, bulletproof mass murderer. And the over the top "DISSECT HIM" order. Also a dick move but also, you know, Railrunner. quote:“Are you some kind of lycanthrope? A new species of were-folk, Rodney?” Yes goddamnit Detective Black. I previously imagined him as Detective Tyrell Badd, but now I'm imagining him as Detective Tyrell Badd who does monster capture jobs for the Hellsing organization. Note the plural form of "jobs". He's not one of the mooks who gets slaughtered every episode. His weapon of choice is a machete (which he obviously keeps on him just in case poo poo like this goes down) and his capture tool is this electro-net. I only mention this because it is COMPLETELY loving AWESOME quote:“You are the sorriest excuse for a cop I’ve ever witnessed.” Railrunner growled. Shut the gently caress up Rodney. Detective Black has so far proven to be smarter than all the rest of you chucklefucks combined.
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JosephWongKS posted:
Oh my God, it's been a rough few days (Greater Boston resident) and I have to thank you for this. I am hyperventilating over here! And the "concussion beam" (totally different from dragon-breath I guess). This whole recap is a thing of beauty. E: my dad posted:So, despite going against impossible odds, detective Black comes up with an amazing plan that results in the capture of the magical Werecoastermcdickdragonmarysueeequalsmcsquare? And he did stuff like this before? Badass. I'd missed that before. Detective Black seems to know a lot about were-whatevers. Now unless he is ALSO from Amusement Park Between, I want to know more about what he's been up to before this rollercoaster of hate adventure began... Rahonavis fucked around with this message at 20:11 on Apr 17, 2013 |
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So, despite going against impossible odds, detective Black comes up with an amazing plan that results in the capture of the magical Werecoastermcdickdragonmarysueeequalsmcsquare? And he did stuff like this before? Badass.Railrunner posted:Boy I’m tired of you people being arrogant! If you can’t accept me, I can’t accept you! my dad fucked around with this message at 19:12 on Apr 17, 2013 |
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So, why is Railrunner a beast when he's changing? Wasn't he supposed to be able to get the beast under control after midnight of the night of the next fullest moon? My guess is that it's a justification for the bite. Because with the bite, and the "accidental" concussion beam, this whole chapter, the sane Railrunner never directly attacked the police. There's also this paragraph: "Remaining men came out of hiding. They began to fire once more. I charged and flipped over their cruisers, flattening some of the unfortunate." Which still makes it look accidental if those "unfortunates" were police officers. This is still very contrived justification for that whole thing. Railrunner has willingly put others in the situation where they would face his were-roller coaster side, for instance the thugs from Chapter 11 and with the police this chapter. He doesn't care to keep the beast under control, so him and the beast are one. And yes, this is the first time the reader gets to hear about the concussion beam. Detective Black is still kicking rear end
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quote:but the it [sic] was made out of some foreign material. Detective Black's knife must have been made with this foreign material too.
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SSNeoman posted:And the over the top "DISSECT HIM" order. Also a dick move but also, you know, Railrunner. He didn't even say to dissect him, just to bring coaster engineers in to analyze him and run some tests. He's basically bringing in a were-roller-coaster medical team to examine their captive. I'm kind of curious where the author intends to go with Detective Black; on one hand the narrator pointed out that he thinks he's completely justified in bringing Rodney to justice (leaving aside that, objectively, he is), but on the other the narrator used the adjective "malicious." Black may wind up getting killed off at something resembling a climax, but even if he somehow gets "converted" to Railrunner's side, the Black we know and love may end up just as dead to us as if his torso were shredded apart. Nyaa posted:Ohhh, foreign material... How wonderful to have you because other metals just easily get rip apart by railrunner's claw. Apparently, being an all-American designed and built attraction, Railrunner's key weakness is from materials manufactured in China, Mexico, or other foreign nations. I guess that explains why bullets bounce right off while knives can slip right in.
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Bobbin Threadbare posted:Apparently, being an all-American designed and built attraction, Railrunner's key weakness is from materials manufactured in China, Mexico, or other foreign nations. I guess that explains why bullets bounce right off while knives can slip right in. Extra stuff! Where I shed some more light into what's going on without spoilers. After that picture of ultrasound Railrunner, we have reasonable doubt that this could be the case. However! It is very relevant to what's going on in the background. Railrunner's bio states that he came to be in 1972. Because if there is one thing Miranda researches, it is roller coasters. Because what's really thought of as the second golden age of roller coasters was the opening of Kings Island in 1972, which featured the roller coaster Racer, which was doing things that hadn't been done before with roller coasters. However, one is coincidence. So let me tell you about number two. Miranda Leek posted:This is Firetrack, a red roller coaster that lived 70 years before Railrunner, and is considered the greatest red (besides Railrunner) of all time. He was stern and persistent - an ideal red. Firetrack was the second red coaster to be born in Between(1905) and lived till he was murdered unexpectedly in 1932 - leaving behind a legacy that all reds after him have tried to match. This isn't really spoilers, except what's in the spoiler tags. This is the prelude of the sequel of Twisted! named Vertigo. The Great Depression lasted between 1928 and 1933. There is no coincidence that "The Greatest red (besides Railrunner)" died in that timeframe. The Great Depression hit amusement parks hard. In 1930, the number of amusement parks in the US was 1800-2000. By 1935, that number dropped down to 303. Despite the fact that the depression was officially over then, the number of amusement parks continued to dwindle until 1939, then numbering only 245. It's around that time that it is considered that the golden age of amusement parks ended. Source: http://www.ultimaterollercoaster.com/coasters/history/early_1900/depression.shtml Iced Cocoa fucked around with this message at 01:29 on Apr 18, 2013 |
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Iced Cocoa posted:Extra stuff! I'm... actually impressed. While spergy attention to miniscule detail of a field the author is interested in is an unfortunate norm in books like this, using your knowledge to build a frame for the story in a subtle, non-look-how-smart-I-am way is a good thing. Rahonavis posted:I'd missed that before. Detective Black seems to know a lot about were-whatevers. Now unless he is ALSO from Amusement Park Between, I want to know more about what he's been up to before this rollercoaster of hate adventure began... I've been thinking about this. What are the odds of detective Black being Darkrail?
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C'mon guys, Rodney's totally the hero. I mean, weren't you listening to his pathos-filled ramble in the introduction that we've just come full-circle to? He's trapped in this prison BECAUSE OF WHAT HE IS!!!
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alcharagia posted:C'mon guys, Rodney's totally the hero. I mean, weren't you listening to his pathos-filled ramble in the introduction that we've just come full-circle to? He's trapped in this prison BECAUSE OF WHAT HE IS!!! Delicious snark aside. Isn't that pretty much true? Most people would expect bloodthirsty, sociopathic murderers who go on a killing spree to be locked up given the chance.
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GrizzlyCow posted:Delicious snark aside. Isn't that pretty much true? Most people would expect bloodthirsty, sociopathic murderers who go on a killing spree to be locked up given the chance. Don't you get it! That's his curse! Because of where he is from!
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Iced Cocoa posted:
I tried looking for Miranda Leek's Vertigo on Amazon, but can't seem to find it. Is it available for purchase anywhere?
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JosephWongKS posted:I tried looking for Miranda Leek's Vertigo on Amazon, but can't seem to find it. Is it available for purchase anywhere? No, it's not out yet. I could have sworn that I read somewhere that she had already written it, but was waiting for the edited version of Twisted! being published before she would publish Vertigo. Maybe in some comment I managed to read. But at least there is a lot of information online about what happens in Vertigo. She had drawn spot illustrations from it and put on DA, with description of what happens in each scene the illustration is set in along with in which part it is in. So the structure of the book is done. Maybe I'll try to compile all those snippets of scenes together for one big effort post later, because I doubt Vertigo will be published before this thread is over.
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Does Clare have a full name? I might have missed it in one of the updates. Both Rodney and the narrator call her Clare, but in the last chapter the FBI "captain" calls her miss Clare. So is her name Clare Clare? Does everyone call her by her last name? Or is she such an empty shell of a character that Miranda Leek didn't bother giving her a last name?
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Both?
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Antlerhill posted:Does Clare have a full name? I might have missed it in one of the updates. quote:This is Firetrack, a red roller coaster that lived 70 years before Railrunner, and is considered the greatest red (besides Railrunner) of all time.
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attackbunny posted:I'm actually pleased about this because before I knew that Railrunner's coaster mum is called Angeltrack and that his coaster fuckdoll is called Shadowtrack. At least now I know that it's just unoriginality rather than an Oedipus complex. I hope you manage to stick around until the final chapter of this book.
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Chapter 14 - Caged Birdquote:
Oh gently caress off Railrunner. You are revulsed by the chains that are around your “wrists”, but not by the death and destruction which have rightfully earned you those chains? Also, why are “wrists” in quote-marks? quote:
“Accidentally” killed their kind. “Accidentally”. quote:
Not “this curse”. You. You did it! Last chapter, when you were “in control” in your roller-coaster-form, you were the one who chose to “sunk his teeth into the officer’s neck, making them both fall to the floor… The officer he bit was killed instantly, and the other one died from his own bullet that bounced off Railrunner’s metal”. Take responsibility for your actions, coward. Also, “transverse” =/= “overcome”. quote:
Stupid Railrunner. Detective Black wouldn’t cross his arms “in defiance”. He’s not the one in the position of weakness here; you are. quote:
Yes it is! You are the one that’s been going around murdering people and animals and destroying property! Take responsibility for your actions. quote:
Detective Black is not frustrated. He’s just sick of your poo poo. quote:
We know that you were born, though the world would be a much better place, and there would be fewer widows and orphans, if you’d never been born. quote:
You were stable last chapter and you “sunk his teeth into the officer’s neck, making them both fall to the floor… The officer he bit was killed instantly, and the other one died from his own bullet that bounced off Railrunner’s metal”. Take responsibility for your actions! quote:
Yeah, that’s our Detective Black, always placing duty above self and never wasting time on self-pity. But what has that dastard done to you to ruin your life? quote:
What happened to “I mean no harm”? At the very least, have some gratitude to Detective Black. He saved your girlfriend from being killed by you. quote:
If you wished to be run and free, maybe you shouldn’t have murdered people. quote:
Don’t be too happy, Railrunner. Detective Black is just entrapping Thunderbark and giving him the rope with which to hang himself. quote:
No no no no no! As if it wasn’t already bad enough that he got Uncle Iroh’s power, now he gets Toph’s power as well? This is bullshit! quote:
His “fault” wasn’t “using a concussion beam”, it was murdering people! Are we seriously supposed to sympathize with this group of amoral killers? quote:
I hope Railrunner horribly mangles himself during his experiments with metal-bending. JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 22:23 on Apr 18, 2013 |
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List of damage caused by Railrunner Chapter 4 1. Shattered the beer bottles being held by his friends Buddy and Sly, injuring their hands 2. Killed a cat 3. Wrecked the ambulance that came in response to Buddy and Sly's injuries 4. Wrecked a bar, killing at least 1 civilian 5. Attacked the bar-owner 6. Attacked the police officers who came in response to the chaos, killing 5 of them Chapter 5 7. Killed and ate a bull Chapter 8 8. Attacked his girlfriend Clare Chapter 9 9. Attacked Detective Black when he jumped in front of Clare to defend her from Railrunner's assault 10. Ran through the carnival, destroying nearly everything in his path, from toppling over small rides to completely obliterating food stands 11. Killed and ate a "fat black and white dairy cow" 12. Attacked and killed a SWAT officer who came in response to the chaos 13. Attacked his girlfriend Clare again 14. Attacked Detective Black again 15. Tried to attack Thunderbark with lightning Chapter 11 16. Cold-bloodedly murdered a gang of thugs who had accosted Clare but who had swiftly surrendered after seeing Railrunner's were-roller-coaster form 17. Attacked a pair of police officers who had come in response to a report of armed robbery in the area 18. Pushed large trucks out of his way while chasing the abovementioned police officers on the road, presumably causing multiple vehicle collisions Chapter 13 19. Killed a police officer by biting him in the neck 20. Killed another police officer by deflecting a bullet back into the police officer 21. Caused mass destruction to a group of police officers by firing a “concussion beam” 22. Flattened some more police officers by “flipping their cruisers” and crushing them underneath JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 22:34 on Apr 18, 2013 |
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Absolutely fantastic chapter, I was on the edge of my seat and also crying my eyes out. I hope that meanie Detective Black gets eaten by Railrod's laser space buzzsaw-firing cannons (spoilers)
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List of Railrunner’s powers Chapter 4 1. Possesses claws that are 15-inch long and perfectly sharp Chapter 5 2. Ability to run “faster than a car at top speed” 3. Can “hear anything and everything” 4. Heightened stealth Chapter 7 5. Bend lightning 6. Bend fire 7. Super strength 8. Super agility 9. Predict when things will happen, except death 10. Sense trouble 11. Never get sick 12. Venomous 13. Sight of a dragon 14. Gain power from amusement parks and carnivals 15. Control the speed of rides and how long they last Chapter 10 16. Healing factor Chapter 11 17. Immunity to bullets Chapter 12 18. Can change at will if wearing the Augu Ra 19. Can move between the worlds when wearing the Augu Ra Chapter 13 20. Can fire concussion beams Chapter 14 21. Bend metal JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 22:45 on Apr 18, 2013 |
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So far any of the killing Railrunner has done when in control has all been situational and not direct. indicated by Third Person Narrative. It's simply a device to help the reader to disassociate Railrunner with all the killing. He bit an officer while in third person, but when in third person he accidentally fired off a concussion beam, a cop shot at him only for the bullet to bounce back at him, and he flipped those cars only in an attempt to escape. However! It does not absolve him from responsibility. When he has been in first person and human, he has deliberately put himself in the sort of situation where his "beast" in third person would destroy everyone around. There was the thing with the robbers, and now with the cops. This is a recurring theme in the book. Given how often Miranda has changed perspective it isn't spoilers that it will happen in the future. But it might be worth it to look at just when the narration goes away from First Person from the perspective of Railrunner. And JWKS, those lists are marvelous. And they're going to get longer. Though you missed two powers, both in chapter 12. 1) Can change at will if wearing the Augu Ra 2) Can move between the worlds when wearing the Augu Ra
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Iced Cocoa posted:
I've edited them in. Thanks!
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It's funny when you think about it. A very good author can make the reader empathize with the protagonist and the antagonist, and an average writer can make the reader empathize with the protagonist along, but it takes a special sort of talent to make the reader empathize with the antagonist alone.
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Edit: No, actually this was a dumb comment.
GrizzlyCow fucked around with this message at 01:55 on Apr 19, 2013 |
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JosephWongKS posted:List of Railrunner’s powers
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Nyaa posted:I like to think that Miranda is just too to deal with the mess that she wrote Railrunner into and just give him at least one super power every chapter to specifically resolve the troubles with Violences. Speaking of that, shouldn't Railrunner's powers to "Predict when things will happen, except death" and "Sense trouble" have allowed him to avoid being found by the police in the first place, let alone being captured by Detective Black's electro-net?
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Black Paranormal Detective Book V: The Deadly Ride quote:Detective Black is back with another thrilling mystery to solve! In the small town of Huntersberg, nicknamed "the city on the edge of reality", where mankind's greatest dreams and fears are realized, trouble is once again brewing. Follow Black and his trusty band of officers as discover what truly happens to lonely, neglected amusement park attractions, but beware! Not everyone who's getting on this ride is getting off... Alive! crime weed fucked around with this message at 04:52 on Apr 19, 2013 |
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Kjoery posted:Black I've got a signed copy
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JosephWongKS posted:Speaking of that, shouldn't Railrunner's powers to "Predict when things will happen, except death" and "Sense trouble" have allowed him to avoid being found by the police in the first place, let alone being captured by Detective Black's electro-net? Already there are at least two powers on the list that have been totally forgotten and will never come up again. Kjoery posted:Black Now I know what to write next NaNoWriMo. Though it might be just Book 1, because trying to write Twisted! from another POV might be too much for my sanity. Edit: Forgot yet another power of his, remotely break class in chapter 4. Iced Cocoa fucked around with this message at 11:13 on Apr 19, 2013 |
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Iced Cocoa posted:I hope you manage to stick around until the final chapter of this book. Everyone's being so meeeeean to Rodney, it's not like anyone he murdered was a named character.
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JosephWongKS posted:Speaking of that, shouldn't Railrunner's powers to "Predict when things will happen, except death" and "Sense trouble" have allowed him to avoid being found by the police in the first place, let alone being captured by Detective Black's electro-net?
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Chapter 15 - Prison Breakquote:
In a story featuring were-roller-coasters and a parallel world of living amusement park rides, somehow it’s the notion of prison guards eating cereal in jail that strikes me as being incongruous. Isn’t it a breakfast that you eat at home? Do American workers in general or prison guards in particular typically bring cereal to the workplace to eat? quote:
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NO NO NO NO NO! NOW HE GETS loving BLOOD-BENDING ON TOP OF LIGHTNING-BENDING AND METAL-BENDING? THIS IS BULLSHIT! MIGHT AS WELL GIVE HIM ENERGY-BENDING WHILE YOU ARE AT IT! quote:
This is new to me. Do police officers in America have the power to act as judge, jury and executioner as well? Though if there’s anyone whom I wouldn’t mind being Judge Dredd, it’s Detective Black. quote:
Bahahaha, how cute, Railrunner. You actually think Detective Black would die from something as minor as a hole in his chest. quote:
Actually, an “archaic army” would probably come at an opposing force from one direction. Flanking and encircling moves were actually pretty difficult to execute during the time of “archaic armies”. Also, not a single police officer so far in series has been fazed by the prospect of confronting Railrunner the twenty foot-long, twenty thousand pound roller-coaster monster who is known to be immune to bullets. If Miranda Leek is trying to make the reader despise the police in this story, she’s going about it in a very strange way. quote:
I didn’t know rocket-launchers were standard-issue weapons within the FBI. Man, I’m learning so much about the American police force from this book. quote:
I’m surprised Miranda Leek didn’t just give Railrunner “immunity to missiles” as well. quote:
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How nice of Railrunner to give his position away. I hope the police surround them next chapter and utterly destroy Railrunner and his band of murderous thugs. JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 17:34 on Apr 20, 2013 |
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List of Railrunner’s powers Chapter 4 1. Remotely shatter glass 2. Possesses claws that are 15-inch long and perfectly sharp Chapter 5 3. Ability to run “faster than a car at top speed” 4. Can “hear anything and everything” 5. Heightened stealth Chapter 7 6. Bend lightning 7. Bend fire 8. Super strength 9. Super agility 10. Predict when things will happen, except death 11. Sense trouble 12. Never get sick 13. Venomous 14. Sight of a dragon 15. Gain power from amusement parks and carnivals 16. Control the speed of rides and how long they last Chapter 10 17. Healing factor Chapter 11 18. Immunity to bullets Chapter 12 19. Can change at will if wearing the Augu Ra 20. Can move between the worlds when wearing the Augu Ra Chapter 13 21. Can fire concussion beams Chapter 14 22. Bend metal Chapter 15 23. Bend blood 24. See in the dark 25. Heightened sense of smell JosephWongKS fucked around with this message at 14:37 on Apr 20, 2013 |
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List of damage caused by Railrunner Chapter 4 1. Shattered the beer bottles being held by his friends Buddy and Sly, injuring their hands 2. Killed a cat 3. Wrecked the ambulance that came in response to Buddy and Sly's injuries 4. Wrecked a bar, killing at least 1 civilian 5. Attacked the bar-owner 6. Attacked the police officers who came in response to the chaos, killing 5 of them Chapter 5 7. Killed and ate a bull Chapter 8 8. Attacked his girlfriend Clare Chapter 9 9. Attacked Detective Black when he jumped in front of Clare to defend her from Railrunner's assault 10. Ran through the carnival, destroying nearly everything in his path, from toppling over small rides to completely obliterating food stands 11. Killed and ate a "fat black and white dairy cow" 12. Attacked and killed a SWAT officer who came in response to the chaos 13. Attacked his girlfriend Clare again 14. Attacked Detective Black again 15. Tried to attack Thunderbark with lightning Chapter 11 16. Cold-bloodedly murdered a gang of thugs who had accosted Clare but who had swiftly surrendered after seeing Railrunner's were-roller-coaster form 17. Attacked a pair of police officers who had come in response to a report of armed robbery in the area 18. Pushed large trucks out of his way while chasing the abovementioned police officers on the road, presumably causing multiple vehicle collisions Chapter 13 19. Killed a police officer by biting him in the neck 20. Killed another police officer by deflecting a bullet back into the police officer 21. Caused mass destruction to a group of police officers by firing a “concussion beam” 22. Flattened some more police officers by “flipping their cruisers” and crushing them underneath Chapter 15 23. Cruelly destroyed a mouse by manipulating the metal in its blood 24. Inflicted a minor injury on Detective Black 25. Slammed a few police offices on to a wall 26. Smashed a few more police officers with his tail 27. Knocked out a police officer by popping open his restraint 28. Attempted to crush a FBI captain by throwing a police car at him
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Detective Black, no!
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Bobbin Threadbare posted:Black may wind up getting killed off at something resembling a climax, but even if he somehow gets "converted" to Railrunner's side, the Black we know and love may end up just as dead to us as if his torso were shredded apart. Goddamnit. I knew this would happen, but I didn't expect I'd be so literal about it. JosephWongKS posted:In a story featuring were-roller-coasters and a parallel world of living amusement park rides, somehow its the notion of prison guards eating cereal in jail that strikes me as being incongruous. Isnt it a breakfast that you eat at home? Do American workers in general or prison guards in particular typically bring cereal to the workplace to eat? quote:NO NO NO NO NO! NOW HE GETS loving BLOOD-BENDING ON TOP OF LIGHTNING-BENDING AND METAL-BENDING? THIS IS BULLSHIT! MIGHT AS WELL GIVE HIM ENERGY-BENDING WHILE YOU ARE AT IT! quote:This is new to me. Do police officers in America have the power to act as judge, jury and executioner as well? quote:Bahahaha, how cute, Railrunner. You actually think Detective Black would die from something as minor as a hole in his chest.
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